Short Story: If Only - Page 4

heyyyy,

thanxx so much for letting me know bout this SS, i missed it completely on the forum 😕 ….anyways I was getting quite bored wid no new ff to read today so thanxx to u thoda entertainment hogaya 😃 …….coming to ur ss,it was really gr8 and very touching 👏 butttttt kyia aapka sabko rulane ka plan hain day b4 yeaterday u wrote those 3 stories and now this one?? Yyyy??? 😭 😭 I am not an emotional person and I certainly don't like- feeling like crying staring at my comp, I feel rather foolish 😳 hehehehehe

reading ur story I felt too many "only ifs" too….only if jai wasn't a duffer 😡 ….only if bani wasn't an idiot for leaving like that….only if he had heard dat msg ……only if no 9\11 had happened dat way maybe u wouldn't have found a way to kill bani in this story 😭 😭 😭 and last but not d least only if u hadn't killed bani, I wouldn't be sad right now and write so many only ifs for u to read lol 😆 😆

okkkk can I make a small teensy-weensy request??? 😛 See u wrote 4 stories dat made ppl feel like cryin 😭 😭 now can u plzzzz write atlest one (if not 4) story dat will make us happyyyyyyyy 😃, plzzzzzzzzzzz, will u???? 😃

luv ya lodss
mahima

Such a sad story 😭 😭 😭The ending was so sad... Bani left a message for him and he didn't check...If only he had. They could have given their relationship another chance..but kismet ko kuch aur manzoor tha.

Fab story 👏 👏
Tazoo

that was beautiful sabs. i just loved it. if only we think before we say things we don't mean. If only...

Great story, loved it. 👏 👏 👏
But it was so sad 😭 😭 😭
words once spoken cannot be taken be taken, IF only we remember it before speeaking life would be so much more easy.

Kiran

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was such a sad n emotional story 😭 its amazing how u express so beautifully even in such a short story 👏 👏 😳 going great Saby keep it up 👍🏼
PS-thanks for the link 😃

If onlyhow many i told this words.
Yeah we never know how could happen tomorrow.
It's better to liva a life with remords than regrets.

In french there is a idiom who say: Ne jamais remettre demain ce que tu peux faire aujourd'hui.

That means Never do tomorrow what you can do today.😉

Yup, horrible words "If only..." - sad but true - emotional story.. glad to see u on the forum..A little patience goes a long way in relationships, I guess..
👏 👏 👏

Oh my god, Sabs that was so sad. 😭 but written very beautifully! Loved the theme of the story, hun.

Love,
Goddess

jaani

this is soo not fair

how sad!! 😭

Well done, a master class in SS writing 👏


Sharan XXX