SS: Walking on Water - Page 2

omg...that was simply awwsome!!! Great work , bristu... 😆 😆 !! That was too good!! Keep it up..

Luv
Your Raisu... 😆 😆

👏 Bravo!

That was simply a wonderful love story.

Thank you for a lovely story that fills the void KS has left.

Divan Thanks.....hm, it's a very common concept, I thought that I'd give a try 😆


Henzy , Hm, okie no problem, me will also reply slowly 😆.....


Liked the village part? 😛, a change is better for health once in a time...😆....dowry thing i hate too, but we have to keep the money ready for Tanu's wedding, remember? 🤣


Jai asked Bani's hand so quickly because I wrote this on my MOTW week and wanted to finish it off in short cut...😆😆


Okie, come back...😉

Updated 😉


Hm, you're clever 😆😆


Thanks Henzy.....hehe


😲 I made you what? I made you like JB? I'm so honoured......🤣



Raisu , thank you Janu.....😆😆, dekhechish ami kemon fakibaj? Porashuna kori na ekdom, tui to valo meyer moto shob pore felli


scifichick , Thank you dear...😊

Loved it then and loved it now again. Wonderful SS 👍🏼

Thanks Bristy 🤗 🤗 .

Hope you would come up with more soon 😃 😃 . Good job.
👏 👏 👏

🤣 Tanus wedding.. theres still time.. 🤣 slowly but surely nah 😆

its a great story you should write more! 😃

Bristy...that was fab!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Jai went out of his way to make sure Bani got her love back, but he turned out to be a loser!!! 😡
I am glad Bani recognised the love Jai had for her 😳 😳 when she disappeared in the swimming pool. That was a very sweet part..when she was listening in on his heartbeat. 😳 😳

Loved this ff..beautiful and simple. 👏 👏 👏 Big round of applause! 👏 👏

Tazoo

grt story
do cont . writing
dishita

Thanks Appi , you know when I'll write another one...😆



Henzy , there is time according to us, but according to her there isn't, as she's in hurry.....remember she wants to "carry" my & your share too & "marry" thrice.......what a genourous friend....


Tazoo Thank you Baby........the swimming pool part is my favourite as well....😉


Hmm, I try to do simple things as my head is too small to hold complicated things, or is it big? 🤣


Well, thanks again..😊


Dishita , thank you dear......😊

hii,
i loved it! 😃
gosh this pia! ughhhh! and pushkar? how could he? he is disgusting!
now to the main characters 😃 Jai and Bani! they were so sweet! especially jai! hayye! meri jaan! bechara! he did really a lot for bani! thank god she understood his true feelings! loved it to bits! 😃

i would really like u to continue! but i understand ur decision of not continuing! 😊