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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
well it was a greatttttttttttttt update!!!
how can u say ki we're bored!!! aur it is becumin better and better than ur previous updates!!!!
awesum....................luv this bani!!!!

contd soon yaar...........aur 1st april is too far so post fast yaar............plsssssssssssss 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
wowwwww great ff πŸ‘
i read it in 1 go πŸ˜†
well this bani is really different........the 1 we would love to watch in kasam se πŸ˜†
next part on 1 april 😲 thats toooo long........but nevermind will wait even that long if u will give us a loooooooooooonnnnnnnggggggggggggg update πŸ˜†
cont.soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
Ohmigoshhhh

Nikita!!

Please continue soon! It's so interesting πŸ˜ƒ!!

❀️ Mimi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
Hi Niki

Just read all parts, great going πŸ‘ , good to see bani in a negative light, πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ but it's a pity jigs is not around, she should be the one to suffer as its her doing artharva & krishna are dead 🀒 😑 .

april 1st is too far away, please update soon 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
hey Niki
as promised that i will read your FF(will still have a bit of essay to do but i managed to read this FF of yours)

let me tell that it is really grat FF... 😊 πŸ˜ƒ 😳 i feel happy that JW is being panished by bani but at the same time i feel sorry for him to... hope they both realise what they really mean to each other πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ 😳

i'm glad that jigs and meera got what they deserved πŸ˜ƒ

par yeh kiya i just startd reading your FF and now your going to update in 1 april to late yaar try to update eraly

do continue

sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

Hey.. all Next part .. I was done early.. way early.. so yeah.. decided to update.. soo enjoy.... but hopefully worth it..Enjoy..

Downstairs everyone was working at the arrangements for the party. Sahil was helping set the DJ stand, Ranveer was helping Rashi get the catering, and Dadi and Masi were feeding Ganga in the guest room. Bani stayed upstairs and rested, even though she really didn't loose her memory, her head still pounded occasionally, and she was extremely tired. She took a nap and when she woke up she found Rano hovering around her.

Bani-Um.(getting up)-Rano?

Rano-(turning around to see her up)-Oh.. Hi di.. (hugging her)

Bani-(tears falling from her eyes) I missed you Rano.

Rano-Hun?(finally letting go)-Kya mathlab,(straightning her glasses)-

Bani-(realizing what she said)-I mean.. woh.. to aaj party main kya pane wali ho?

Rani-(her mind got changed easily as the topic changed)-Yeah.. well.. kind of confused.. I think I should wear the black saree.. or the blue one.. Sahil wants me to wear this orange one he got.. but I really look like an orange in it!

Bani-Let me see it..

Rano(springs off the bed)-I'll go get it..

Bani-(happy to see that she didn't get caught)

Rano-(standing in her room with the closet open)-(to herself)-Bani didi ka kya mathlab tha ki.. she missed me? I mean shes lost her memory so then, how would she have missed me.. (very confused)

Sahil-(comes and hugs her from behind)-Hey, so are you going to wear my orange sare.. ?

Rano-(turns around, coming out of thought) hun?

Sahil-You know.. that saree I bought you..

Rano-Sahil.. voh.. Bani didi want me to wear this blue one(holding it up).. so I don't want to hurt her feelings..

Sahil-That's okay.. but you liked it right.(with a big smile)

Rano-(smiles too)-Yes.. I love it.. it had a lot of loved wrapped in it..

Rano-I got to go.. Bani di must be waiting..

Sahil-Well, I'll see you later.. lots more work to do.. Hey..(holding on to Rano's hand )-Hey what about a kiss..

Rano-Yeah sure.. (walks past him and gives Jai a friendly peck on his check)-Love you jiju… (sticks out her tounge at Sahil)

Sahil-(makes evil eyes at her)

Jai-Hey Sahil.. no luck today.. (chuckling)

Sahil-Please Mamaji.. I know my marital life is going better than yours..(covers his mouth)-Mamaji.. I'm really..

Jai-Hey..(smiles) no problem.. you didn't mean to.. Hey.. at least my wife isn't going around kissing her broth-in-laws..

Sahil-(LOL)..

Jai-(walks past his room, seeing Rano and Bani deciding on what saree to wear, he smiles wide, seeing Bani smiling with her sister after a long time, he walks into the room)-Hey Bani..

Rano-Jiju.. whats behind your back..?

Jai-(frowned)-Thanks for keeping the secret…

Rano-Sorry..

Jai-(holds boxes out from behind his back)-This is for you Bani..

Bani-(opens the box)-Wow.. its beautifull..(Jai gave her a beautiful red sarre )I love it..(hugs Jai)

Jai-(doesn't hold her but accepts the hug)-You liked it..

Bani-I loved It..

Rano-What About me,… This is not fair.. Jiju.. I gave u a kiss.. and no gift for me.. ????

Jai-(holding out the second box)- This is for you..

Rano-Wow.. my favorite color.. ( It was a preety blue saree, with green beads along the side, it was simply to die for)

Jai-Well, Bani, Rano you should get ready soon.. The party stars in about an hour..

Rano-Yeah jiju.. thanks soo much.. and hey jiju.. please make sure sahil gets ready I had left his clothes out on the bed.. (Rano looked over to see Jai's suit layed out on the bed too, and chuckled..)

Jai-(looking at the bed)-Thanks Bani.. I'm going to go take a quick shower..

Bani-(quiet)-okay..

Rano-(hugs Bani)-Okay.. di main chalti hoon.. I have to get ready..

While Jai was in the shower Bani rummaged through her closet..

Bani-(out loud)-Damn.. voh kahan hai..,(finding something, then holding it to her chest)-Thank god mil gaye.. (She hears the water turn off, and hids something in the closet)

Jai-(when Jai came out of the shower he saw Bani sitting in front of the dresser, trying to tie the back of her blouse.. what a KS scene ..)

Bani-(out loud)-Stupid blouse.. haath kabie jatha hi nahi hai..

Jai-(walks up to her and after hesitating at first then ties the knot, touching her skin a bit, making Bani shiver at the feel of his touch)

Bani-(closed her eyes tight)

As Jai and Bani stared at each other in the mirror… Jiya Dhadak Dhadak..played..

Tujhe deek deek suna..

Tujhe deek kar hai jagnah..

Maine yeh zindagani sang tere bithani

Tujh main basi hai mere jaan hai..

Jiya dhadak dhadak ..

This wonderful JB scene was interrupted by Rano..

Rano-Um.. sorry.. voh.. Neche guest anne lage hain.. toh..

Bani-(blushes sofly then walks out the door past Jai)-Chalo Rano..

Jai-(soon follows behind her)

Jai and Bani stood by the door inviting all the guests that came to the door, they passed flowers and other presents to sahil who put them in JB's room..A few minutes later .. The DJ made an announcement.

DJ-Hey all you people out there.. How you doing tonight???(all the people clapped)So today we're here to celebrate Mr and Mrs. Walia's 7th anniversary.. So lets get the lucky couple on the dance floor..(spotlight hit JB as they walked on to the Dance floor)

The DJ played the music.. and the song played.. JB along with all the other couples dance.. to ..

Mahi veh.. mohabathan sachhian ve..

Manjda nasseba kuch aur hai..

Oh ho.. mahi ve. Mohabathan sachhian veh..

Mangda nasseba kuch aur hai..

Kistmat de mare .. oh asse ki kariyeh..

Kismat de mare asse ki kareye?

Kismet de mare oh asse ki kariye kismat de kisda zor hai…

JB were swaying to the music, as Bani had a distorted look on his face..

Jai-Kya hua Bani..

Bani-Hun?Kuch nahi.. Voh.. main asse hi.. Aditiya uncle kahin dikahi nahi derahe..

Jai-Haan.. Maine bhi Aditiya ko kafi time se nahi dekha.. yahin kahin hoga..

DJ-(stopped the music, being queded by Sahil)-Don't worry we will be back.. with some more dancing.. but first lets proceed with the cake cutting..

Sahil and Ranveer dragged a long cake on a weeled cart. Bani, Jai and the rest of the family walked over as Rano handed the knife to Bani..

Bani-(looking around)

Jai-(nudging Bani)-Kya hua..

Bani-Hun?Kuch nahi.. kya hum tori dare baad cake nahi kat sak the.. meri ek friend ka mujhe intazaar hai..

Jai-Tumhari koi friend? Kyon..

Bani-(making up a name)-Um.. Ruhama.. voh usne kaha tha ki todi dare ho jaye gi use..

Jai-You wanna call her.. (holding his cell phone out)

Bani-(thinks first then agrees)-haan..(takes the phone)-Main athi hoon..(she walks away toward the door)(dails some number)

Guy-Hello..

Bani-Hi.. voh.. nikalgaye..??

Guy-Haan bus poonchthe hi honngeh appke pass.

Bani-Good.. tum kal paise leene ajanah..

Guy-Ji..

Jai-(touching Banis shoulder from behind, shocking Bani, who immideatly dropped the cell phone)

Bani-(turning around)-Oh.. Mr.Walia app.

Jai-Kya hua.. tum ithna kyun dar gaye..?

Bani-Nahi.. voh kuch nahi..

Jai-Toh kya voh arahi hai..?

Bani-(eyes widened as if her secret was out)-Kyon?

Jai-Tumhari dost Ruhama.?

Bani-(shutting her eyes tight)-Oh.. voh.. haan.. she said she'll be here in a couple of minutes.. so we should start with the cake cutting..

Jai-(leading her)

Bani and Jai begin to cut into the cake as Bani still looked toward the door, She fed a piece to Jai and then Jai fed a piece to Bani..Sahil came running with the bottle of Champain.. He had just began shaking it when ..

Bani-Hey sahil.. Tum yeh wali Mr.Walia..ko dedo..

Sahil-Ji Mami.(hands the bottle to Jai)

Bani-(had an evil smile on her face)

Jai shook the bottle, and then poped open the cork, it rained in Champian as Bani lifted her sarre a bit, to avoid it from getting wet.. When the mist finally lowered Jai saw Adi at the door, with a figure approaching behind him…Jai squinted his eyes a bit, until he realized that it was…Banis smile grew wider as she saw Jai lip the name….

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So who do you think it is??

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Sorry.. No more left.. Next update is really April 1st.. I know.. well I felt bad.. cause soo many people were saying that they wanted it earlier.. so.. I updated.. Hope you enjoyed.. Well unless I finish early.. probably willπŸ˜†..

--nikita..

Edited by nikitaic - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87

Great update Nikita πŸ‘πŸ‘

Sahil is out of luck these days πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Rano loves Jai more than ever πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

This is really not fair yaar, you are going to update again in april 😑😑😑 you better make up for lost time on your next update πŸ˜‰

From Shireen 😳

Edited by snsali_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
Hey Nikita...😳.... sorry for late comment....but trying to caught up with it.... πŸ˜ƒ ....the storyline is gr8...

These witches are everywhere .... in KS and in FF as well..... πŸ˜† ....anyways Meera is so bad... 🀒 .... pretending to be all dead... 😑 ....

I do hope JB get back together in all sense in ur FF as well as in KS...😳 😳 😳... that would be tooo good..... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ .....

I really hoped Bani really lost her memory ... πŸ˜† ... She would've driven Jai nuts.... πŸ˜† ....

Anyways got to go now.... do cont with it... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ... will look forwaard to ur next update....πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

hey nikita,

well great updateπŸ‘

loved it...................humm so wat is the sceret? n who were behind ADI................

wat is this yaar?😑😑 why did u stop there?

anywaz plzzzzzzzzz continue soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon

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