SS: Triplet Trouble(Completed Pg 1&2)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ahem, Mamta Di....here goes my punishment...😔😔


The story you want....I'm putting it in 2/3 segment...


Triplet Trouble


Jai Walia turned in his sleep and hugged his wife sideways. She tried to push his hand away, but he didn't bugged. What's better than a peaceful Sunday morning, he thought contently.


"BAAAAAANNNNNNNNGGG!!!!!"


He jumped up on the bed hearing the loud noise. Before he could come out of the shock, he heard voices outside singing,


"O majhi re…..O majhi re…"


He was curious hearing the kids singing this song. He glanced at his wife. She was sleeping peacefully, not a bit affected by the noise.He got up and put on a robe and opened the door.


At first he saw nothing, then he realized that the sound was coming from the study. He entered and his eyes popped out. The three devils of them have successfully turned the study table upside down. The surface was now flat against the floor, the legs upwards. Now, they were standing on the hollow of the under part of the table. Krishna was trying to tie a white piece of cloth in one of the legs of the table.




Atharva, her twin brother was pretending to be the sailor of the 'boat' and was looking through his toy binoculars.


Ganga, the youngest one was giggling and watching her older brother & sister on mischief.




"Atharva, Krishna, Ganga!" He yelled, "What are you doing?"




Atharva, a 10 year old kid, who resembles his father in every way possible said in a huffy tone, "Our ship is about to board. We'll take no intruders here. Our passengers are yet to come."




Just as he said it, three more figures came running. Veer, Varun & Vidya got in the hollow of the poor table almost pushing Jai away.


The three girls at once started to sing,




Pyaar ke kasti main hain
Lahro ki masti main hain
Pawan ki shor shor main
Chali hum jor jor main
Gagan se doooor......




Jai didn't know whether he should laugh or cry. He tried once again to make them come out of that table. But they refused point blank.




Shrugging, Jai left to call Bani. She'll know what to do!


............




"Bachcho...come out!" Bani said sternly.




The kids paid no attention and kept singing songs and pretending to be on a boat.




Both Jai and Bani tried lovingly, sternly, crossly, angrily but no avail. They didn't even budged.




"What do you want?" Bani asked, tired of it.




"Mamma, we are on our vacation. We need to go on a holiday. Since you and Papa refused to take us, we are going on our own." Ganga giggled.




Oh, so this is what all these are about!



"Kids, listen, we are busy right now. We'll go next time."




"The next time never comes." Vidya said innocently.




Bani gave up, "Ok, do whatever you want. At least come down for food."




"NO....we'll eat on our way." Krishna said moodily.


"Bhook hartal on a boat." Atharva winked.



Bani sighed, the boy hasn't left any of his father's characteristics.




(To Be Contd)


Give me ideas 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Meghs, this was fantastic...I think I should thank Mamta for having given you such an punishment😆😆😆
The kids are so naughty n cheeky at the same time..Can imagine JWs kids being like this😆😆😆 I am just visualizing the whole study room scenario😆😆😆
So can u let me know if there is just one more place in their Kasthi?? I dont mind joining u see😆
I will also then sing along with them....

Aai - ri - shi - chu - ru - ru
Haiyahoo - haiyahoo - haiyahoo
Pyaar ki kashti mein, lehron ki masti mein,
Pawan ke shor shor mein, chale hum zor zor mein,
Gagan se door…….
Gagan se door…..

Will let u know agar kuch ideas aaya tho....
Rama

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hahaha... I loved it!

I'm sure this is an experince you have had... I can imagine naughty Birsty wreaking havoc in her father's study! 🤣

They're going sailing on a boat... mujhe bhi le chalo... somewhere hot! 😆

Loved it... ideas? Havn't got any... will tell you if I come up with anything!😛

Edited by bugs_bunny - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆

loved it
aww d kidz are so cute

bless
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start...waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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What a wonderful thing to read early in the morning.

Reminded me of my childhood times, 😆 😆 😆
But i didn't wreck the studies, i was trouble for my mom, with her sarees 😆 😆 😆 and much more but i was good bachi 😳

atharva, krishna and ganga are so cute, i want to go on a cruise, how about to thailand, can i join them 😳 i need to go somewhere warm away from the rain and storm

can imagine jai's study being upside down😆 and him getting the shock, on sunday morning with loud music, lucky he didn't follow off the bed 😆

have krishna and ganga copy their mom, and wear her clothes and shoes, and atharva be his dad 😆


atharva can open one of the locks, with a pin or something but i don't think he will need that

water fight is good with water balloons, and guns
please write soon
Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was funny pls cotninue soon
davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ofcourse



Meghs, this was fantastic...I think I should thank Mamta for having given you such an punishment😆😆😆

*sigh* Kisika Saaza....kisika Maaza....😛

he kids are so naughty n cheeky at the same time..Can imagine JWs kids being like this😆😆😆 I am just visualizing the whole study room scenario😆😆😆So can u let me know if there is just one more place in their Kasthi?? I dont mind joining u see😉😆😆

😆 I don't think so....Atharva told, no intruders...😃

😆I will also then sing along with them....<span>Aai - ri - shi - chu - ru - ru
Haiyahoo - haiyahoo - haiyahoo
Pyaar ki kashti mein, lehron ki masti mein,
Pawan ke shor shor mein, chale hum zor zor mein,
Gagan se door…….
Gagan se door…..</span>
Will let u know agar kuch ideas aaya tho....Rama

Let's see if you give me some..😛





Thanks Rama for commenting....😛


Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

Hahaha... I loved it!




You have to love it! Otherwise I'd have killed you 😃


I'm sure this is an experince you have had... I can imagine naughty Birsty wreaking havoc in her father's study! 🤣




Now now Tanu, it's bad to remind poor angel Bristy happy memories 🤣

They're going sailing on a boat... mujhe bhi le chalo... somewhere hot! 😆




Arey, everyone of you want to go...then who'll read it? 😛


Loved it... ideas? Havn't got any... will tell you if I come up with anything!😛



Be quick...otherwise I'll confiscate your Pressie 😃😈




Originally posted by: *Piku*


What a wonderful thing to read early in the morning.

So, enjoyed it 😛


Reminded me of my childhood times, 😆 😆 😆
But i didn't wreck the studies, i was trouble for my mom, with her sarees 😆 😆 😆 and much more but i was good bachi 😳


Damn! I see I'm the only one to do so..😆

atharva, krishna and ganga are so cute, i want to go on a cruise, how about to thailand, can i join them 😳 i need to go somewhere warm away from the rain and storm

Hahah....Thiland looks good...let's see if they take you with them 😛



can imagine jai's study being upside down😆 and him getting the shock, on sunday morning with loud music, lucky he didn't follow off the bed 😆

have krishna and ganga copy their mom, and wear her clothes and shoes, and atharva be his dad 😆

atharva can open one of the locks, with a pin or something but i don't think he will need thatwater fight is good with water balloons, and gunsplease write soon


Thanks for your ideas....will write it between classes tomorrow and will post tomorrow afternoon 😛



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Posted: 17 years ago
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A big Thanks to Dammy, k12345 & Davia for reading!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bristy,

that was so cute and sweet.loved all the naughty kids. I always wanted to see Jai and Bani as a normal happy with there kids, and you made my dream come true.thankoo.please do continue. 😃


preet 😳

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