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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 10

Okay this part is Dedicated to Davia398, Preetipreety.., Ananna, and nygirlbal..

---and for all my commenters and people who have enjoyed the twist..

Hey.. Listen this parts not that great .. not as much evil.. as I would have liked..but it is opening up to the great evil that will proceed…Jai's suffering..

Daksh-Ab jabki Bani ki memory chale jaye hai.. appko appne galthi sudarne chahiyeh..

Jai-You're right Daksh..

Bani-(opens her eyes faintly, making sure no one else is in the room)-Bouth hogaya Mr.Walia… ab appke suffer karne ki bari hai..

*********************

Last few sentences of the last part-

Now new part..

Jai goes to Bani's room, and sees that she is wide awake..

Jai-Umm.. Bani..

Bani-Ji Mr.walia..

Jai-Doctor neh kehdiya hai ki we can take you home.. chale..

Bani-Haan, (gets up in a forward position)-Mujhe Krishna aur Atharva se bhi toh milna hai..

Jai-(blank expression on his face)-Um..(almost tearing)Voh.. unko..

Masi-(coming in teary)-Tujhe yaad nahi beta(running her hand threw Banis hair)-Tu ne Krishna aur Atharva ko summer camp beja tha nah.. aur vapiss drive karthe hue tera accident hua tha..

Bani-(surprised)-Liken voh itne chotte hain.. aur summer camp?

Masi-(trying to handle the situation)-Beta.. tu demak par kyun stress karrahi hai.. deek tere sir peh chot lagi thi nah..

Bani-Haan..

Masi-Toh isshe liye tujhe sab yaad karneh main problem ho rahi hai..

Bani-(agreeing with Masi)-Ji..

Doctor-So how are you feeling, Mrs.Walia.

Bani-(looking up at Jai)-Fine.. I feel fine..

Doctor-Good, so Mr.Walia.. are you talking her home now?

Jai-Yes.

Jai holds out his hand and at first Bani resists but then puts her hand in his. It had been so long since she had felt him, the hug but it was like Hell for Bani, Bani shook her head.. She wanted revenge.. no more lies.. She was going to make Jai's life hell.. She would make sure that even with all the luxuries in his life.. he would pray to be freed from such a life..

Jai-Bani.. kya hua.. kya soch rahi ho..

Bani-Kuch nahi.. Chale..

Masi-Ruko.. Bani beta tu bhar ja.. mujhe Jai se kuch baath karne hai..

Bani-Ji..

Masi-Tu kya sochtha hai.. Jai walia.. ki ab kyun ki Bani is yaadash chale gaye hai.. toh tu usska fayda utaegah..Main tujhe assa karne nahi doongi..

Jai-Toh kya karengi app Masi.. I mean agar humne Bani ko sach bathadiya toh.. usski halat karab hogaye toh? Phir app kya kareengeh?? Aur phir Ganga aur usska kya hoga.. usshe bhi toh bachana hai,

Masi-(sighs)-Teek hai Jai.. liken yaad rahe ..teri pathni Meera hai.. Bani nahi ..

Jai-Ji..

Jai and Masi walk out of the room, where Bani was waiting. They walk to the car and then they drive to Walia Mansion.. Masi satyed in the hospital with Ganga.. When Bani and Jai arrived to Walia Mansion.. The entire Family was waiting at the gate with arrti thali in hand..

Dadi-Arre voh dehko. Bani aur Jai aggaye..

Rano-Haan..

--------Rano, Anu, Nachiket, Rashi, and Ranveer.. are the same as in Kasamh se..Okay.. But Just for the people that don't know I'll write it out..

Rano-Is sahil's widow, Jigyasa's daughter-in-law.

Anu-Jigyasa's and Adi's Daughter

Rashi-Ranveers wife, and they have a daughter vidya..

Ranveer-Son of Adi and Jigz

----Jai and Bani walk to the front of the door..

Dadi-Arre Rano thali de..

Rano-(hands Dadi the thali)-Yeh loo..

Bani-(rolls her eyes)

After Dadi does the aarti Jai and Bani walk into the house..

Dadi-Jeete raho.. ajj ke baad tum dono ke beech mein koi bhi nahi aa payegah..

Bani-(confused)-Humhare beech?

Jai-(runs his hand threw his hair)-Bani, why don't you go lay down, I'll help you upstairs..

Bani-Um.. okay..

Jai takes Bani upstairs and makes sure that shes under the covers..

He walks back downstairs and starts to explain to the family about Bani's circumstances..

Jai-Toh.. Bani ko kuch bhi yaad nahi..She still thinks that Krishna and Atharva are alive..

Dadi-Kya?

Rano-What?

Ranveer-That's soo strange..

Nachiket-Sh*t.. that means that..

Jai-Please just shutup..

Nachiket-Bhai.. you don't get it.. Tommorow would have been your anniversary.. your 7th one..

Rano-Yeah.. Mr. Walia he's right..

Jai-Damn..

Dadi-Chal.. koi baat nahi.. Bani iss ghar ke bahu humesha thi.. hum ek shandar party throw karengeh..

Rano-Haan, I guess.. I feel bad for didi.. unke saath hi humesha..

Nachket-Chalo.. I'll go get the people for the decorations, and Rano tum cake ka order dena…..

Bani was watching all this from upstairs.. she ran her fingers across the railing.. and said to herself-"Yehi toh main chathi thi.. ki tum sab kal ek party throw karroo.. aur uss party main champain ke saath ek aur bhi explosion hoga.. jis neh Jai ke saath merie aur Ganga ki zindagi barbad ki… Anywayz.. chaloo Bani kal ke party ke liye dress select karthe hain.."

Later that evening.. Jai was sitting in his famous chair.. and thinking.. when Bani came up to him.. disturbing his mind track..

Bani-Mr.Walia.. mujhe samaj nahi arraha hai..ki appko kya gift doon.. ?(covers her mouth quickly)

Jai-GIFT..

Bani-Mere mo main koi baath hi nahi rethi… I mean kal humhari 7th anniversary hai nah...toh.. app bathaye.. (Sitting next to him)-appko kya chahe yeh.. ?

Jai-Um... Well... Anything bani...

Bani-(getting closer to him) Bathayeh nah..

Jai-(moving away, then Standing up)-Stop it Bani!

Bani-(standing up too)-Kya hua.. Mr.Walia..

Jai-(getting mad and confused leaves)-

Bani-Mr.Walia.. Mr.Walia.. (Waits till he is gone..-in her head)-Yes! Part one of my plan successful…

Jai went on the roof, and kicked the ground.. and shouted in the air..

Jai-What the hell…Jab mein Bani se alag hotha hoon, tab main pass honachatha hoon.. liken ab.. mani usske pass hothe hue bhi.. I cant go close to her.. I don't want to take advantage of her.. Kya karoon..??

Next morning..

Bani-(slowly opens her eyes, to see red roses everywhere… her eyes grew open..as she looked for Jai who was trying his best to hide behind some flowers)-I can see you Mr.Walia..

Jai-Damn.. (he comes out from behind the bouque's.. holding a small box in his left hand, behind his back.)

Bani-(leans forward for a kiss)

Jai-(moves away)-Umm.. Bani Look I'm really sorry about yesterday.. Happy Aniversary..

Bani-Thanks..

Jai-(holds out box)-This is for you..

Bani-(acting surprised)-Omg.. (opens the box)-Wow.. its beautiful..

Jai-(takes the ring out of the box and puts it on Banis finger)-Its looks even better on you..

Bani-Well, don't you want your present?

Jai-Yeah.. sure.. what is it?

Bani-Well, guess what..you will have to wait for your present.. I'll give it to you after we cut the cake..

Jai-(Confused)-Umm.. okay.. well I have to go ..

Bani-Where?

Jai-(thinking)-To make some arraanements.. okay.. (threw Bani a flying kiss)

Bani-Bye(waving)—In her head-I've got you just where I want you Jai..

Sorry if the part was too long or too short..This is all I could come up with.. I have great responses.. so thanks to all.. for them …I really appriacate it.. keep it coming..

--next update is April 1st. on April fools day..

--Promo will be coming soon.. very revealing and a deatailed one at that!..—

The Anniversary party .. will be a BLAST>. If you know what I mean..

.. And sooryy if I bored anyone..

--nikita..

Edited by nikitaic - 17 years ago
ridizzz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
Great part.
liked it.
so looks like Bani is all for revenge....can't wait for the next part....hmmmmmm what is she up to....the blast....what it can be...can't wait for the next part.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
Thanks so much for the next part. Loved the part where Bani changes to her real roop. It was nice to know that Bani will get revenge. She will get shanti by getting some of the revenge. Hopefully, Jai will realize his mistake. I will be waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

what to say it was rockign chahiye woo massi ho ya bani.. massi ne warn ki apni munna ko😆 .. akir hen deserves to.. what abotu the aprty si tarf nahi rokna nahi chaiye...

waitihgn for the promo.. aise kya akregi bani???????? which will shcok him..

kahin nase mein jai ki vastharan akrne ke baare mein to nahi soch rhai ho..😆

better she do tinside the room sabke saamne hua too phirse mahabarat shuru hoajyega😆 lekin gagna/?uskea kya hoga?

pls cotniue soon\

thns for deticating

dav

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

hey,

great update

loved it.................wow!!!!!!!! so much happened............

btw im a bit confused abt wat was Bani tryin to prrove or do by gettin close to Jai............. in romantic way.................

plzzzzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)

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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
gr8 part 👏 👏 👏 , plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
omg that was a superb part
Bani is all set for her revenge 😕 oh i hope its not too bad poor Jai i know what he done to her was bad but he didnt do all this intentionally 😭

so next update on 1st of april 😕 that is sooo far away or are u going to be fooling us and update sooner😆 😆


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
Hey Nikita 😊

Great update 👏 👏

Bani is all set to get back at Jai 😃

She fall in love with himm all over again 😉 😳

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
great Update..
April 1st 😭
oh well.. cant wait for the promo..
nihaalP2fan
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
Great part. Please continue soon, can't wait to read what else Bani does.

April 1st is too far away, please don't wait that long 😭

BD

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