FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18 - Page 14

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome update.
Can't wait for the next part.

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago

HAH!!!!!!!!U guys are all wrong about the person, except Florina(ffern022). See???I am not good at keeping secrets. Oh well, enough of my bbhak bhak, and on with the update😆. I am afraid I might mix the updates of R&J, with my othernew ff by mistake😛.Hope u enjoy, and pls ignore the mistakes

Part-20A

Walia Mansion

(my hubby, a.k.a jai's room)😆

Jai was trying to read the chapter that his professor had instructed their class to read. but his mind kept going back to the mall incident. The words in front of him made no sense, because his mind was in dreamland. Giving up on his book, he took out his cell phone, and went through his contact list. When he reached Bani's name, his naughty mind hit the jackpot.They might be friends, but that didn't mean that he couldn't............

Meanwhile,

Bani was trying to organise the clothes in her walk-in closet, all though, everything was in its place. It was just an excuse to be alone, and to think of him................

The sound of her cell phone ringing brought her back from dreamland(JB just love going their😉), and she hurriedly went to pick her cell up, when her ring tone stopped. It was missed call. She picked up her phone, and saw that it was an unknown number. Sighing, she put her cell phone on charge, and sat on her bed. She was wishing that Jai would call her.

At that moment her phone rang again, and it was the same unknown number. She picked it up. You can only hear bani's side of the conversation😛

"Hello"

"Yes,yes I am Bani"

"WHAT???"

'Who are u?Kon hain aap?"(I am very bad at hindi, so I don't even try typing it )

'What..where....who.....when?????"

"Theek hai, I am going there....yes, yes I wll bring it"

"No no, I won't tell anyone"

She disconnected the line, and quickly got her purse, and hurried out of her room.

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Grumbling, jai again tried Bani's cell phone, but she wasn't picking up.

"Damn it", he muttered, and stopped trying to call her.

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Bani parked her car, got out and frantically looked around for the woman who called her

And then she spotted her. She was standing a few feet away from her, and she was looking at her very deeply.Bani knew she was the woman, because she was wearing the navy blue saree, and had a brown purse. and her hair was left loose. There was something oddly famaliar about that woman, but Bani couldn't put her finger on it

Bani quickly made her way towards the woman

Bani: i am here. Now lets go. Where is he???

Woman(in a high-pitched voice): Follow me young girl, follow me. He is in a very bad condition.

Bani followed the woman to a apartment, which was very old-lookiing. They made their way inside, and, eneterd a very shabby room, whcih was very dark and dusty. It gave Bani the shivers, just standing her

Woman: Follow me bani

agaiin bani obliged and the woman led her into a bedroom, which was equally shabby, but more darker than the one which they had left. The woman indicated bani to sit on the bed. and after hesitating a little while, she sat.

The woman disappeared, and came back with a framed picture of someone(I ain't telling u now😛). She showed the picture to Jai

Woman:Is this ur friend?

Bani: Yes this is jai

Woman: Well he was supposed to be sleeping here, but I am afraid he ran away

Bani: WHAT?????????Why did u bring me here then?

Woman(mischeviously): Because I look just like him, and I am sure u will take me as a freind

Bani(irritated): Stop talking nonsense!!!

Woman: Really? Look at my eyes dear? Aren't they grey and silver like jai's

Bani:Yes

Woman: And balck is my favorite color like Jai, and I also like playing pranks like Jai. And both of us have very big egos

The woman then took of her wair, which was a wig all along, and Jai stood there in the navy blue saree, grinning away

Bani: ARGHHHHHHHHHH!

And she started punching jai everywhere, but he didn't mind at all

When she had somewhat calmed down, Jai said "U really fell for it Bani"

bani(huffily): I said no pranks mister

Jai realized that Bani was upset, and he sat down beside her and took her face in his hands and......................

Pls comment, good or bad

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Posted: 17 years ago
and...... started laughing at how much she was crying. 😆 Sorry I know bad joke but that just seems like something Jai would do 😃 . As for guessing it was Meera Bahi and not Rosh, simple, Rosh is to straight forward and loves to make a scene she would of just gone straight up and yelled at them (not to mention she is ticked off at both Jai and Bani so would probably harm both not just Bani). Also agar bahi humara Rani ki jaan lena chati ho to behan kissa peche renge.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwnnn.. jai taht was a terrible prank.. and bani agar dost ek dusre ke saath pranks nahin karenge tho phir kiske saath karenge pagli.. lol.. anyway zgreat part hun.. continue sooon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
hahahahaha. 😆
that was really funny.
I really didn't see that coming.
please continue sooon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww..such a cute part..
Please continue soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Twinkle ... how could you stop there... 😭 ... so not fair ... it was a lovely update ... very cute and full of pranks ... do cont soon... 👏 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
kaha ho dear
please continue soon

waiting for next part

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks everyone for the comments 😃! I really appreciate them. Now I know some of you ahem...ahem..okay all of u didn't like where I stopped, but blame Tam for that. She is the master of stopping at cliffhangers, and I am a mere student 🤓. I took lessons from her without the guru knowing😛. So tam, if u don't go out there and start updating your ff, just be ready for Twinkle the Trickster😈. Got it? Anyway, this part is for tam for all the ttrouble I have given her😆😆😆. Enjoy

Part-21B

Jai realized that Bani was upset, and he sat down beside her and took her face in his hands and looked lovingly in her choclate brown eyes. Lowering his face to hers he kissed her softly and very gently, savoring her lips. Bani was surprised, but she responded to his kiss, which caused it to become very passionate and demanding. They were kissing each other with a hunger which neither of them knew about, or had discovered until now. It was blissful oblivion being in each others arms like that.

Jai stroked bani's hair with one hand and with the other he carrased her waist while Bani brought both her hands to Jai's neck bringing him closer to her.

Just then, the sound of Bani's mobile caused the two lovebirds(yep that's what they are. No more enemies) to spring apart, and fall down from the bed. Bani irritatedly looked at her cell phone while still in a daze, and got more irritated when she saw meera's name flash on the screen. Talk about bad timing!!!

Jai moved his hand through his hair, ruffling it, and looked at Bani with questioning eyes

Bani: Its my stupid cousin Meera.

Jai: Well aren't u going to accept her call?

Bani: Fine!

And she pressed the green button(don't know what to call it😆), and reluctantly put the phone to her ear

Meera(shrilly): Bani where were you?

Bani(grumpily): In peace unitl now

Meera(panicking): Why is there a World War 3 now?

Bani: There will be if u don't tell me why you called me

Meera: Oh...umm..u see....ew...arr..ummm

Bani(angrily): I don't want to waste my time listening to u try to sing meera.

Meera(hurriedly): Well you see, I got a new Salman Khan movie!

Bani groaned? Why was she cursed with a cousin like Meera? Why on earth did she have to be related to her?

"Look Meera, just stop it will u? Don't talk with me unless you have got something sensible to speak about okay? Bad bye!"

and she ended the call with sigh of relief.

"Bad bye?", jai asked looking amused?

"What's so funny?"she snapped?

"Why are you talking to your cousin like that?"

"Because she wanted to tell me that she got a new Salman Khan movie!!!"

"I thought most girls liked Salman Khan?"

"No way, he is too old for me. I like younger ones like Zac Efron and Jesse Mccartney. They are soooo gorgeous and young!" Bani said purposefully emphasizing the word 'gorgeous'

"besides, I love Zac's eyes, and jesse smile is so cute, and both of them are such great dancers. they are sooo dreamy", bani continued, all the time looking at Jai who seemed to be really annoyed

Here they had just had their first lovely kiss, and she was gushing about how other guys' smile and eyes! If they were in a cartoon, u could see steam coming out of Jai's ears. But he knew how to make her pay😉

Jai(with a purposeful dreamy look in his eyes): Well, I don't know about you Bani, but I just dig Aishwariya, and Ashley is so HOT!! She's one sexy blonde! And both of their smiles are sooo........

Now it was bani's turn too fume. If he liked blondes so much, why did he kiss her?

Jai(suddenly serious): Bani how did u feel about...urm..what just happened now?

Bani(blushing): Wha...what do u mean?

Jai: I mean if u seriously like me or not

Bani: Well, do u like me?

Jai: Of course I do bhootni! How could I not? I was enchanted by your wild hair and blood on your lips, and those hideous teeth of yours the minute my eyes landed on you

Bani(irritatedly): Well, now I am going to land on you

And she did. She jumped on top of him, and begin to tickle him mercilessly, until he was saying sorry over and over again

When Bani somewhat relaxed, jai started tickling her, which started the Tickle-a-thon between them.As they laughed away without a care in the world, they knew deep in their hearts, this was how they were supposed to. Closer than ever.

Okay I hope that made up for the last part, and if you want I can stop this ff right here. But if u want more, you are in for a roller coaster ride

Edited by Twinkle_23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Finally ... ur blaming me for everything... 😕 😆 ... when I'm an angle...😆... my updates are not cliffhangers... 😆 ... but ur update definitely was...

...one good thing about cliffhanger is that ... next update starts from there... right! ... 😉 ...

... so chaileji (I think this is what students are called...😆...) ur guruji's blessings are always with you... 😆 ...

me will be updating one of my FF today ... if I finish writing it... ok enough bak bak...

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The beginning was just awesome... hai... they shared their first kiss...😳 😍 ❤️... just wonderful... until that bhootni Meera bai called in ... 😡... what a timing! ... 😕 ... liked the jealousy part as well... thanks for this part...🤗... do cont soon... 👏...



Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago

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