FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
Hey great part
so there will be a party 😕 wonder what will happen there then

and no i dont like killing and all just some nice scenes with Jai and Bani would be nice 😳


Plz cont

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
😆 😆 😆 nice update
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
omg.. lmao.. 😆 .. this is getting interesting. JP siblings.. jai a big flirt.. omg.. and meera trying to be jais girlfriend.. omg.. and jai obsessed with roshni.. lmao.. plzzz tell me roshni is gonna try to bring JB closer.. btw i have never read romeo and juliet even for any of my classes if i have ever read a shaksepearee story it was alwayz hamlet.. but great part hun..continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

hey guys,here's another part and please ignore any spelling mistakes

part-5

University

Bani was walking with her books in her hand followed by her friend Nirali

Nir:Hurry up Bani,we don't have all day

Bani:U try carrying this books around

Nir:I can,but I don't need to

They started arguing and giggling,when Bani bumped into somenone, and her books went flying aroundThe guy was JAI

jai:Don't u have eyes?????

Bani:I do but,unfortunately,no I should say fortunately,they aren't as big as ur mouth

Jai:Well,look where u r going then.People never dare to bump into me

Bani:And they never dare to look at me

jai:How can they?Ur face is a nightmare

Bani:Did u even look at ur own?

Jai:For ur FYI,I know its perfect,so there is no need to look at it

Bani:Yeah,trying taking ur picture and ur face will crack the lens.

Jai was getting highly annoyed at this girl.True she was beautiful and if things were different, he would have been flirting with her,but this girl was too PAKAAO!!!!!!!!

Jai:Next time,missy,look where u r going

Bani:And next time remember whom u r talking to.I am Bani..

But nir caught her hand and pulled her away.

Nir:Bani,y did u need to create such a scene?

Bani:He was the one who started.Not me

NIr:Bani,please,that guy is Jai Wal..

But Bani's phone started ringing and she stated talking with Rano

Nir:UFFFFF!!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile,Jai and his friend were having there own conv

Jai:The nerve of that girl

Pushkar:I can't believe she talked to Jai Walia like that

Rohit:But u need to admit,she's hot

Jai rolled his eyes

Jai:If there is 1 word to describe her,it's mental.If i had to imagine what the Dixit's daughter is like,I will say she's probably like that Bani girl.Maybe more Pakaaor

Push:I heard Roshnoi is going to the Dixit's party

Rohit shot Pushkar a warning look,butpush ignored it

Jai:Yeah,I know,and I really wnat to go

Push:Just go in a disguise

Rohit:R u KIDDING???If the Dixit's find a Walia in their property,they will kill him

Jai:I am ready to face it for Roshni

Rohit:She just completely ignores u

Jai ignored that remark and started daydreaming about his love.Rohit rounded on Pushkar

"Are u trying to get him killed"he hissed?

Push:NO,when he sees all the beautiful girls in the party,he will be cured from this mad obsession

Rohit:Well,I hope u r right

I need to go now.Hop u have enjoyed this part.Pls comment.Bye

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
No cmments 😭
I can't stop laughing for some reason 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
great ff


jst read alll d parts now

aww jai and bani are sooo cute

and bani's first day in skoool was peoper class

ctn soon

and plzzz dnt kill jai and bani like d real romeo and juliet
hated d fact dat dey died
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: damilola

great ff


jst read alll d parts now

aww jai and bani are sooo cute

and bani's first day in skoool was peoper class

ctn soon

and plzzz dnt kill jai and bani like d real romeo and juliet
hated d fact dat dey died



don't worry hun,I am not Ekta,or maybe I can take some advice from her 😉
damilola thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
^^^^^^ nooo

dnt take ANYYYY advice from her !!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Hey nice part
soo jai will be going to the party for roshni 😡 what does he see in her 😕

cant wait for the next part


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am sorry for my absence.I am afraid that this part is boring,but please cope with me and better and lovelier parts r coming soon

Part-10

Dixit Mansion
There was a party going on in full blast in Dixit Mansion.All the business tycoons and famous people were there.But the biggest business family, the Walias weren't there.It wasn't a surprise.But what was a surprise was seeing 3 young boys coming into a party.Actually a Walia and 2 friends of a Walia.All of them were wearing baggy T-shirts and had shaggy long hair(wig).They were about to go into he center of the party when they saw Tarun Dixit coming towards them


Tarun:I don't remember seeing u clowns coming into the party
Jai:Uncle...
Tarun:UNCLE?????????Do I look like a uncle to u clowns?

Jai(thinking)DUH!!Just look at those wrinkles
Jai:"Nahi ... bhai...umm. u see that girl with the brown hair over there" and he pointed to Roshni in the distance,"woh..umm..I am her boyfriend."

Tarun:Accha?We will find out about that pretty soon
and he was about to call Roshni when Karan called him t come over

Rohit:PHEWW!!!!!!!!That was close
Pushkar:Let's go over there, away from this man
The 3 friends moved into the center of the party and stated looking for Roshni

Pushkar:Man!!There r such HOT girls here Jai,Why r u looking for that Roshni?
Jai rolled his eyes at him

Rohit:Hey,there's the paakao girl over there and he pointed towasrds Bani
Jai stopped in his tracks
Jai:What on earth is SHE doing HERE????
Pushkar:Only one ay to find out

Jai:R u gonna ask her or something
Pushkar:Man u really lost it.But ofcourse u had really lost it when u stated running after Roshni

Pushkar tapped a nearby waiter's shoulder.The waiter turned to look at him
Waiter:Yes,How may I help u sir?
Pushkar:"Umm,do u happen to know who that girl is" and he pointed towards Bani


The waiter looked at Pushkar bewildered
Waiter:Why she is the only child of Karna Dixit,Bani Dixit
Pushkar was shocked when he heard this


Rohit and JAi had heard this and they were just as bewildered.Jai didn't know what to feel.Should he feel angry at the the way that Dixit talked to him today at uni?Should he feel ecstatic that the girl whomhe had decided to flirt with next was a Dixit?


Something inside jai was telling him to talk to her, but he pushed that thought away

Please comment 😳

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