FF: MIRAGE part 41pg53Updated 20/04 - Page 13

I am sorry I missed three updates,, I feel bad for bani ,, iam glad pia walked in on them when they were abt to kiss, claiming her as his in the conference was too much , they aren't even 2gether,, I feel all the pple around her are cheating her nachiket who knows the truth but cares too much abt his brother to steer her away from jai,, ranveer who isnt thinking of the consequences in it for bani and only thinking of the happy ending which has slim chance of happening even kavs, who saw how he was with pia and yet only warns her instead of putting her foot down and also encourages her by saying are u afraid of pia ,, her mother who iam not sure knows all the details abt jai,, and now the grandparents who are also knowing the rumors abt jai and still no action,, and then there is jai he thinking of her as clingy type and planning to stay away from her after claiming her ,, why does all these pple care abt jai so much and not do anything and are expecting bani to suffer thru it all and change jai,,, I actually like pia in this ,, she is manipulated by jai and yet now trying to out smart him at his own game,, pls continue soon

awesum parts 👏
loving ur ff 😃
eagerly waiting for next part

That was fantastic absolutely
Everytime I read word mirage i could never open it dont know why but today I did it and realised what mistake i had done.
I didnt realise when i reached pg 17 and there was no more to read.
Its simply Fab but what is it with Jai that he is like this.
Cant wait for next one
Thanksssssssssssss

Please Please Please update soon. I can't wait for the next part.

Originally posted by: btkr

Yuck, yuck, yuck to the power gazillion. The guy almost kissed B and then had a tryst with Pia in a secret room in his office???? We want a new hero. This Jai is not worth the dust under Bani's feet. Sigh....that being said, guess you will repair his character. Not that I am going to like him anyway 😡 😆 Hope Bani really reforms the guy.
Great part Ezther.

Hey bktr, thanks for the comment. I knew this would gross a lot of people out...well sort of and I know it seems that Jai is the worst of the worst. But I will try to make him less disgusting than he is right now.

thanks for the comment still.............😉😉

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hi,

Nice update ;) Bani should stay away from Jai...better still find another place of work. She has some true friends and family, this Jai character is bad for her...

Don't think Bani should be reforming him... he is a grown man, let him figure out himself ;)

Thanks,

Nimmie

hey nimmie!!!!! I would stay away from Jai myself but for Bani to do that then there would be no kasahm se now would there?😆😆


I know Jai is disgusting but let's give him a bit of time to change na?😉😉
Thanks for the comment!!

Originally posted by: purpletoxic

oh god i hate jai but i loved the part when he said boyfriends!!!!! make him jeleous big time jeleousssssss and by next week i will be in india so i wouldnot get to read the next chapter so i guess i have to catch up when i come back until then u have a good summer.

I'm sorry baba!! Jai has his reasons...sorry I haven't seen the comment in a while so I hope you have a safe trip to India and have a wild time there....it's my dream to come to India one day with my friend Tanish but now he's in Singapore😕😕😕

thanks for the comment and will wait to see one from you when you do come back.
Have fun!!!!!!!!😉😉

Originally posted by: hipreet

gosh jai is disgusting.....eww he wants bani n also others....yuck...hate pia too

bani should be careful....i think she deserves much more better than this

great part.....cont soon

hey Hipreet, nice to hear from you. If it's any consolation I don't like Pia either but each of them have their reasons for being who they turned out to be....

thanks for the encouragement dear, will update right now!

Originally posted by: harshi21

Please tell me she does not end up with this jerk... girl deserves a lot better.

Heeo Harshi 21, i beleive you are a new commentator/silent reader.

Thanks for joining our family here!😊

There is still a ways to go before we come to level ground, but bare with me on this FF with the Jai I have created!

Thanks for the comment again!😃