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Posted: 17 years ago
tammyyy ( do u mind if i call u this?)
the 1st part was 😳
and the last part was 😆
Jai is surely a gonner now 😈 🤣
looooooooooovely update
waiting for the next part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
🤣 wow.. tammy great part hun.. o man i was cracking up.. the first part was pretty 😳 ahem ahem.. but it was okay.. not too much.. and the rest of the part was hilarious.. kya anu tu abhi tak bachi hai.. zyada mat soch.. lol.. cotinue soon yaar..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hmm...Jai is trying hard isn't he. Nice update! Do continue ;)
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Posted: 17 years ago
😳......that was embarassing....poor Bani 😆 😆...Jai so naughty, Bani will kill him for sure 😉.....great update tam....please continue....missed last update.....it was greaaaaaaaat too 👏 .....
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Posted: 17 years ago
Jai Walia, u are a dead man! 😆 😆 😆 you are going to be murdered by the hands of Mrs. Walia. 😆 😆 Yaar, this part was tooo.... 😳 Haila, so good! 👏 How Jai kissed her all over... 😳 😳 😳 that lucky girl! and she is only thinking about killing him for doing so! 😆 Yeh Anu bhi nah! absolutely brainless i tell u! 😆 😆 😆 "Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aari... Bani Mami...red marks... Mamaji laughing..." hahahahahhaa! i was laughing at that part! Jaan please update soon! Can't wait to read more! 😳 and sorry about not commenting before, did read the update but i wasn't signed into my account and was too lazy to sign in and go back and comment. 😆 but now i'm here. 😃

Love,
Dil
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Posted: 17 years ago
jai is so naughty 😉 wait till bani makes a mince meat out of him in the night for embarrassing her so in front of his family 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

first 👏

wowowowoow .... kay romantic thi😳😳😳 ....Thanks...😆

😳

😳sachii mein mein jaise sochai wahi hua.... accha hua anu agayi..😆...I was thinking the same....😆....

red amrks.. ek aur jagah😳 in cheecks.. naughty jai bathroom emin has apda😆 ajroor piedne wali hai bani......definitely.......Bani won't spare him😆..

hum sab teir sat hai...😆

pls cotnineu soon...will do thanks for ur comments...

davia


Originally posted by: SonamKHAN

yeh jai be na ajkal bahot besharm or badmaash hogaya hai 😃

tam it was trully fab.... 😉 😃 😳 ...Thanks ...

very sweet update 😳😳😳
me waiting to see bani's gusa and what will jai's punishment be tonight............... ...will find out in next chap...😉

plz continue ...will do...thanks Sonam for ur lovely comments...😃
sonam


Originally posted by: ejazanita


hey Tam,😳😳 ...hi Nikita...

that was great👏👏👏 ...Thanks...😳😳😳

well dnt need to sat HOT as i knw it already as i was the one bt anywazzzzzzzz so hot😳😳😳 ... Thanks for ur help....

n Jai is so naughty😳😳😳 ...yeap...😆...and it will surly cause trouble for him....😆😆😆....

ANU galat waqt pe entry😆😆😆 ...always...😆😆😆

aab Jai to gaya😆😆😆 Bani nahi chodne vaali😉 vo haas raha tha😆😆...bechara kya karta haasna bhi to zaroori hain na....😆

Anu is so stupid.............she didtn hav any clue about.........her Jai mama........in the bathroom.........Bani's red marks😳.........her blouse dori open n button as well.................☺️

well lagta hai pooja ke baad JW ko kamre ke bahar hi sona padega😉😆😆....you bet....😆😆😆

plzzzzzzzz update soon....will do ...thanx Nikita for ur wonderful comments...😃

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳


Originally posted by: siumi

very nice 👏 👏 ...Thanks...glad u liked it...😃


Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part
that was too hot and hilarious 😆😆😆
jia u are tone beta ...he's dead meat...😆
plz cont soon ...will do...Thanks for ur lovely comments...😃


Originally posted by: Hritzfan

Read the last 4 parts awesome cont soon ...Thanks for ur comments and glad u liked it...😃😃😃


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

Hey great part 👏 😆 ...thanks Taj...😳

plz continue ...will do...Thanks for ur lovely comments....😃

Taj


Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

hey tam.. ....Hi Nir...😳
totally.. loved it. ...Thanks...
omg.. jai.. u r so funy.. hehe continue soon ...will do...Thanks for ur lovely comments...😃
yup.. bani is going to kill him....She will definitely 😆😆😆


Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Hi Tam,....Hi Ranjana....😳😳😳....

I am so sorry, I read the previous part yesterday but I was in a hurry so I did not comment. I'm so sorry,
....don't be Ran...It's OK...dosti mein no sorry...no Thank you...😆... kaan pakarte hai, maaf kardena please😕.....ur forgiven...kaan pakarne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai yaar...😉...
Previous part was too cute.....glad u liked it... Bani and her sari. Anu zara zyaada pins laga dena,....Anu ko advice de rein ho 😆...very good...she needs these advice very badly...😆😆😆... Bani's hand are bandaged, she can't take care of it properly. I know it's even quite hard to manage when you have both hands free, but still love to wear one.😆....even I have difficulties with sarees...I hold it very tightly whenever I wear one...😆...my friends would laugh at me...but who cares...😆...u have to manage it somehow...😉...

part 3
Jai, stay away, Bani will have your head on a platter. Ahhhh he even left marks. Man he is in trouble.
....😆😆😆...he certainly is...😆...probably he'll need Rano's help....😉..

Very sweet and sometimes 😳 part.
....Thanks Ranjana for ur lovely comments...Glad u liked this part...😃

take care and bye,
....you too....😃
Ranjana


Originally posted by: moonlitnight

tammyyy ( do u mind if i call u this?) ...No I don't mind...U can call me that....😊...
the 1st part was 😳 ...Thanks...☺️
and the last part was 😆 ...Thanks...😆😆😆
Jai is surely a gonner now 😈 🤣 ...bechare ki band bajne wala hai....😆😆😆
looooooooooovely update ...Thanks Tropa for ur wonderful comments...glad u liked the part...😃
waiting for the next part 😛


Originally posted by: phool527

🤣 wow.. tammy great part hun..Thanks...😆... o man i was cracking up..😆 the first part was pretty 😳 ahem ahem.. but it was okay.. not too much.. ...I was afraid of posting it...but I'm glad it wasn't too much......and the rest of the part was hilarious 😆....Thanks... kya anu tu abhi tak bachi hai.. zyada mat soch....very good advice...without thinking she has caused this much confusion...what will happen if she starts to think before saying or doing something...😆😆😆.. lol.. cotinue soon yaar.....will do...Thanks Phool for ur wonderful comments...😃


Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hmm...Jai is trying hard isn't he. Nice update! Do continue ;) ...will do...Thanks Nimmie for ur lovely comments...glad u liked it...😃


Originally posted by: niruba

😳......that was embarassing....poor Bani 😆 😆...Jai so naughty, Bani will kill him for sure 😉...she surely will....😆.....great update tam....please continue....missed last update.....it was greaaaaaaaat too 👏 .....
Thanks Niruba for ur wonderful comments...
Glad u liked it...😃😃😃


Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

Jai Walia, u are a dead man! ...he certainly is...😆 😆 😆 you are going to be murdered by the hands of Mrs. Walia. 😆 😆 Yaar, this part was tooo.... 😳 Haila, so good!...Thanks Dil... 👏 How Jai kissed her all over... 😳 😳 😳...too lucky😆 that lucky girl!...unlucky Jai...pitnewala Hai...bechara...😆... and she is only thinking about killing him for doing so! 😆 Yeh Anu bhi nah! absolutely brainless i tell u! 😆 😆 😆 "Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aari... Bani Mami...red marks... Mamaji laughing..." hahahahahhaa! i was laughing at that part! ...glad u liked it...😳...Jaan please update soon!...will do...😃... Can't wait to read more! 😳 and sorry about not commenting before,...that's ok...no need for sorry...well u commented now...😳... did read the update but i wasn't signed into my account and was too lazy to sign in ...that's what I do sometimes...😆...and go back and comment. 😆 but now i'm here. 😃 ...thanks Dil for ur wonderful comments...😃😃😃

Love,
Dil


Originally posted by: amiee

jai is so naughty😉...he surely is...pitnewala hai....😆 😉 wait till bani makes a mince meat out of him in the night for embarrassing her so in front of his family 😳 ....yeap...😆...Thanks for ue lovely commenst Amiee...glad u liked it...😃...



Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

hi update kab milega?
davia



Sorry guys I didn't update in 2 days...but will definitely update tomorrow....😃...once again sorry for the delay...😭...and ur are most welcome to throw anything at me if I don't update tomorrow...rotten tomato...😆...anything...😆...Take care guys...😳

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi guys....Thanks for all ur replies...here goes the next part...Do comment and let me know how it was...😳...

Chapter 32

After the prayer was completed… everyone sat down in the living area and were having tea …as it was weekend so no-one was in a hurry for work or anything… it was the time to spend with the family…

Jai: Bani… tumein yaad hain na aaj humein doctor ke paas jana hain…

Bani: haan… kab jana hai…

Jai: chalo tum taiyar ho jao hum bas 10-15 mein nikal jayenge… 😃...

So Jai got the car out and waited for Bani…

Masi: Bani beta sun… apna khayal rakna… aur haan Anu ko tum log apne saath le Jao uese college drop kar dena thik hain…

So both Anu and Bani came and got into the car and Jai saw Anu with Bani…

Jai thinking yeh kabab mein haddi kahan se aangayein…😡... isi Anu ke wajai se Bani mujhse naraj hai…ab mein Bani se kaise baat karoon… 😭...

Anu: Mamaji chaliyen na… mujhe dair ho rein hai… Rano must be waiting for me… so Jai started driving the car while both Anu and Bani sat behind making him look like a driver😆… Jai thought Bani would sit next to him but…nope she sat next to Anu… 😔...

Bani: Anu when will u be returning from college?

Anu: kyun Mami… 😕

Bani: woh…Anu… I wanted to speak to you something important… 😃

Anu: oh… ok …you can tell me now…😊...

Bani: no Anu not right now… just meet me when ur home from college… thik hain… 😊...

Jai: kya baat hai Bani… something important…

Bani just ignored him…😆... and thinking shayad yeh bhool gayen ke mein inse naraz hoon...😡… I guess poor memory… 😆...

Instantly Jai understood madam ka gussa abhi utra nahin hain… I guess I'll have to try a little harder… 😈...

Just then Anu's phone started ringing:

Anu: hello… haan Rano mein baas college pouch rein hoon…

Rano: Anu you duffer... … aaj college nahin hain… tu hamesha cheez bhool kyun jati hain😡… don't u remember I'm coming to ur place… I just wanted to make sure ur at home as I know u are very forgetful… 😆...

Anu: oh Rano thank u so much yaar 🤗… mein tu bhool gayein… agar tu nahin hoti tu main kya karti… Thanks yaar…

Rano: ok… ab thank you shank you ki koi zaroorat nahin hai…😆.. chal mein rakti hoon…and I'll see you in some time … bye…

Bani: Anu kya kahan Rano ne… 😕...

Anu: oh mami I don't have college today and Rano just reminded me of it… and she's coming to our house as well… it's exciting na… we'll have lots of fun together… par ab mein kya karoon… mujhe college nahin jana… I want to go home…

Bani: oh koi baat nahin Anu… u can come with us to the doctor and then from there we'll go home together ok. 😃

Anu: ok mami… mamaji aap ko ab college jane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai…😊

Jai thinking … great 😡…ab mein Bani se baat kaise karoon… ahh… thinking all that he proceeded towards the hospital…

In the doctors' cabin
Doctor: Hello Mrs. Walia …plz be seated …and tell me how r u feeling…

Bani: I'm fine doctor…

Doctor: come Mrs. Walia I need to change ur bandage…😊 and see how ur hands are healing from the burns…

So the doctor examined her hands and removed her bandaged from her left hand as it was much better than before …but her right hand was still bandaged coz it was more burnt compared to her left hand… 😉...

Doctor: well Mrs. Walia everything seems to be getting better… u just keep taking the medicines and keep on applying the cream regularly… is there anything else Mrs. Walia that I can help you with… I hope there aren't any other difficulties or complications… 😊...

Anu: well doctor …there are other problems that mami is experiencing recently...😆… Bani mami why don't u tell the doctor about the marks 😳 on ur body… the doctor should check them out as well… may be the doctor could prescribe u some cream to apply on them… 😃😃😃...

Both Jai and Bani looked at each other 😲 and then at Anu in pure horror 😲… what the hell is she talking about… did she say marks 😲 on Bani's body… shit… Bani was feeling so embarrassed and all this is because of JAI 😡…

Jai looked at Bani with a pleading eye 😭 not to get angry with him… but seeing Bani's eyes he knew it… only God can save him 😆… Jai thinking… aare yaar yeh doctor female kyun hai 😆 now she will want to check out her marks… agar yeh male doctor hota tu mein kuch chakkar chala leta lekin ab kya karoon… Bani sweetheart please naraz mat hona… 😳

Jai: Anu…dekho beta… tumhare Bani mami is perfectly fine… there is nothing wrong with her sweetie… 😃...

Doctor: aare Mrs. Walia… I'm a female doctor so please don't hesitate… aap mere saath aayein I'll check out ur marks and tell me what kind of marks 😳 are these… I mean did u get stung by any bees or anything…😆

Bani: actually doctor… woh… I'm fine it's nothing …I just scratched myself😳… and that's it…

Anu: Mami how can u scratch urself when both ur hands were bandaged?😕 😆😆😆

(Bani thinking oh shit😡… yeh Anu bhi na…aur mujhe aur koi excuse nahin mila tha kya… ahh…she's getting angry at herself as well as at Jai… all these are happening because of him…all these are his fault…he's the one who kissed her and left those marks😳😳😳…)

Bani: Anu…ur right… I actually don't know how I got those marks… probably it's a bee stung😆… ur right doctor… it is a bee stung😆…

Doctor: chaliyen Mrs. Walia …aap mere saath aayein… so she took Bani inside examining room… while Jai placed his hand on his head😭… he was doomed😆 …all thanks to Anu😡…

Anu: mamaji…kya baat hai😕… aapki tabiyat tu thik hain na…😆 aapko headache tu nahin hain na😆… shall I call the doctor😆… ahe asked with a concerned voice...

Jai: Anu plz spare me…chup ho jaa meri ma… doctor ko itna sab kuch batane ki kya zaroorat thi… haan…… 😡

Anu: mamaji aap mujhe kyun daat rein ho😭… mein tu mami ke bhalai ke baremein soch rein thi… kya maine kuch galat kiya…😭

Jai: Anu if u don't shut up…I'll explode… aur haan it's not good to think about other people's well being too much… coz sometimes it could have an negative and opposite effect…

Anu: mamaji pehle aap ghar mein besharmo ki tarah baat kar rein the remember when I was helping mamai with saree… aur ab aap paglon ki tarah baat kar rein ho… 😆

Jai felt like strangling Anu… who is totally unaware of the negative effect of her positive thought on Jai😕… only Jai knows what he'll go through once they got back home😆… Jai came out of his thought as both doctor and Bani came out of the examining room……………………………………………………………………………………

please do comment...😃...


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago

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