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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 😭 😭 .. awwwnnn.. ranjana wat did u do.. aur yeh mrs.walia ka chakkar plzz clear karo and make our bani the new mrs.walia.. and who cares about age wen u got such a loving life partner.. anywayz plzz continue soon.. great part.. u made me 😭 😭 once again.. its like u have this power over us to make us 😭 .. even ekta couldnt do that... 😆 😆 .. but its so sad.. i could feel how bani feels.. finally having both her sisters getting married in such a good house.. but missing ur parents for the kanyadan... i would hate it if i wasnt able to do it for my sisters if i were n bans place..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Very touching part......awesome update. I feel so sad for Bani, sitting in the swing and crying.....I can imagine the scene 😭 😭 😭

You didn't reveal Mr. walia's wife.... who is she, what happen to her? You can 'kill' her if you want... don't think we need her here 😉 😆.

Mr. Walia falling for Bani but he's denying.....but Bani's feelings towards Mr.Walia is not revealed yet... I think she just respect Mr. Walia a lot....please continue, looking forward for your next update....
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Posted: 17 years ago
first of all thanx 4 the long update....really liked it

u made me cry 😭 .....poor bani....she feel so lonely....glad jai was there to confort her

lovely part....cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part
gr88 written how jai feels for bani
plz cont son
and thanks for the pms
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank you for the lovely compliments. My face is a combination of this :😃 and this 😳 right now. Glad nobody is home right now otherwise they will think I have finally lost it.

Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart
🤗



Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

is jai really married???? i dont know.. i have doubt regarding this... 😕
it was a nice emotional scene... bani moving out does it have any significance????

Jai is married. He did the saathe phere and all. I know you don't want to believe it (can't blame you😆) but he is maried

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

Hey brilliant part
awwwww poor jai that last bit made me laugh 😆 😆 😆 bechare ki yeh haalat hai, and you are laughing😆
i like the way his actually telling himself how wrong it is for him to have feelings for her in that way 😆 i think he should just go for it 😳 hahahhahahaha would you go for it? (maybe with Mr. Walia???)
i must say that song is not something i would listen to 😕 sorry hope u dont feel bad that i said this
I don't feel bad at all sweety. I know that it is a very old song, and just because I listen to it doesn't mean everyone should listen to it and like it. I love you honesty. Thank you for that.
plz continu soon


Taj

Originally posted by: divan

Ranjana perfect song to reflect her and his emotions...really a great update... 👏 👏 👏

thank you divan. glad you liked the song and the update.

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

hey
loved this part
that was really. sweet
jb scenes..
please do continue soon

thank you. so happy you liked one of the few JB scenes I write.

Originally posted by: Auditi

Awww!!!! soooo emotional Buddy.... 😭 🤗

Loved it.... it was superb.... 👏
Thank you😳
I have 2 get sum joota's to beat those voice inside Jai.... 😡
I have noticed that your Joota's, jharu's and belans are famous on IF. I'm glad you are dishing some out on my FF too.
cant believe he's thinkin his a married guy... i really wonder in real sense is he really married.... dis suspense is killin me.... waise bhi am very impatient yaar.... 😡
sabar karo, sabar ka phal meetha hota hai
Yaar.... feel lyk readin more... as if its not enuf.... hey hey hey now u dont cum afta me wid a jharu.... 😛 😳 😉
jharu's are your department na?😆 it is a hughe compliment to me that you feel like reading more.
Owww!!!! Bani doesnt even rememba huggin & cryin on Jai.... Poor Jai.... 😛 😉
she was too stressed to remember anything. but she will later.

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz buddy cont soon.... 😃 😉

thanks for liking the song.

Originally posted by: bdev

very nice, please update soon

BD

thank you. will try to update soon

Originally posted by: ragamthalam0

The mysterious wife is still not mentioned no she is not mentioned, but she is very much there
Jai is reprimanding himself for liking bani but when u think abt who wouldn't like bani? hahahahaha
How old is jai again?? he is 40 right now and Bani is 23.
So are u bring any competition for old mr. walia to deal with? just wait and watch😉
The part where she cried on swing is very well written Thank you. 😳
Please continue soon about the mysterious wife !

😃

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

😭
its soo emotional awwww, you were crying?

plz get rid of witch walia & make Jai free i'll have to. Don't have a choice otherwise you guys will kick me.
bechara hamesha office mai raat bitata hai
Ab kahin na kahin to jaana parega usko. BTW, tumhare ghar me jagaah hai? uska problem solve ho jaayega.😉

plz plz cont soon
-tropa

Originally posted by: btkr

That is a very very special song to me also, RR - my dad likes it and used to sing it a lot when I was younger - can totally identify with those feelings...great update!!!

that song has the quality to make you feel happy and sad at the same time.
thanks for the compliments

Originally posted by: kiranc

Great update. It was a very emtional. why JAi is holding back if he has felings for Bani.

thank you. He is holding back cause he things he is totally wrong for her,

Originally posted by: ejazanita

hi,

great part👏 thank you

loved it

so Jai is fallin 4 her bt denyin it coz he is MARRIED & too OLD 4 her

thats true bt we knw you Jai you cant be away 4rm her😆 We know, but he doesn't 😆

soon we'll find you spendin ur nite in her apartment😆

haila,😳😳😳

plssssssssssss update soon

bye n tc
u2

Originally posted by: davia389

not fair ye tune kya kiya?

humne kya kiya? sab kuch to yehi harte rehte hai.

sachhi mein jai huggy bani😆

he is tying to avoid ids feeling..

pls cotnineu soon make jb all alone in apartment😆

haila yeh tumlogon ke dimaag me kya chalta rehta hai???😆

isliye tp wo akelei chali gyai

pls continu soon

davia

Originally posted by: jeevikagurl88

wonderful part
please continue soon

thank you, will try to update soon

Originally posted by: phool527

😭 😭 😭 .. awwwnnn.. ranjana wat did u do..Humne kuch nahi kya, sachchi. aur yeh mrs.walia ka chakkar plzz clear karo and make our bani the new mrs.walia..tab to hamari kahani hi khatam ho jaayegi and who cares about age wen u got such a loving life partner..I know, but Jai is a typical man. He thinks the wrong things😆 anywayz plzz continue soon.. great part.. u made me 😭 😭 once again.. its like u have this power over us to make us 😭 .. even ekta couldnt do that... 😆 😆 ..I'm feeling maha guilty for making so many people cry. KS was the only show that could make me cry, but nowadays I only get mad when i watch. Ekta should take some lesson from IF writers, but not me, definitely not me but its so sad.. i could feel how bani feels.. finally having both her sisters getting married in such a good house.. but missing ur parents for the kanyadan... i would hate it if i wasnt able to do it for my sisters if i were n bans place..I would feel teh same way[/QUOTE]

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Posted: 17 years ago



sorry, I'm late....😛


That was great Ranjana....it's going really good...


Jai is falling for Bani....can't wait to know about his wife...


continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: the_rain




sorry, I'm late....😛
no problems

That was great Ranjana....it's going really good...

thank you


Jai is falling for Bani....can't wait to know about his wife...

Can't wait to tell you actually, but it is not the right time yet.


continue soon

i will

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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part.
liked it.
awww...Jai is stuggling with his feelings for Bani...as he is already married to some mysteries woman...whom don't even want to know about. 😆
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi guys,

Im updating in a hurry so i wont be able to PM you all. Maybe later tonight.

This update is speccially for Perveen who helpen me to pick out a name, which I will reveal tomorrow(suspence, suspence😆)

Thank you so much Perveen.

Looks like I made a lot of people cry with the last update. I'm feeling very guilty. sorry about that.

Hope you like the next part, It's a ligth part. You need it after the last one😉.

do comment and take care
Ranjana
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'Don't be ridiculous Jai! You know why you want to call her. Don't act like a love sick teenager. You are her boss, her guardian, too old for her and most important of all, you are married!!!!

Mr. Walia put down the phone and tried to concentrate on his work.

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Part 14

Aditya stepped in Mr. Walia's office, somewhat scared of how he would react on what Aditya was going tell.

'Jai, Mr. Khan somehow removed the file with his presentation from his hard drive. What should we do? Jai….Jai…..are you listening? He lost his presentation. The meeting is in 20 minutes.'

Mr. Walia looked up from a file.

'I have his presentation. Bani mailed it to me. Tell him to get ready.' And he continued with his work. To say that Aditya was shocked at Mr. Walia's reaction was an understatement. Jai Walia, the Raging Bull was not mad at his employee for deleting a file? Something was defenitely wrong.

'Jai, are you all right?'

'Yes Aditya, why are you asking?'

'No nothing. Jai, do you mind if I go home early today. Bani is moving out today and we are helping her shift.'

Mr. Walia looked up. 'Not at all Aditya.

'Thanks Jai. Ow by the way, Mausi invited you to dinner tonight, our daughters-in-law will be cooking for the first time today.'

'Adi I don't think I'll be able to make it, I………' the same voice in his head said:

'Come on Jai, say why you really don't want to go, or do you want to go?'

'Come on Jai, were also 'celebrating' Bani's moving out.'

Jai grinned at Aditya's sour face and air quotes at the word celebrating.

'I'll try Aditya'

'Jai, If you could bring Nikita to bless the couples………she did not attend the wedding too, and …………..well I just wondered……no matter what, she is their Mami.' Aditya walked out of the office.

Aditya arrived at the mansion around two. He saw Pushkar carrying a box with Bani's stuff, followed by Bani, who was carrying a suitcase.

'Pushkar, were are Tarun and Ranveer?' Aditya asked.

'I don't know Phuphaji. Abhi abhi yahaan the. And pushkar walked outside toward the moving van.

Aditya walked up to his room to fresh up when he heard some muffled voices coming out of Ranveer's room.

'Are nahin mamaji, isse yahaan mat rakhna, she will find it easily. I'll hide it in mamma and papa's room. Bani never goes there, she won't guess it is there.'

'theek hai Ranveer. But be careful. Nobody should see it.'

Aditya stepped in. He could see their backs when he shouted: 'What are you two doing?'

Both of them slowly turned around. They looked like the got caught steeling. Actually they kind of were. Aditya saw that both of them had a few of Bani's stuff in their hands. A picture, her diary, a few books and her laptop.

'Who Papa. Hum…….hum kuch nahin, we were helping Bani move. Hai na mamji?'

'Haan Ranveer. We were helping Bani shift.'

Aditya smiled and turned around to leave the room. 'Make sure you return Bani her stuff Ranveer, but not today. She will have to come tomorrow to pick it up. And only give her one item a day so she has to come home every day the next week.'

Bani's stuff got shifted in her new apartment. Her apartment was small, but just he way Bani wanted it to be. She had a nice kitchen, which was actally an open kitchen, a part of the living room, but Bani had a low wall constructed, with a wooden surface so it looked like a caf counter. She had a nice dinning area dining table and chairs, next to the kitchen counter. Her living area across the dining area was painted in a baby blue. All the fabrics in her living area were white. The curtains, the sofa set and the chair seating. Most of the other furniture like the table and TV cabinet were a combination of silver metal and glass. The enormous windows in that room were actually the doors to the balcony that Bani loved so much. In a corner of the living area Bani made a small mandir for her Ramji.

The two bedrooms in the house were situated on the left and right side of the living room. Bani's furnished her room with cherry wooden furniture and a cherry wooden floor. She loved the dark shade of the wood. Most of the fabrics in the room were in a deep red colour. The other bedroom was furnished with pine wood which was a light coloured wood and the room had light yellow fabrics.

The whole apartment had Bani's touch and Aditya, Tarun and Ranveer were very impressed the way she had decorated the apartment in such a short time. But as expected they did not show it. They were determined to find flaws and discussed every corner of the apartement amongst themselves. They were still pretending to be mad at Bani and were not talking to her. Bani made it a game to make them talk to her, and she won several times.

In the evening everyone gathered in Walia mansion for dinner. It was the first time Rano and Pia cooked something as the daughter-in-law of the house. actually it was the first time they cooked at all. They called Bani several times that day to ask them if the oil was hot enough, when to put salt, and what the h*ll the au bain marie means when you are making brownies for dessert. Despite this dinner smelled great when the table was set for dinner. Even Mr. Walia joined them.

'Jai, Nikita nahin aayi?'Aditya whispered.

Mr. Walia just shook his head.

Dinner was really good. Bani was so proud at her sister. Pia and Rano got royally teased by their husbands for calling Bani so many times.

During coffee Bani went to the room she slept in the last three years and came down with a few frames.

'Yeh kya hai Bani?'Mausi asked.

Bani showed everyone what she was holding in her hands. She made some copies of photos and framed them for her new apartment. Photos of her and her sisters when they were kids, teenagers and adults. A photo of her parents, photos of the family members, and a few photos she found after her fathers death including a picture of her parents on their wedding day with Uday and Krishna Walia, and a picture of her father and Mr. Walia when he was a teenager.

'Bani can I have a copy of that photo?'

'Sure Mr. Walia.' Bani turned around towards her boss, and saw him rapidly brush away a tear.

That night Bani went to her new home the very first time, after a huge argument between Pushkar and Ranveer, who were fighting over who was going to give her a ride to her apartment (they refused to call it home), and Aditya and Tarun were convincing her to stay just one more night. At the end both Ranveer and Pushkar dropped her off. When they left Bani turned around and said: 'Ranveer, I would like to have the things back you hid with Tarun uncle, before you leave for your honeymoon tomorrow.'

Ranveer just grinned back at her and left.

Bani went to Walia Industries the next morning. She just entered her office when Aditya signalled her with his hand to come into Mr. Walia's office.

Bani could not help but smirk.

'Adi Uncle are you talking to me again?'

Aditya just showed Bani his tongue.

'Can I come in Mr. Walia?' Bani stepped into the office with two cups of coffee

'Yes Bani, come in.

Bani stepped in and placed both cups on Mr. Walia's desk, one for him and one for Aditya.

Aditya childishly looked the other way, when he saw Bani come in.

'Bani, Aditya has something he wants to tell us.'

Bani giggled. 'Really Mr. Walia, does that us include me too? Looks like Aditya sir is really upset with me.'

'Aditya Sir!!!! Tum kabse mujhe SIR kehne lagi Bani!!!!' Aditya bawled. 'And why are you laughing now?' seeing Bani roaring with laughter made Aditya scream even loader.

'See uncle, I made you talk to me!!' bani replied mischievously.

Aditya and Bani burst out laughing. Mr. Walia jus looked at them and smiled. It took them a while to calm down and come to the actual point.

'Well actually Jai, I wanted to discuss the PA issue with both of you' Aditya explained.

'I took a few interviews and I have found a suitable candidate for you Jai. But the final decision is yours Jai. You can take an interview yourself. The new candidate said he can start immediately as your PA, and you actually need that. As soon as we hire someone Bani will be able to get back to her original post, and her own office.'

'Sure Aditya. Just check with Bani when I have time to take an interview.' Mr. Walia replied in a voice, quite alien to him.

The interview was scheduled for that afternoon. The candidate was qualified, disciplined and had really good references. But the only thing on Mr. Walia's mind was Bani. After the candidate left Mr. Walia called up Aditya.

'Aditya, find another candidate, I won't hire this one.'

Without giving any explanation, Mr. Walia hung up the phone.

A few days had passes since Mr. Walia he had turned down the candidate for the post. Bani was working full-time again. During these days it seemed like a world war was going on inside him. It was a war between his head and his heart. Every time when he would be thinking about the PA-incident his heart would be giving him a standing ovation for not letting Bani go, but his mind would curse him with every bad word he knew, or ever heard, for not hiring a perfectly capable PA and not being able to keep his promise of maintaining a distance.

Edited by RANJANA_RRJ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great update...seeing someone doesn't want to let his PA go.😳

Did Ranveer return her things before going on the honeymoon or take it with him? 😉

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