Short Story: If Only - Page 2

Saby dear,

(at times i have to read it with a pinch of salt esp when it relates to munni )

You can make that a bagful. 😃 😃 😃

Rgds,

Pri

Pri,

(at times i have to read it with a pinch of salt esp when it relates to munni )

You can make that a bagful. 😃 😃 😃

Yeah if u insist, no mind in accepting u tend to go overboard at times with the Blame Bani for all of Munna's faults.......bechara, doesn't have a backbone of his own, needs his munni to do all his dirty work and get blamed for it too 😆😆

omg yet again u made me 😭 😭 😭 that was wonderful!!! i loved it! 👏 👏 👏 i knw loads of times in life hwere i have sadi inly if nad wished i could turn back time but u just cant!

Rudyard Kipling's IF comes to mind...but only in a different context -

A tongue is more dangerous than the sword, and sometimes, if you keep it in it's sheath, and don't say what you really want to say, it is also dangerous.

Good message, Sabsj - Glad to see you active on the forum!!

Love,
- SR

hey sabs...good to see you posting messages on the forum...nice adaptation of the story ! true, if only is a word which we use very often thinking about what could have been !!! :)

Swathi

hey thats a wonderful and a heart touching story 👏

Sabs dear,
I'm soooo happy to see you on the forum. 🤗 ..... Thanks so much for the three-in-one deal. Each of your stories was enjoyable and conveyed a message - right from the analogy of death with Jai's four wives (which was as true as it was amusing) to the tragic tale which re-iterated that there's no calling back released arrows and words.....loved it...
I want to say just one thing – PLEASE DON"T STOP !!!

Luv,
Ammu.

tht was a lovely story!!! soo sad yet so meaningful! thanks for sharing!!!!!

i love the message of the story.........it's one of the rules that i try to abide by in my own life.....but there are moments when u just have to scream and yell and maybe hurt the person

lovely story 👏

Hey that was such a great story 😉 sad but with a very good message 😛

Taj

Awwwww MD 🤗 .... such an emotional story.....felt lump in my throat 😭 ....kudos to you....thanks for sharing....hope to read more from you soon

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This one is for YOU:

If only you knew
how desperately
I love you
If only you could see
how very much
you mean to me
If only you could hear
my heartbeat
when you come near
If only you could feel
how much
my love is real.