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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#551

great parts! truly enjoyed them! 👏 👏 👏

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 17 years ago

#552

Dil,

I have been leaving comments on and off on your FF, whenever I caught up with the parts.

Just recently I realized that you are a 15 year old, and I just wanted to say that I am amazed at the maturity of your writing, it is very obvious that you have a mature soul...

You have a beautiful style with your writing, simple and straightforward story telling skills, and a very captivating and sweet romantic theme.

Please keep it up and I am sincere with my comments.

👏

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#553

Definitely a long awaited update! Loved Bani's confusion at JWs new attitude towards her and the fix of Adi/JWs friendship...

I loved how JW confessed to Rano that he was wrong, and even more how Rano somehow told him that Bani doesnt hate him like he initially thought..

Do update soon! Cant wait to read what happens!

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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#554

awesome updates.....enjoyed both parts......

Bani still suspicious 😕?
Jai apologizes to Rano..liked the conversation.
Wonder how Bani will react when Jai apologizes to her.....please continue soon...looking forward for your next update....

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Judith Audrey

@jeevikagurl88

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#555

Both parts were simply superb.Wonder how Jai will ask forgiveness from Bani and how will she react to this?
Please continue soon

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#556

ROFL...Masi messing with the Fireee...but haila...fire became ice???😆 ..Awwww...Jai feeling sooo ashamedd....hailaaa....Rano forgave him..👍🏼 ..just hoping now..Bani forgives him too 😳

Awesome part Jaani..👏

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#557

hi yaar...finally main aagayi 😃 😃 😃 ...i had to read ff updates b4 sitting to study for my midterm tomorrow... 😕 😕 ...

haila...the updates were great...jai and bani's interactions were awesome...its like they are walking on egg shells...lol...poor bani...all confused 😆 😆 😆 ...lol...but haila...jai's convo with rano in the car...aww...jiju ho toh aaisi... 👏 👏 👏 ...

sorry for short comment...but have to run...lots to do...lol...

JAZ

ps: i hope jai figures out soon that bani doesnt love pushy...she loves only him...JW 😳

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Harpreet

@hipreet

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#558

that was amazing parts
loved it
pls pls cont soon

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jani4eva

@jani4eva

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#559

awesome...awesome..awesome 👏 👏 😳
now i want soem JB bits 😳

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#560

Hey Dil Baby,its been so long since we have talked and had our long ff discussion. 😆 😆 hope the exams went well, if not you know already that you should start counting. 😉

wow, we get an double damaka,too good.the story is aheading towards something very beautiful and special. loved how you penned down bani's thought,her confusion and her feelings.very well done.Massi is truly the cupid, get these duffers to realize something.haila,she all blushing,too cute.nice to see an more humane side to JW.intereaction between Jai and Rano was written very well,the way he finally confessed and how Rano made him understand was done very well.hope he gains the courage to ask for her forgiveness and they can move on from there.will be eagerly waitin for the next part. 👏

preet 😳

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