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daviashree

@davia389

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#121

that was a great end👏

write more emotional stories like this.. this will urely will help to awake a new emotions towards such poepel and help to help them out..

pls write more ff like this.. it has good message in it..

👏this for u..

looking forward for u r new ff

davia

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Harpreet

@hipreet

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#122

Lovely ending......
Pia and Kiran deserved to be left alone......
Great job

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***srk***

@***srk***

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#123

awesome ending! just like awesome FF! 👏 well done! 😃

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Shireen

@--__Shireen__--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#124

Hey Divan 😊

Great ending 👏 👏 👏 I loved it 😊

Kiran & Pia are now left alone 😆 which is the way it should be 😃 😃

Take Care 😊

From Shireen 😳

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#125

Read both parts in one go..very thought-provoking and will induce soul-searching...Congrats for taking on an ff like this and sharing your thoughts with us...
👏
bt

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scifichick

@scifichick

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#126

Divan that was magnificent.

I loved the quote from the Dalai Lama. I think I'm going to put that up at my work. There are mnay people there who don't understand what peace is or how peace can create peace.

If only there were more people like the fictional JW who would put their money to helping the poor, impoverished and uneducated. But instead, we have a world that wants to emulate the US where the rich are worshipped like gods and the rich use their money to get richer.

A wonderful ending to a beautiful story.

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#127

Hey Divan,

Excellent SS 👏.
Beautiful, amazing and very down at earth 👏.
Do write more, please. 😊

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#128

hey divan
lovely ending 👏

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nikita28

@nikita28

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#129

Hiya,

A perfect ending for a perfect story....It was truly beautiful.

Nikita

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Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#130

Divan the last update was simply fantastic. So beuatifully written. 👏 👏 👏
I really wanted to see Jai slap that Kiran though! Just her smirking made me wanna kill her! 😡 She just didn't let it out where Bani was. 😡

Jai promised Nishikant that he would bring Bani back...when Rano and the rest searched all over mumbai... was very well written. 👏 Seeing people living on the streets moved jai to the core as he wondered where on earth Bani was. 😔 U captured Jai's pain superbly 👏 👏

When they finally found her in Banaras..aww...i almost cried...i thought for a second Bani may be in the wrong hands...but she was safe. 😊

Jai was reunited with his Bani 😃 😃Glad nishikant left Kiran...he's better off without her!

Lovely and unique story divan!! 👏

Tazoo

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