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Hey Sheena, read the parts all at once and I must say it was very well written! Sweet Home Alabama is one of my favourite movies and you've adapted it well in your story. Throughout the FF, I enjoyed Jai and Bani's conversations, some were very funny! Loved Jai's determination of getting Bani back and working hard at that because at the end he succeeded! Jigyasa and Karuna's fight was hilarious! Unlike the movie Sweet Home Alabama, Karuna didn't get punched out though by Bani 😆 Thanks for the sweet story! 👏 👏

@JohnAngad: Thanks dear, back to chemistry, yeah! Good luck in your exams.

@Hritzfan: Thanks sweety, will get to the other stories soon.

@Swathi: Dear Swathi, thank you so much for your comments through out. I wanted to keep this as a short story and tried not to digress too much with descriptions of Goa (I have been there twice,but when I was much younger, and forgot how it looks...) and New York. This was supposed to be a lighthearted, quick romance. I am glad you liked it.

@nema123: Thanks Nema!

@Siumi: Sukh, thanks! 😳 😳

@divan: Kanta, Sorry yaar, I was too sleepy that day and forgot to write about 'Princess B' - forgive me! I could have done a bit more repartee with Adi, Jigz, Karuna, tarun and such...

@jeenal20: Thanks Jeenal!

@jani4eva: thanks Jani!

@amiee: First of all sorry for taking this long to finish the story! Potluck was great, it was sad to send off so many good people...Thank you very much for your comments.

@ragamthalam0: Thank you dear!

@k12345: Thanks Priya =

pptm469: Heys sangita, thank you. Now I have to finish PG and then get to my longer epic DOTD.

juney: G, thanks for the lovely comments, yaar, I too liked Tarun, AD and like Meera - even though I still want JB together, I feel these characters actually had a lot of potential. He he, Mikasa and Akasa...I was actually going to say stafford or some thing, but Akasa had an Indian touch to it. Yeah, the epilogue should have said something about Bani's dream...

@niruba: Yes, he sort of did! I am a peaceful sort of gal, so Daksh gets Rano...every one is happy this way.

@nir_jaanu: Niru, you are insatiable, darling...I have to start working on Power Games now...so no more of this one.

@Khushboo2006: Cheery cheerry: The JB forever was a little tongue in the cheek humor. Your wish is my command, I will be updating Power Games tonight. And the poem as usual is very apt and wonderful.

@Suwas: Thanks suwas, I too liked the movie a lot.

@btkr: Bina, thanks sweety, I could have done a slightly better job with the ending, descriptions and the setting - but it was supposed to be mostly a cheery, JB forever kind of thing...glad you are doing well.

@coolgurl_2005: Preet, thanks very much for the comments. I want all out cat fight between Karuna and Jigyasa in KS, I would enjoy it so much.

@mb101: Maro, thank you very much for the comments. SHA was a cool movie, I don't think I even came close to the movie, but I just enjoyed writing a spunky Bani...

Thank you to all these PM readers.

@Nandita1209: Thanks for taking time and writing comments on all the parts.

@BrKataria: Bhavna, I am so grateful for you sending me comments on every update also.

@DocSleepy: Doc, You are the best, you consistently send comments on all the updates, even when they are very lame. Thank you.

@PKBaines: Pushpinder, thanks for commenting on LST. I am glad you liked it. 😳 😳

For all the silent readers, thank you for reading...I hope you had fun.

Hey Sheenaji,

I cant believe i did not notice this FF but come to think of it I am glad i did not read it before so I couldread it in one go.
It was really a love;y story although i was ready to bash some sense in Bani's head for being this rude.
JW sounded like a dream 😳 , but I can understand Bani for being ambitious, for both of them. Both were t fault in their marriage. The making up part was too sweet.
You have included some amazing oneliners 👏 👏 👏.

Thanks for such a wonderful story

Bye,
Ranjana.

p.s. thanks for letting Tarun meet his soul mate

p.p.s thanks for the Jigs-Karuna bashing 😆

Hi Sheena,

Just read the last part,great ending 👏 , glad Jai & Bani sorted out their differences 😃 & made up so beautifully 😳 , Jigs & karuna...........bony ass 😆 .

Please come back soon with another great story 😃

hiii shooo..
what beutiful epilogue..... great great... 😉 😉
plz do co0on ur other ff...
and tarun was in the other side?? 😆 😆
thnx 4 all ur time 4 all ur work ...we do love u and ur story 😳 😉 hope see u so0on enshallah..
❤️

Haila, just managed to catch up...........................khatam hua aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala!!! 😭

But loved every word jaaniiiiiiiiiiii 😳

Jai and Bani ka steamy scene to confessions and then the epilogue!!!! 👏 👍🏼

Tarun and George 😆 Gay bar!!! 🤣 😆 🤣

Daksh and Rano, good!!! 🤣

Awesome dear, simply awesome 👏 👏 👏

Shins babes,
you had a great Ff going but sadly it had to end. no matter the ending was just too great. loved all the parts, especially the parts between JB...they were awesome!

but i love the ending, the cat fight between karuna and jigz. 😆 also i loved Tarun, you made him gay! 😆 😆 😆 too funny....
neways i can't wait to have you finish your other SS

it was great shins.

rooj

PS: sorry for commenting late.