FF: MIRAGE part 41pg53Updated 20/04

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hemanshi

@hemanshi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#141

first of all
i never really comment on ff's but urs has compelled me to..i loved both of ur fan fics..u are really really talented..i mean feel like i m at the place watching the scenario..its really brilliant..
but one thing abt this one though..i know jay is supposed to be jacka** and all but i wish there was a bit to know him and his thinking and all u know..like i feel i know bani and the way she thinks and her character but jay..i mean this whole mystery around him is making me like confused abt him uknow..
do i make sense or not?? see this is the reason i don't comment much or write fan fics..cause i have too much to say but i cannot like sum it down put them down properly u know..
but anyhow pnt of all this bhashan being..love ur fan fic, can't wait for u to continue..
good luck

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soodr

@soodr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#142

Oh wow that was great, i love ur FF!!
Jai is so stupid sometimes...he needs to control his anger!! im glad bani quit the job, but i bet he wont let her go that easily!! Can't wait to read what happens next...please update soon!! xx

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Pooja_fren

@Pooja_fren

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Posted: 17 years ago

#143

Now how can I wait for next part?
Lovely esp. the last one
Lets c what jai will do.
cant wait
thanksss

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#144

Jippieeeeeeeee!!!!!
Bani hit Jai!!! At least he will have a glimpse of the women he is dealing with!! Come on Bani one more!!

Love the way she screamed at the doctor. That was so adorable. And the dancepart was described so well. Full of life and energy!
The familyparts are really good. bring a smile every time!

Thanks for the update
Bye
Ranjana

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

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Posted: 17 years ago

#145

OMG..she slapped him...actually more than a shocking one, I feel very happy..He really deserves it..
But I am more worried about her now..What will he do now? Glad she quit the job, but I dont think he will let her go so easily...
Loved the hospital scene n Bani's outburst at the doctor. The family atmosphere was also good.
Rama

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hearme21

@hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#146

Wowww, Bani slapped Jai. You go girllllll! I am so happy, finally someone to put him in place. There's gonna be hell to pay but someone had to begin somewhere! Bani is turning out exactly the way I wanted her to be, three cheers for that 😉
Eagerly eagerly awaiting the next update!

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pooja1_76

@pooja1_76

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Posted: 17 years ago

#147

Wow Bani i must say she is my brave Bani.
I would have done the same and he asked for it
if they were talking in private none of this would have happen.

can't wait for the next part.

pooja