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Posted: 17 years ago
excellent update!!!!!
loved it 😳 😳
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Dil

I didn't know what I was missing all these days.

God, I read ur FF in one go and it's like seeing the golden days of KS once again. So beautifully written and classy and elegant. 😛

Enjoyed every part updated by you and the tension between J and B seems to be simmering on the level surface now. 😳

Please update soon.

Thanks for this beautiful FF. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
gr8 part 👏
cont.sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was a fantastic part 👏

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak Jaye brought back some very old memories 😳

The right side of the bed is his 😉 What about Bani sleeping on the floor? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Tanu: See that you're first once again!😉 😆 Yes, Jigs is horrible. I know. Which is why I love her so much. 😆 and I know you all love to hate her too! 😉 God bless Mausi's soul. 😃 😆 Thanks, Tanu! I'm glad you're enjoying it! 😃

Anusha_tejpal: Hey hun, thank you so much! 😳 😳 Glad you're liking it so far! And yes, Bani is definitely in JW's den now! 😉 😆God help her soul! 😆

btkr: Thank you so much! 😳 😃

ridhijai: 😆 😆 😆 Jai will soon change. I promise. But for now, I'm liking his RB mode. 😉 😳 😆 Hate that the Creatives ruined who he originally was supposed to be. Anyways, thanks, i'm glad you liked it. 😊

Guli: Thanks jaan! 😃 Really glad you enjoyed it. Will continue soon. 😉

Taj: Thanks, hun! So glad you liked it! 😃

Shireen: Thanks, jaan! 😃 Am happy to know you enjoyed it. I guarantee that Jai won't do anything to Bani like take advantage of her or physically hurt her for wearing his mother's jewels. My Mr. Walia isn't like that. 😉 😳 😆

Heartbreak: Thanks, hun! 😃 I like the ending too. 😆

khushboo2006: Mausi is an angel sent from God to bring these two duffers together. 😆 Whether Jai will punish Bani or not... you will have to wait and see.

Nikita: Thanks, hun. It will take some time for Jai to soften towards Bani. But I assure you that i won't drag it too long. I just want his anger to cool down. I don't want it to automatically make it go away.

Ruma: Don't worry, this is an FF by me, of course Jai will fall for Bani. 😉 😆

Diey: Thanks, jaan! 😃 Sorry hun, but he is what he is. Arrogant. 😆 Don't worry, Bani will be fine. Soon. 😉 To answer your question, Mausi is an old oblivious woman, so forgive her for not noticing the strong tension between husband and wife. 😆

Ammu:Thanks Jaan, so glad you liked it! 😃 Bani is definitely in Jai Walia's zone now. Pray for her, will you? 😆

Niruba: You're too sweet. 😆 and you're absolutely right, it seems the more Jai and Bani run away from each other, the more they get stuck with one another. 😉
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Je_aime: Thanks, hun! Yes, I know, Jai really needs to stop listening to Jigyasa. But you can't blame him. The poor guy is confused and blinded with anger.

Ejazantia: Oh, great that I am replying to your comment, now I remember that I still have to catch up on your FF. I will try to do that very soon. I read your other one the other day and absolutely love it. Have to comment on that one too because I wasn't logged in at the time. Anyways, back to replying to your comment. 😆 I'm very glad you enjoyed it. 😃 Jai is an idiot. I will simply put it as that. lol. It was Mausi who called out to Bani. Sorry for not making that clear.

Nandita: Thank you so much! 😳 I hope I won't disappoint you further on into the FF. 😊

monix1981: Thank you a bunch, hun! 😃 Will try my best to keep up to all of your expectations.

Preet: Mausi! Thanks a lot! So glad you enjoyed it! 😳 Knowing that I have managed to build chemistry between Jai and Bani makes me realize that I have accomplished a great thing, so thank you for pointing that out! 😃 It definitely makes me feel good about myself. 😆 Don't worry about Jigyasa. I have something in stored for her later on. 😉

Hkaurk22: Thank you! 😳 Glad you're liking it! Will try to continue soon.

Jeenal20: Thanks, hun!

kuttu: thanks, hun! Am happy to know you're liking it so far. I agree, Jigyasa is in need of counseling. 😆 I might just listen to your suggestion if i can fit it into the story, because i have so many ideas going on in my head, that's it's proving to be tricky to bring it all together. 😆

culgal86: Thanks, hun!

hipreet: Thanks a lot, hun!

davia: You always want more. 😆 😆 😆 hahahaha! you're right, Jai does say it as if Bani's about to go run and take it away from him! 😆

siumi: thank you so much. 😳 😃 Glad you're enjoying it.

sushups: Will do, hun.

Sangitadas: Sangita Di ( I hope you don't mine me calling you that) I'm very flattered that you've read my FF and enjoyed it. Really, it means a lot to me. 😳 Thank you so much for your sweet comments! I hope I won't disappoint you further on into the story. 😊

janu_2006: Thanks, hun!

Chickster: Thank you, hun! 😳 Jai could have suggested for her to sleep on the floor, but i purposely have made no extra mattress available and no type of furniture in his room, so therefore he won't sleep on the couch or on a chair. 😆 Aren't I brilliant?
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
First of all, I'd like to thank everyone for leaving me such sweet comments!😳 They definitely made me feel good.😆 Anyways, here's the next part. Not so sure you will like this one. I certainly don't like how it came out, but i just don't know how to fix it. Hopefully it's alright.


Chapter 10:

Jai awoke by the sound of his alarm clock and to the sight of seeing the left side of the bed empty, where Bani had fallen asleep on last night. Without speaking another word to each other, both had gone to their own sides of the bed and silently laid down, making sure to build enough space between them. Except that hadn't worked all to great later on into the night when both had unknowingly gotten closer, only a couple of inches away from another. Bani's hair repeatedly falling onto or getting into Jai's face irritated him throughout the night and caused him to switch around plenty of times and also create space back in between.

He tiredly runs a hand through his hair, ruffling it up, and then slides his hand down to the back of his neck, rubbing it. Not bothering to wonder where his wife could possibly be, Jai throws the comforter off of him and gets up from bed. He tugs on his shirt, adjusting it. Sleeping with his shirt on, especially when it was so hot, was extremely uncomfortable for Jai, who had the habit of wearing no shirts for his nightwear and just having sweats or boxers on. He would definitely find it hard to adjust to this new change.

Jai walks on over towards the bathroom, wanting to quickly get ready and go off to the office, where he was sure a mountain of work was awaiting for him. Just as he approaches the bathroom, it's door flies open and he is momentarily taken aback by Bani's sudden appearance before him. She is wearing a dark blue saree with fine silver works and embroidery, her sindoor and mangulsutra in tact, and wearing only a pair of earrings and her wedding bangles. (sorry, I have no clue what you call them). She also bares a look of slight shock on seeing him in front of her.

Both, silently, move to the left, thinking of passing one another, but only end up getting in each other's way. On instinct, they both move automatically to the right, again blocking one another. They do this once more, moving to the left, both equally getting flustered and Jai a bit more annoyed. He stops her by raising a hand and then moving himself aside, giving her a passage way of getting through. Bani flashes him a thankful look and walks past him. Jai, ignoring her, goes into the bathroom and slams the door behind him. Bani shakes, a tad startled by the unexpected action of his.

Bani quickly mutters a prayer to herself, feeling frightened, for she did not know how she will be able to survive living with the very man who is set out to ruin her life….
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Bani, like usual, helps Tony set the table, and greets everyone at the table. Aditya smiles sweetly at her like he always does every morning. Dadi gives her blessings as does Mausi. Rano hugs her sister before sitting down in her seat. Saahil and Anu secretly smile at her when their mother isn't looking. Jigyasa gives her the regular glare she always flashes at her at Breakfast. Bani, as usual, ignores it. As Bani finally takes her seat, Mausi notices the head chair empty, which belongs to Jai.

Mausi: Arre, yeh Munna kahan hai? (trans: Where is Munna?)---Bani?
Bani: Ji, woh---- Mr. Walia---

Bani stops midway in her sentence as she sees Mausi give her a look. Realizing the meaning for it, she corrects herself hesitantly.

Bani: He must be still getting ready, Mausi. (quietly)

Mausi smiles as she sees Bani finally starting to avoid calling her Munna Mr. Walia.

Aditya: No, he had left quiet awhile ago. Just before Breakfast started.

Both Mausi and Bani look at Aditya across from the table, who chews his toast carelessly. Bani didn't see nor hear him leave for the office, and she was awake before him.

Mausi: How could he just leave without informing anyone?
Aditya: Something's come up so he had to go to the office early. Don't worry, he said he'll have something to eat.

That was what he always said, but Bani knew that he never did. He is always so busy and caught up with work that he always forgets to stop and just eat. She begins to worry.

Mausi: Aditya, make sure that he does, alright? I know that boy, he always forgets.
Aditya: (reassuring smile) I will, Mausi. …I should be going on myself. I will see you all in the evening.

Grabbing his bag and coat, Aditya gives his farewells and smiles an encouraging smile over to Bani, who smiles pleasantly back at him.
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Jai sits down in his chair, tiredly, and sighs outwardly to himself. He leans his elbow onto his desk and rests his forehead into the palm of his head. He hears his stomach growl and realizes how hungry he is. He should have grabbed something to eat on the way out to the office. Hearing his cabin door open, Jai looks up to see his P.A. walk towards him with a polite smile on her lips and holds a small tiffin in her hands.

Jai: Raashi, what's this?
Raashi: Sir, this is for you. It's brunch since you skipped breakfast.
Jai: (eyeing it) Where did it come from?
Raashi: Your Mausi had sent it, Sir.

Jai, feeling pleased and grateful towards his Mausi, smiles a light smile and indicates for her to place it on his desk.

Jai: Thanks. Now go on and get me the shares for the Goa project.
Raashi: Yes, Sir.

She leaves and shuts the door behind her. Jai, not wasting another second, opens the tiffin and digs into the delicious food. Repeatedly he thanks Mausi as he eats….
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Bani: Have you given it to him?

She speaks quietly into the phone and looks around the living room, making sure if anyone is around. "Yes, Ma'am, I have", Raashi replies back. Bani sighs and holds the phone closer to her.

Bani: Raashi, please don't call me Ma'am. I was your friend before I got married to Mr. Walia and I still am.
Raashi:… You're right. I'm sorry Bani, for being so formal. It's just that you're Mr. Walia's wife now…so….
Bani: Yeah, I can understand. …How's the office?
Raashi: The office is busy and hectic like always……and terribly boring without you. I wish you could come back.
Bani: You know Mausi isn't feeling well….I can't come back.

And the with the new project of building the new Casino on top of her home was a huge factor from preventing Bani ever coming back to the office again. But of course Bani wasn't going to tell her that. Raashi's a nice woman and friend, but definitely not a person who Bani can tell her problems to.

Bani:… Um, did you tell Mr. Walia that Mausi had made the food?
Raashi: Yes, I did….which I don't quite understand why. ..How come you are giving Mausi the credit for something you made?
Bani: No reason.
Raashi: Surely there has to be, otherwise you wouldn't tell me to say it was Mausi who cooked the food.
Bani:…Raashi, I-I have to go, Mausi has called for me. I'll just leave you to go back to your work. It was nice talking to you again.
Raashi: Bani--
Bani: Bye.

Raashi shakes her head as she hears the line disconnect and places her desk phone back onto it's receiver. She pulls a red file from out of the cabinet file and gets out of her seat, going back over to her boss's cabin….
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After awhile, hearing raised voices, curiously Bani and Rano come out of the guest room and walk out towards the living room where the commotion is occurring. Usually whenever they have time, the two sisters go into the guest room and try to spend time with one another.

They see each and everyone, minus Aditya who stands away from everyone with his arms crossed, hug and congratulate Jai, who smiles broadly at everyone. Finally Mausi takes his face into her palms and she kisses him affectionately on his forehead.

Mausi: May your success continue on, Munna….
Jai: Thank you, Mausi.

Jigyasa, the only one who notices Bani and Rano's presence, smirks and says in a teasing voice, "Oh, Bhabhi! Rano! Wouldn't you two like to hear the good news that Bhaiya has to share?" Jai turns around on this and stares at Bani with mischief looking eyes. Bani sees a small box containing sweets in his hands. She and Rano stare at everyone, confused.

Bani: (innocently) What news?
Jigyasa: The project that involves----
Jai: (intervenes) Jigyasa, if you don't mind, I would personally like to tell my wife.

Jigyasa hushes up, but continues to smirk to herself. Jai walks towards both Rano and Bani, wearing a devilish smile on his lips and his eyes gleaming dangerously at them. Bani becomes to grow apprehensive by this and looks past him over at Aditya, who wears a sympathetic look on his face. As Jai approaches he looks at her intensely. Bani stares at him, worried, confused, and slightly frightened. Her and Rano both exchange quick looks.

Jai: …You will be happy to know that I have managed to buy the land in Mount Abu and will soon construct a Casino there, which I am sure will be very profitable towards the company.

Everything inside of Bani seems to freeze and not function anymore. The color from Bani's face drains away and she stares at him with awe. Tears begin to sparkle in her eyes. Rano throws her sister a puzzled look. But Bani keeps her eyes focused on her husband who continues to smirk down at her. He opens the box of sweets and pulls out a ladoo. Bringing the sweet towards her mouth, Jai says in a biting tone, "Have a sweet for the joyous occasion, Darling."
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A bit short I agree, but then again you all got to enjoy a very lengthy one last time.😆 Comments are always more than welcomed! Please, silent members, it'd really mean a lot if you'd take the time to drop a comment here and there at times.

Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

that wame first

s rockign jb together and bathroom scnee 😆 was really funny.. playing bloacking game ..😆 rashi jai's pa😆 i feel abd for her..

next the mt abu.. i know now jai will take her there and make her see the falling of her house and tauint her more i am feelign bad😭

pls cotnineu soon soo mean soon not late 😳

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was a brilliant update 👏

i loved the bedroom scene...too bad her hair didn't get stuck to him... 😆

tht was sweet of bani to send foood awww 😳 ....i wonder if he'll find out 😕

the last scene was brilliant too....i can really picture him and her standing and him offering laddoo....awww 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
It was a good part 😊

Its not like you can have them falling in love in one night 😉

Jai is such an a*s-hole 😡 But I love him just the same 😳

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