SS: Triplet Trouble(Completed Pg 1&2) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt and thes kids tell u I am loving them 😳 😳 😳 grt part dear
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Bristy,
I loved it, awesome!!!
The lil devils are sooo cute πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful story pls cont soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Bristy,

Great start. I already love these kids. They are sooo cute and sweet.

Waiting for the next part.

Kiran
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bondhu!...new ss...woo hoo...kintu ami toram shate rag korechi...hmph! 😑😑...tumi notun ss post korla, kinu amake bolo nayi...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...ami kintu kandbo 😭...😭...😭...😭...ok...onek drama holo...now let me comment πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...

first let me thank mamta for punishing you for what ever you did...and that too with a ss...haila...punishment for u...but humara treat...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...keep getting punished...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...

lol...the walia trio are just something else...the ship is about to board and no intruders...πŸ˜†...sorry jai...no chance on that ship...vaise bhi...jodi jai oyi noukar modhe uthe jaai, tahole toh nouka dube jabe 🀣...sorry...i just picture him as gool gaapa...🀣🀣🀣...lol...mota shota 🀣...lol...im so mean...haila the 3V's are here too...veer, varun and vidya...woo hoo...aab toh aur bhi maaza hai...πŸ₯³...its just too cute...the 6 little rascals...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...he he he...they are going on holiday are they...πŸ˜†...they are so innocent...its refreshing to see that...you know what...i agree with krishna...when parents say next time...that 'next time' never comes...πŸ˜•...its not cool that they do that......

cant wait to see what the next update holds...hope it comes soon...
JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys, I almost forgot about this SS. Today I came upon this when I was checking through my word documents, I remembered that I've not finished this one. So I sat down and wrote the rest in an hour πŸ˜†, I know it's a bit stupid, but still let me know your opinion about it if you've read it πŸ˜‰




(After the first page )


"You have spoilt our children..aap uski haar baat mante hain." Bani complained at Jai who was reading the newspaper. "Now what will I do? Subha se bachcho kuch nahin khaya"


"To maine kaha kuch khaya hain?" Jai asked without taking his eyes from the newspaper.


"Who cares about you? Anyway, few days without food will actually help you.." Bani replied.


This time Jai removed the paper, "What? You are telling that I'm fat? I'm not Fat!"


"Nehi, aap to bilkul fat nahin hain, but in a few days you can apply for Bhalu's role in Jungle Book." Bani giggled.


"Bani, you haven't just said this? You told me Bhalu? Wait till I get you."


Bani screamed and ran towards the study, "Bachcho, can you take me in your cruise? Your Papa is behind me.....Aaaaaah!" she screamed again as Jai grabbed her from behind. "Bachcho get out of that stupid 'boat'...we are going on a vacation!"


"YeaH! Three cheers for Papa!" Atharva whooped in the air..."come on everyone, we are going.....I'm hungry now...let's goo....food!"


The kids also cheered and followed Atharva, running towards the dining room.


"Mr Walia! Why did you say that? We are going on a vacation? Why?" Bani protested.


"Because Bhalu needs some alone time with his wife." he smirked dangerously, Bani hid her face in his chest.



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"Is everyone ready? Where's Krishna, Vidya and Ganga?" Bani asked.


"Girls mom!" Atharva yawned, "you know how long they take."


Bani rolled her eyes, "Chup! I'm also a girl, I'v been ready before all of you!"


"But you are not a girl, aap to Mom hain." Veer said. Atharva showed him a thumbs up. Bani pulled Atharva's ear, "Like father, like son."


"I'll check on them." Bani said and went towards the girls' room. But they were not there. So she went to her own room and her eye popped out, Krishna was trying to wear one of Bani's saree on top of skirt and tops. She was also wearing one of Bani's high heeled sandals. Ganga was trying to help Krishna, messing the saree even more. Vidya was taking out matching bangles and lipstick.


"Oh no!" the three of them groaned as soon as they saw Bani.


Bani stood there with her hands on her hips, "Yeh sab kya ho raha hain?"




"Mom, I just wanted to try this on.." Krishna said sheepishly.


Suddenly Bani burst out laughing. "Chalo, we are getting late, honestly, isn't there any better time than this?"



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After a 7 days vacation in a ranch of Northern Arizona, sight seeing in the beautiful grand canyon, and most of all spending the time with the kids, Jai and Bani came back to Mumbai. There was certain sadness about leaving the vacation place and coming back to the monotonous routine life, but there was off course the pleasure of returning home.


But that was not the problem, the problem was that the kids still had 15 days left of their vacation.


............


"I'm terribly bored" Veer yawned, "The vacation was too short....Hey Atharva, do you have a plan?"


Atharva nodded importantly, "Of course, I've got a plan, after all JW's son."


"So what the plan is JW's son?" Krishna rolled her eyes.


"We'll go and attack Dad's office and we'll take over.' Atharva said importantly.


"Ooh? What will happen then?" Krishna asked, while combing Ganga's hair, in an attempt to be the Big sister.


"Arey, we'll declare vacation for a month! Then Dad won't have to work and we'll go in a vacation again." Atharva said excitedly.


"Wow, nice idea Bhaia." Ganga giggled, the others nodded.


"So, we're ready to do some action...wait, I'll bring the weapons." Atharva winked and ran to his room.


After 10 minutes, Atharva was handing the others toy guns and what not. "Veer, you and me will take this water guns, the elders are scared of getting their dress wet, and Varun, you'll carry this gun, you'll fire the sparks from behind, and they'll think it's an original gun! Krishna, you're going to have a lot of water ballons, you'll drop them on anyone who'll try to stop us."


"What will me and Vidya do?" Ganga asked impatiently.


"Ooh, you are staying at home, you're too young." Atharva said.


"WHAT? You'll left us behind? Never, I"m going to dad and tellling him all abou this." Ganga retorted.


Atharva roared, "Ok, ok, you two will take lots of marble, roll them if anyone comes in our way. Ok?"


'Better." Ganga said.



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"Ok, everyone? We're attacking the WGI now!" Atharva said as they got out of the car. It has taken them a lot of time to convince Bani to let them go out alone. Later Bani agreed as Purva offered to take them out. Purva was a bit shocked when they told that they want to go to WGI, bu tshe agreed thinking that the kids might want to meet Jai or someone else. But she was stunned as Atharva said those words. Before she could understand anything, Krishna took a water ballon from her bag and threw it in Purva's face who screamed as with the loud bang the ballon burst and water started to dripping from her face. The kids shot out of the car, screamed, "sorry chachi" and ran through the main entrance.


"God Job Krish! Now come on, everyone...straight to the top floor!" said Atharva the commander.


Soon they were in the elevator going up. The man who operates the elevator looked suspiciously at them, but he knew better than to tell something to the boss's kids.


As soon as they got in the top floor, Atharva said, Krish you'll manage Aditya Uncle and, he's easy one, Varun you take this kids and attack Nachiket Chacha and me and Veer will take Dad.


"You are going to hurt my Nana?" Vidya demanded.


"You are going to hurt Papa?" Ganga demanded.


"That's why I didn't want to bring kids." Atharva groaned, "do as I tell you. Krish go...Veer come buddy."



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Aditya was shocked to see Krishna banging open the door. "What happened, de...."


"SPLASH"


He was hit by a water ballon. Aditya stood there speechless, water dripping from his hair, wetting his suit. "What?"


"SPLASH" a seond one followed. "Get out before I finish you off...I'm taking over." Krishna shouted and threw a third one..."SPLASH"


"Jai? Jai!" Aditya ran out of there towards Jai's room, calling his name.



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"Raise your hand before we shoot you." Vidya exclaimed as Varun pointed the gun towards Nachiket.


"Kids, I don't have time to play with you." he said, smiling. "I'm busy now, I'll play with you when I'll be back home." He was standing leaning against the table, "I'm going for a coffeee.""


"This is not a game, here we go." Ganga shouted and rolled the marbles on Nachiket's way.


"HeeeeeeeeeeeeeelP." Nachiket screamed as he tripped over the marbles and fell down on the floor with a loud thud.


........................


"We're taking over your business, Mr Walia." Atharva said seriously, pointing the gun towards Jai. Jai blinked few times as Atharva and Veer pointed both their guns on each side of him head.


"Boys, what is this? Remove those toy guns from my head." Jai said.


"Fire!" Atharva yelled and both he and Veer pulled the triggers, making the water come out of the guns.


"Jai.." Aditya came inside the cabin, wet from head to toe. He sighed as he saw a stunned Jai, the boys on each side of him.


"Beware Dad!" Krish came inside and threw a ballon to Jai.


"SPLASH!!!!!!!"


Nachiket came in messaging his head and Vidya, Ganga Varun followed grinning. Atharva winked and said, "ATTACK!"




All the kids dropped whatever they were carrying. The boys pushed Aditya and Nachiket making them fall in the floor and started punching them with all their might. The girls did the same with Jai.


They tried to push them away. It was hard as they were outnumbered and they were afraid of hurting any of the kids. At last when they were finished, they get off. Aditya and Nachiket both had a black eye, and Jai's forhead had a little cut, their clothes wet and torn.


"Ha! We've taken over WGI." Atharva said.


Not so fast." said a cold voice. The kids went silent and looked up to face a raging Bani standing on the door. Bani took a step forward and Ganga rolled the marbles. Bani dropped with a thud.


"Oh no!" Atharva whispered seeing his mother's murderous avatar, "wrong target Ganga!"


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There's no need to tell the rest of the story. I guess you all know what happens when our loving, patient and caring Moms get serious angry πŸ˜†πŸ˜†




The End!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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🀣 will come back n comment after I finish my laughing marathon πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice story
pls continue na
I won't to see what bani will do to those devils
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm trying my best not to laugh out loud, bcoz my boss is sitting behind at the mo...
Funny stuff! Keep it up! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Brilliant SS dear! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Has has ke rula diya tumne 🀣 I loved it! Bani's Bhalu remark was clever! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Those kids are something else taking over WGI! Man I can't stop laughing! πŸ˜† I hope you write more stuff like this bcos you're a fantastic writer! πŸ˜‰


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Edited by Vedo - 17 years ago

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