SS:Presntn Tinda & Karela Last pt: pg14 & nt-pg14 - Page 8

very interesting SS 👏 👏 👏 ....love the fight between Tinda and Karela....too cute.....even in fights they share some kind of chemistry 😳 😉...

but rooj.....this is not fair 😭....are you sure that you are going to PM the next update only to some of the selected friends who commented before?? not fair rooj......I just read all the parts today 😭

Now I have no right to say please continue soon since you are not going to post your next update here 😭

today is my day 🥳...I'm the first one to reply again 😉....sorry amiee😃

me first wonderful part cant wait to read more

LOL, matchmaking happening for Tinda and Karela...Oye! 😆

So our man has the hots for Karela!

And the chipkali bit was funny too! 😆 😆

😆 so now even pia got a name (chipkali) i wonder what will be natu's name now 😆 😆

This tinda and karela are sure gonna meet at this engagement i guess. 😕 and haila jai asking mohan whose the girl in pink. it better be karela ooppss i mean bani 😳

continu soon

Roooojjjj 🤗 finally you updated..It was great...

I loved Bani here..at least she agreed that her sister Pia, " The Desi Bimbo" 😆 😆 is of no use...Kaash, hamari KS wali bhi yeh maanthi 😆 😆

So matchmaking session is going on for our Tinda-Karela 😉 😉 ..Nattu ko bhi chpkali ke saath judwaa do 😆 😆...

hmm..so our Tinda has got hots for that lady in pink, which is none other than his own Karela 😆

I am looking forward to the next part dear...Would love to see his expression when he sees that the lady in pink is none other than his Karela 😳 😳

Rama

Pia is Pia...😆 btw what was that 'one line definition' Pia used for JW??🤣 and Bani's version🤣. Bani couldn't put the reality of Pia in front of her...happens!!! and Nattu believing that Jay liked Bani...that was interesting..oh btw Nattu was blushing? for Pia😆and why was it that the first name that came to Jay's mind was of Bani and Pia??? hmmm....dal mein zaroor kuch kaala hai🤣

I loved the update...Pia as usual being money minded. Bani should kick her ass out...

Nattu is great yaar...love how he has put munna in fix...the two marriage bureau lady will be chuckling all the way to the mandap when the tinda munda is going balle balle over his pink dream............ 😆

Thanks guys for encouraging comments!

I really do appreciate it!

As it's midnight here and i am in a good mood since it's spring break that means no college for week and i plan to finish this SS this week InshaAllah!

and im sorry for not continuing before but you will get an update by tomorrow i hope!

and Plus this month is really good for me so far so yea anyways look for the next update soon!

love ya lots!
rooj

PS: i might just PM the next update to those who put a comment here.

Here's a preview of what to expect next guys i hope you like what you see here 😉 coz you'll be liking it!

sorry i couldn't finish it but this is what i have it planned next. hope you like it.

Oh and i made a minor change with Bani's clothes, instead of a Sari, she is wearing a dress and you will understand when you read the whole update next time, which is very soon.

But enjoy the preview! 😃

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As the song started, Jai pulled her abruptly toward him, surprising her. He straightened her parallel to his dancing pose. As he placed his arms roughly yet hungrily at her lower back, "I hope you are good at this and wouldn't make me look bad. I don't like to be made fun of especially with a thing like you," Jai minced bitter-sweetly.

He began to lead. They danced in circle like ballroom dancers.
Ah, Oh, Ah…
Tu tu tut tururu tut tu tut…

When marimba rhythms start to play
Dance with me, make me sway
Like a lazy ocean hugs the shore
Hold me close, sway me more) He held her out and reeled her back in. They danced in circle again like two doves flying smoothly in the air but yet enjoying the flight. They challenged each other with swift moves, their hips moving passionately against each other. There was no space left in between them. Jai stared in Bani's eyes before twirling her out and back again. As Bani came back in his arms, her hands reach up in his hair and pulled at him roughly, "Don't worry Mr. I'm-too-cool-for-you, you will be eating your own words by the end of the day today and plus you should worry about yourself because what will happen you end up messing up?" Bani smiled sarcastically, showing her pearly teeth. Jai returned her smile in the same manner and drew her even closer, "We'll see who will eat whose words," he continued to dance in close proximity as the song played on.

oooo sounds interesting......thanx for continuing cant wait for the update...