FF Illicit love: end part 40 p136 note139

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Niroo

@Niroo

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#141

hey
loved this part
that was really. sweet
jb scenes..
please do continue soon

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#142

Awww!!!! soooo emotional Buddy.... 😭 🤗

Loved it.... it was superb.... 👏

I have 2 get sum joota's to beat those voice inside Jai.... 😡

cant believe he's thinkin his a married guy... i really wonder in real sense is he really married.... dis suspense is killin me.... waise bhi am very impatient yaar.... 😡

Yaar.... feel lyk readin more... as if its not enuf.... hey hey hey now u dont cum afta me wid a jharu.... 😛 😳 😉

Owww!!!! Bani doesnt even rememba huggin & cryin on Jai.... Poor Jai.... 😛 😉

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz buddy cont soon.... 😃 😉

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#143

oops sooorry 4got to add sth Buddy..... 😆 😛 😳

i really lyk dis song too.... nyc selection.... 😃

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bdev

@bdev

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#144

very nice, please update soon

BD

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@ragamthalam0

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#145

The mysterious wife is still not mentioned
Jai is reprimanding himself for liking bani but when u think abt who wouldn't like bani?
How old is jai again??
So are u bring any competition for old mr. walia to deal with?
The part where she cried on swing is very well written
Please continue soon about the mysterious wife !

😃

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tropa

@moonlitnight

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#146

😭
its soo emotional

plz get rid of witch walia & make Jai free
bechara hamesha office mai raat bitata hai

plz plz cont soon
-tropa

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#147

That is a very very special song to me also, RR - my dad likes it and used to sing it a lot when I was younger - can totally identify with those feelings...great update!!!