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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ejazanita

hey Tam😳😳

wow!!!!!! great update😳

cant keep blushin😳

sari............Jai..............Bani in blouse..........her exposed back.........he touched her..........so hot n romantic😳😳😳

keep goin btw if u need help, u knw whom to ask😉😉

plzzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)



Thanks Nik for ur lovely comments....and ur help as well....glad u liked the update... will be updating soon....😳😳😳

Originally posted by: davia389

n aughty jai naughty..😳 😆😆😆

bani all hot.. in fornt of him i am sure next aprt massi ajegei to help bani😉 you bet...😆....interaption tu hon hi chaiyen...😆Thanks for ur comments Davia...

waise kab tak rahenge dfonon alag?

pls cotnineu soon

davia


Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part
plz cont soon
cant wait to read the next part
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Thanks Jeenal for ur Comments ...



Originally posted by: culgal86

hey...........

lovely part.............

not a gud place to end it...............

will be waiting for the next part.........

update soon

Hi Thanks for ur comments and will be updating soon...😉



Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

Haiiiii!!!! 😳 Hun, that was a FAB part!!! 😳 But how mean! 😡 You stopped at the best part! 😭 --- yeh Jai bhi nah! 😆 😆 😆 I agree with you Anu, yeh tumhara Jai Mamu bilkul besharam hogaya! 😳 Can't wait to see what's next! 😳 Update REALLY soon!!!! 😃

Love
Dil

Hi Dil... Thanks For the comments....I'm not mean yaar...😆...It's just one of the Kekta style ...😆...anyways...will be updating soon...Thanks...😆


Originally posted by: moonlitnight

omg omg omg
tammmyyyyyyyyyyy
thats 😳

what edit?? its perfect ...Thanks Tropa for the lovely comments...Glad u liked it....

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon


Originally posted by: SonamKHAN

Tam that was to short

jai very naughty (besharm) 😳 😃
very hottttttttttyyyy update
plz tam update everyday like before

me waiting hope their is no distrabance i mean massi ya per anu

plz continue
Hi sonam...thanks for ur comments...I'm sorry but can't update everyday like before... u know studying and stuffs like that...but will definately try to update as regularly as possible...Thanks for ur comments...glad u liked it...
sonam


Originally posted by: amiee

wonderfulparts just finished reading all the parts that i had missed
loved it pls cont soon.....Thanks Amiee for ur comments 😃


Originally posted by: siumi

wow!!!!!! great update

👏
Thanks Simui...for ur lovely comments....glad u liked it...😃


Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

brilliant part
jai is becoming very naughty 😳

plz cont Thaks Taj...for ur lovely comments 😃

Taj


Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

tam do u not know.
stoping.. lke that is a crime. ...Crime 😆... come on Nir...now don't give me any punishment ...will be updating after few mins...
Thanks for ur comments...😃
geez.
u have to continue soon please


Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

Hey,

Hmmm...think J can't resist B now not after seeing her like that!

Great update and do update soon!

Nimmie Thanks for ur comments....glad u liked it...😃


Originally posted by: phool527

tams.. great part hun.. nd no u did not go overboard.. lol.. awwwwnnn bani ur deffnitley a gonner unless anu bhanji comes and saves u.. 😳 😆 😆 .. kya tams just had to end there.. ab jaldi update karo.. .. 😆

Thanks Phool for ur comments...Glad u liked it...😃


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you guys so much for all ur comments and I have replied to each one of u and its on page 47....and special thanks to Nikita....Thanks for ur help Sweetie 🤗....so this part is dedicated to you...and all the readers as well who were eagerly waiting for some romance between Jai Bani... Hope I haven't disappointed u guys....Thank You...🤗🤗🤗


Bani: Anu finally you are h..e..r..e… Jai what are you doing here as she looked at him in pure horror and embarrassment…then realization stuck her as to why Jai was looking at her like that… and she looked at herself and tried to cover her upper body by crossing her arm… but Jai kept on gazing at her …and when she followed his gaze she saw how he was looking at her midriff with so much passion… so she just turned her back at him… but it was her bad luck… but Jai's good luck that the blouse exposed a lot of her back… and Jai was quiet happy seeing her back… so he slowly went behind her… first he placed both his hands on the side of her bare stomach and drew her back closer to his chest…… at the very instant Bani closed her eyes as she felt her body was on fire and his cold hand were creating a lot of butterflies in her stomach……

Chapter 31

Jai touches he bare stomach and Bani closes her eyes as her body is on fire just coz of Jai's touch.........Jai tn moves his one hand upwards fmr her stomach to her shoulder n tn slowly removes her hair to one side and tn kisses her on bare shoulder......Bani moves her head to other side feelin Jai's lips on her skin......Jai keeps on kissing on her shoulder n neck n soon Jai's other hand looses its grip from her stomach n goes down to her hand n about to take her hand in his but Bani moves away from him n goes 2wards the window.......she is breathing heavily n feeling really nervous.......

Jai slowly comes behind her and hugs her and then removes her hair from her back to her front side…Bani instantly felt his presence and said Jai…

Jai: hmmm……ssshhh…… sweetie…… ……And then he… bends down n starts kissing her on her bare back..........she gasps slowly n closes her eyes feeling Jai's lips on her.........Jai then turns her around 2wards him n sees Bani's eyes are closed…….he then kisses her on her shoulder n sees her turning her face in the other direction……..he then goes up kissing her from shoulder 2wards her neck then goes down to her midriff………as soon as he kisses her in midriff… Bani clutches the curtain in her hand……

Jai then… comes upwards 2wards her other side of shoulder n slightly bites her……slowly he comes up to her face n kisses her on cheek then forehead then eyes of both side then other cheek and her jaw line and slightly kisses her on the corner of her lips n Bani is breathing very heavily from Jai's touch as this is the new feelings to her so she is slightly scared ……..Jai sees her n sees her eyes are closed n fires increases between them……..he then moves to her lips n they are just centimetres away….Jai was engrossed in loving Bani and Bani was lost in his touch…they came out of their own world as they heard a knock on the door… both got startled by the situation… both panicked together as if they have been caught together doing something fishy…

Bani: Jai choro mujhe bahar koi hai…

Jai: hmmm… Bani chup… please …bahar koi nahin hai… saying so he started kissing her again…

Anu: Bani mami… open the door… aap ko saree pehnana hai aur uske baad pooja mein bhi jaana hain… hurry up and open the door…

Bani: Jai… maine kahan na choron mujhe Anu bahar kaharin hain…

Jai: ish Anu ki tu mein… hamesha galat waqt par entry kyun kartin hai…

Bani: Jai ab kya hoga… Anu bahar khari hai… aap yahan aayen kyun?... sab aapki galti hain…

Jai: Bnai tum hamesha mujhe datti rehti ho… ur my wife… aur mein tumhare pati hoon… show some respect…

Bani: aaaah… mein tumein maar daloungi Jai… come on think of something…

Jai: Bani tum dhamki diye bagar kuch keh nahin sakti kya?...

Bani: dekho Jai yeh waqt nahin hai yeh sab baat karne ke liey…please aap jake bathroom mein chup jao and I'll somehow open the door and don't you dare to make any noise in the bathroom…

Jai: Bani phir se dhamki…

Bani: shut up Jai just go... so Jai went in the bathroom and shut himself in... while Bani went and somehow open the door for Anu…

Anu: aare mami kitna time lagati ho aap darwaza khool ne mein…ab chaliyen mein aap ko saree pehnati hoon…

Bani: haan chalo…

Anu: Bani mami yeh kya hain… aapka blouse ka peeche se dau (two) button khuli hue hain aur yeh dori kaise khul gayein…

Bani: aammh…ahh..Anu…woh… bata nahin kaise khul gayein… shayad tumein ne dori tie karna bhool gayein… (Bani thinking… Jai main tumein nahin choroon gi…)

Anu: haan shayad ho bhi sakta hai… mein kitna bhool thi hoon…

So first Anu tied her dori and did the button as well …afterwards Anu began to tuck saree in her underskirt and noticed some red marks on her waist area and stomach…… so she asked…

Anu: Bani mami yeh red mark? Pehle tu nahin the… kya hua aap ko… aap thik tu hain na…

Bani: red marks??? Kahan…she was shocked as she looked down and saw the marks and felt angry at Jai …she realized that her patidev has left those marks there… she will definitely kill him tonight… there is no escape for him… damn you Jai Walia always causing problem for her… but what was she suppose to say to Anu…

Anu: mami…why aren't you saying something… doctor ko dikhate hein… I think its some kind of rush or something…

However in the bathroom Jai was suppressing his laughter as he heard Anu questioning Bani… oh God it's hilarious… how he wanted to see Bani's face… she must be mad at him… well that's what she deserves for giving him dhamkies every time… then he realized Bani will not spare him for this… he was surely dead… thinking how all that the laughter from his face vanished instantly…

Bani: Anu yeh kuch nahin hain perhaps I have scratched myself…

Anu: Par mami scratches aise nahin hote…

Bani: Anu can we talk about that later on we are getting late honey… so do the saree quickly please…

Anu: ok… saying so she draped the saree around her perfectly… when she was doing Bani's pallu she saw some more red marks around her neck and shoulder…

Anu: Mami yeh aapko kya ho geya… mein 5 min ke liey bahar kya gayen… aap ki halat tu dekhiyen…

Bani: ab kya hua Anu… don't tell me ur seeing more marks or something…

Anu: yes Mami there are some around ur neck and shoulder…

Bani: what???

Jai heard this again and couldn't control himself any longer so he burst out laughing… causing Anu to notice someone was laughing in the bathroom…

Anu: Bani mami …yeh haasi ki aawaz kahan se aanrein hain?... bathroom mein shayad koi hai…

Bani: nahin Anu… I didn't hear anything… no one is in the bathroom…

Hearing that Jai laughed even more and Anu thought something was fishy so she didn't listen to Bani… and opened the bathroom door … as Bani closed her eyes… how embarrassing is that… she wanted to kill Jai for his laughter…

Anu: Jai mama aap bathroom mein kya kar rein ho… aur akele akele haas kyun rein the…

Jai looked at Bani's angry face and was sure he was in deep deep trouble… Jai thinking …Jai beta aab tu tera band bajne wala hai… hasne ki kya zaroorat thi…

Bani: Jai aap ko itni zoor se hasne ki kya zaroorat thi…

Jai: exactly my thought Bani… mujhe itni zor se hasne ki kya zaroorat thi…

Anu: I'm confused… yeh sab kuch kya ho rahan hain… mujhe tu kuch bhi samajh mein nahin aan rahan hain…

Just then Masi walked in…

Masi: aare beta …tum log aur kitna time loge taiyar hone mein…jaldi karo na…

Anu: Masi mein zara confuse hoon… yeh mamaji... bathroom… red marks… Bani mami… mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aaran hain… aur mamaji aap haas kyun rein the…

Bani: Anu dekho mein tumein baad mein samjathi hoon… chalo hum niche chalte hain…

Masi: bahu… yeh Anu kya baak rein hain…

At the very instant Jai once again started laughing making Bani mad… here she was trying to control the situation and instead of helping her out he's laughing…

Masi: Jai kya hua… tu itna haas kyun rahan hai…

Bani: Masi inko chorein na aap …chaliyen hum niche chalte hain… Jai hum sab niche chale aap baad mein haas lena…

So Masi and Jai went downstairs… followed by Anu and Bani… before coming out of the room Bani asked Anu to do her saree pallu properly by covering her head well so her red marks also gets hidden and no one asks her any further question…

OK guys...hope I didn't went too much overboard with the first part...If I have sorry...if it's bad then do let me know I'll edit it....Do comment guys either good or bad...😃

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

first

wowowowoow .... kay romantic thi😳😳😳

😳

😳sachii mein mein jaise sochai wahi hua.... accha hua anu agayi..😆

red amrks.. ek aur jagah😳 in cheecks.. naughty jai bathroom emin has apda😆 ajroor piedne wali hai bani...

hum sab teir sat hai...

pls cotnineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
yeh jai be na ajkal bahot besharm or badmaash hogaya hai 😃

tam it was trully fab.... 😉 😃 😳

very sweet update
me waiting to see bani's gusa and what will jai's punishment be tonight...............

plz continue
sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey Tam,😳😳

that was great👏👏👏

well dnt need to sat HOT as i knw it already as i was the one bt anywazzzzzzzz so hot😳😳😳

n Jai is so naughty😳😳😳

ANU galat waqt pe entry😆😆😆

aab Jai to gaya😆😆😆 Bani nahi chodne vaali😉 vo haas raha tha😆😆

Anu is so stupid.............she didtn hav any clue about.........her Jai mama........in the bathroom.........Bani's red marks😳.........her blouse dori open n button as well.................

well lagta hai pooja ke baad JW ko kamre ke bahar hi sona padega😉😆😆

plzzzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part
that was too hot and hilarious
jia u are tone beta
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Read the last 4 parts awesome cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey great part 👏 😆

plz continue

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tam..
totally.. loved it.
omg.. jai.. u r so funy.. hehe continue soon
yup.. bani is going to kill him
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi Tam,

I am so sorry, I read the previous part yesterday but I was in a hurry so I did not comment. I'm so sorry, kaan pakarte hai, maaf kardena please😕.
Previous part was too cute. Bani and her sari. Anu zara zyaada pins laga dena, Bani's hand are bandaged, she can't take care of it properly. I know it's even quite hard to manage when you have both hands free, but still love to wear one.😆

part 31
Jai, stay away, Bani will have your head on a platter. Ahhhh he even left marks. Man he is in trouble.

Very sweet and sometimes 😳 part.

take care and bye,
Ranjana

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