FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18 - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey just caught up with both parts😃........
happy that jai saved bani frm cobra😆.........
sameer😡 😡 😡
plzz cont.soon😊
Edited by koolgal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
great update.
please please please continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks for da comments guys. Tell me if this is getting boring. Well there willbe no more pranks on JB, but on the villians okay? From now on the love chapter starts

Part-20B

And what was more, all this happened in front of the stormy grey eyes of Jai Walia.

And boy, o boy, he didn't like what he saw one bit.

In one swift moment he went over to bani and sameer's table and coughed. Both sameer and bani looked up at jai, sameer with annoyance and bani with relief

Jai: Umm, bani can I pls talk to u for a second?

"Yea sure!!", bani nearly shouted

JB went out of the cafe and out of sameer's sight, which clearly annoyed him

Outside in front of one of the shops in the malls, Jai and bani are having their conversation

Jai(trying to keep his voice steady): Umm, bani did u mind that I took u away from ur boyfriend?

Bani(shocked): What boyfriend Jai?

Jai: That sameer or paneer, whatever his name is

Bani was trying very hard not to burst out laughing seeing the expression on jai's face. Who u would have thought that her enemy would get so edgy seeing her with her so called boyfriend. Did that mean that he......??????
Bani shuddered at her thoughts, and brought her mind to the conversation with Mr. Handsome

Bani: His name is sameer, and no he is not my boyfriend, but my friend. Well, today it looks like he went a bit overboard

Jai sat on one of the benches and indicated bani to do the same. She gladly sat down beside him and could smell his strong cologne. She felt as if she could drown in that smell. Again bani was shcoked at her own thoughts and decided to keep such thoughts at bay

Jai: Then why don't u tell him to stop?

Bani: Well I was too shocked to react, but thankfully SuperJai came and saved me

Jai grinned and bani smiled at him. But that smile vanished as soon as it came. Jai turned to look at what she was staring at, and saw a few people staring at them. But when they saw jai looking at them directly in the eye, they ashamedly turned away

Jai(angrily): What's their problem?

Bani(softly): Its a big shock for them to see the heirs of the two fighting families of mumbai together in the mall chatting like friends

At the mention of the word "freinds", JB looked at each other and while looking at each other's eyes, both of them saw all that had happened between them so far: the insults, the jokes, the pranks, the name-calling and the fights. Well u can't exactly call that "friends".

Both Jai and Bani burst out laughing at the "sweet" memories and more people gave them quick shocked glances

Jai: well if u want to be friends bani, I have no problem

Bani(hesitaingly): Okay but that means no more practical jokes and stupid pranks okay?

Jai mockly saluted her and said"Yes ma'am"

Bani lightly hit him in the chest.

Bani: Well Jai what's ur cell number?

the two new friends exchanged numbers and after saying goodbye went their sperate ways with huge grins pasted on their mouths, looking as if they had just conquered the whole world

Little did they know that someone had observed the whole scenario, and that person did not like what she saw one bit.

"Jai u r mine, and only mine!Don't even go near that bani. And bani stay away from my Jai!", the person hissed before going away from that place

Pls leave ur comments guys

Edited by Twinkle_23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh that's a sweet update... finally the two enemies has become good friends... 😳 😆 ... the first step towards love... 😳 ... nice... 👏 ... do cont soon Twinkle... 😃 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part.......
so they r frnds now 😛 .........is that person pia 😡
plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
twinkle great part hun.. omg so JB love story startting..i mena romeo and juliet love story starting.. personally ive never read romeo and juliet not even in school.. ive heard about it.. and this is giving me an idea how romeo and juliet is soo great of a story.. now i wanna go and read it.. lol.. but yes i have read other shakepeare stories because of classes.. lol.. anywayz im guessing the girl is roshni??? right?? lol. anywyaz great part.. continue sooon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyy
really great part,
please please please continue sooon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
gr8 ff
wonder who tht person is?
continue soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh how cool, they are friends now. I hope Bani doesn't fall for stupid Sameer the Paneers tricks (blame Jai it is his fault he gave me this great name). I think the person glaring at them was Meera bahi and not Rosh.

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