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monix1981

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

yeah great part and i always look forward to your writings....keep em coming m thoroughly enjoyin em 😊 😊

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Hima

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

hi akka, wow just saw this ss ff oh ur. wow very well written as usual, can't wait to see jai and bani meeting nw.. :)

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HalleNJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Awesome!!.....as I said before, I really like your writing a lot and I enjoy reading them.....now waiting for JB to meet....please continue.....

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nishi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

nice part...........pls cont soooooooooooooon want to know what happened and what will happen

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Somali Mitra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Loved Bani's digs and Pushy's rejoinders. Kudos to you for coming up with such dialogue inspite of dumb and disgusting KS.
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btkr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

🤣 🤣 🤣
You can't ride two horses with one ass!!!!! Where do u come up with these one-liners from, Sheena? 🤣 🤣 🤣 Gonna finish reading now...

Yikes, don't even think about ending this ff!!!!!!!!! I love it - u want me to comment twenty times? will do it! 😉 I haven't commented on your other one Sheena darling, but will catch up...promise...

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k12345

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Shoba,

Great update...waiting for your fireworks between Jai and Bani.

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Swathi

@swathi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Hey shoba, I had completely forgotten abt this FF. I remember googling on the movie when I had read this 1st and slowly it all came back to me when I read the 1st part and the 2nd one as well. Jai looks like such a bum that I am really thinking as to how Bani will get back together with him. Possibly Bani never left her roots. I would love to read as to why thier marriage did not work out and how her parents came round to accepting J. hope that you have recovered well from your cold. and I agree with you KS is hardly inspiring to even worh a dekko !

Swathi

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juney

@juney

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Sheena,
When did you start this one. I wasn't aware.
Just finished reading both the parts. Pia is so different(she always is in ur stories) and I like her very much already. Is there going to be a flashback of their failed marriage?
Looking at Bani's attitude, she def needs to be tamed.
pl continue

ps: I haven't seen the movie, so this is the org for me :)

Edited by juney - 17 years ago

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@ragamthalam0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#40

I haven't seen the English version so its all new and I see it as your creation , its interesting to read , I was waiting for the story to develop ,, I cant believe bani is so big headed abt her success ,, I hope Jai is successful as well,, pia and puskar were great and strong characters,, they should prove to her how to survive even without ditching your husband , please continue soon looking forward to it

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