SS loving the Wrong Person end pg23 - Page 2

Mamta, JW should realise his mistake and come back, after all he doesnt believe in marriage because of his parents, so I think he needs a home where he can get the love and affection he missed and the trust he didnt get in a relationship again! He should be given a chance and how is Bani complete without Jai Walia 😉 ?

Fab SS.
very emotional 😭 😭 😭
Jai a complete jerk 😡 😡 😡.....hope he will realise what he is at loss of...
plz do complete the story.

Great story Mamta but sad though. Waiting for the next part from you soon

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excellent. i want jai to come to bani's life and see how happy bani is with the child...and in the end they should be together 😛

Originally posted by: *Piku*

Questions

Do you want the baby to live? Yes, After all Bani has gone through all the hardships to bring the child to this world. Loosing the child can probably make her loose all the hopes and aspiration in life😊.
Do you want Jai to be back in Bani and her baby's life after 8months. That would be, a father's presence is also very much important in the child's growth😳 Should Bani forgive Jai? If he is really guilty of what he did and is ready to be comitted to Bani and the child, then I think he should be given a chance😃
1. Do you want another person for Bani? Or no jai in the story, just the cameo. NO, I really don't want another person for Bani. I love Jani jodi😍. I hope Bani will bring Jai back to his senses and make him realise his mistake😳

Hope we will get to read the next update soon😳

hey mamta
loved ur short story.
.it was awesome
omg although.
.this would be like the first that i am going to say this.
but anyways.
jai is mean...

and to ur questions

only only and only jai shoould be there for bani..
and i want that little baby..
born..
as i want to see jai talk to that little baby..
and ask.. that baby to forgive him..
that would be like the part.. to read..
will be waiting for the next update.
please
continue soon

Hey Piks,

Well done dude 😉

Really nice story...looking forward to reading the next part of this...

Loved the way the emotions were portrayed and I really like the social relevance of it...

This story I will surely keep up with 😳


Love you,
Shruti

I only just noticed the addition of the questions!

First of all, I would be in favour of the baby getting the chance to live. At the end of the day, babies are innocent and they do not choose to be in the position that they are in... so where ever possible, it is nice to give children every chance they can get.

Right then, whilst I'm not really attached to fiction, if that thing happened in real life, then I would give a person like Walia (from this story) a chance - over my dead body and when hell freezes over.

If a person is irresponsible, then they shouldn't put themselves into positions where they can father any children. And then on top of that, the guy wanted to get the child aborted... that makes him a total loser in my eyes. When a guy asks for something like that, and then walks out, I don't see the guy being worthy of forgiveness. Some things can be forgiven, but I personally class what he did as unforgivable.

I mean, I honestly do not think that any of the ladies I know would ever take back any person who asked for that and then walked out...

As for this story, just because he is Walia and she is Bani, I don't personally see that as a ticket to granting him forgiveness. So whether it is Walia, or any other guy on the planet, I wouldn't like to see a guy like that get taken back. 😳

And finally, another guy for Bani... I'm not too sure to be honest. A father figure would definitely be good for the child. On the other hand, it is possible for a strong lady to still give a child all that it takes to be happy in life. Good guys do exist in the world and if Bani was able to find a good guy, then I suppose it could be good for her. If not, then she can strengthen herself and take on life.

God bless.

Thanks everyone for your wonderful response, actually
this was my English assignment that i had turned on Thursday, used JW as a inspiration and then named him another character Jay Walker.

The class assignment was to write a story using reality problems, death, separation, fights, etc, then i used this. When my class mates was reading this they all wanted to kill the character portrayed by Jai, one of the guy was like what a irresponsible jerk.

Loved the answers to the questions, this is one of the issues that happens in social life, most women don't have child when they are married, and baby is born out of a wedlock where the father doesn't want anything to do with it.

The paper i turned in the JW was a cameo and it was the baby and the mother, see i didn't forgive the character for turning out on the responsibility because he was a** and irresponsible person who ran away.

Thanks everyone for commenting🤗🤗🤗

The shattering of the glass vase, had woken Rano from her sleep, she looked at her towards her clock it was 12:30am. She was dreaming that someone was throwing rocks into her windows, and her window was shattering, and there was no one to help her escape.

The shattering of the glass, sound so really, could it be someone in this house? Maybe its mother she said to herself, as her mother has the habit of waking up early on holidays, making sure that everything is prepared. Or maybe its her younger sister, and she can be munching for morning snacks

Looking at her side, her husband was sleeping peacefully; quietly she decided to slip out of the bed and headed downstairs with a sliver metal flash light.

Closing her bedroom door she noticed that the door was slightly open, which was odd, because her door is never opened no matter what. Taking a few steps towards the room, peeking inside she saw the bed was empty. Her eyes fell towards the rocking chair, which was moving back and forth, as someone had sat on the rocking chair. Taking a step closer to the rocking chair, she her eyes grew big

OMG, there on the floor was her older sister, her Bani lying unconscious her hand was on her lower abdomen, and the glass pieces were shattered around her.

Bani wake up she screamed, as she shook her. Getting hold of the Bani's cell she dialed 911, explained to them to get an ambulance there asp.

Red lights of the ambulance flashed, as it made its way into the night, speeding its way towards Kaiser Hospital. Rano was by her baby sister side, inside the hospital while their parents and her husband followed in a separate car.

Even though Rano was seven years old then Bani, both of the sisters were close side-by-side, sharing secrets, talking away through out the nights. When Bani wanted to be dental hygienist it wasn't a surprise to her parents or to her.

She carefully caressed the head of her sister, and prayed everything was all right for both her sister and her future niece or nephew.

The ambulance had stopped; the paramedics entered the ER with Bani lying on the stricter, shes gaining conscious on of the paramedic said.

Everything was blur, she was half opening and closing it. Bani can you hear me don't close your eyes, save my child, she whispered, just pl…ease her voice was trailed off as she lost conscious once again.

Save the baby, was the last thing she said.

Blood pressure scarf was put on her right arm, and oxygen mask on her nose. Doctor we have to c-section fast, the baby has switched the position of his head and it will hard for her to deliver.

It's case no. 1906, get the doctor whose

Outside the operation theater Rano was pacing around front and back, worried about her baby sister.

As the operation was going on, Bani could smell his cologne, maybe the oxygen was making her hallucinating and imagined that Jai was close by and so near her, even after 8 months of not seeing him she could feel his appearance in her mind. Closing her eyes dreamed that Jai and her were married and leaving in her dream house in Fremont with their child. Bani was wearing a pale yellow summer dress as she and Kai were holding each side of small fingers of their baby, and teaching her to take a first steps.

As she looked up, she saw the bright yellow sun, suddenly she was feeling really hot and dizzy as she became to blink, and next moment she knew her head was hit on something cold and she felled to the grounded hitting her head hard. Before closing her eyes the only people who she saw was concerned jai with their daughter.

Four hours later, lights of the operation theater went off, as the doctor saw the eager family member of Bani Dixit waiting.

Congratulations your Miss. Dixit has delivered an healthy baby daughter with weighing 7pounds 9 ounces, said a female voice.

Ranveer hugged his wife, while Nishikant hugged Kiran and they looked eachother..

How my sister, Rano asked looking at the doctor, with mix emotions. With concern miss dixit is under observations she had an c- section, but we can't say anything as she is unconscious.

Doctor Sam, Dr. Sam, the nurse came out, looking at her, dr. is calling you the patient is sinking, as she was hurried inside the operation theater into the room. The last beep went on, Dr. Sam and looked at the doctor, who eyes were in the state of shock he had lost.

Taking her mask off, Dr. Sam went outside, I am sorry Mr. & Mrs. Dixit is all she could say…

Dr. what do you mean by sorry? Said the cold voice of Mr. Nishikant say.

Mr. Dixit, your daughter has gone into coma.

Coma, Kiran hazel eyes grew big, she went into coma.
When will she be out of the coma? Rano asked the doctor a half shocked, half tearing her voice was fading as Ranveer held her in his arms.

Only god knows when she is out of coma, said the Dr. Sam as she took a deep breath, but to me it looks like your daughter had lost the hope to live.

Hope? How can my daughter loose hope to live, when she has a daughter to bring up. Tears were in her eyes.

I understand Mrs. Dixit, everything will be okay just have faith in god. Said Dr. Sam who wanted to live the place, as she knew it was hard for families when it came to loosing the people they loved.

Where is my granddaughter Dr? I want my granddaughter said Kiran.

The dark eyes watched as they washed his daughter being clean and wash by the nurse. He couldn't believe his luck, how ironic was that the child he did not wanted, he had delivered.

Nurse I will put her in the nursery. Dr. Walia are you sure? He just nodded his head.

His dark eyes looked at his daughter, she resembled had her mothers eyes, but she had his thick dark black hair, and his dimples.

She was small angel wrapped in a pink blanket, her eyes were open and sparkling, he felt a pain in his stomach.

I am sorry sweet heart for living you and your mother behind when you and y our mom need me the most. He touched his daughter's head, picked her up, kissed her forehead, and slowly placed her into the hospital crib so she can be in the nursery. I just hope your mom forgives me.

The door of the room opened, as he saw Mitali one of the nurse in the nursery area, came in. Dr. Walia, the child's aunt is getting impatient and so are her grandparents.

Is the mother getting impatient to meet her daughter? Jai asked, he thought that Bani would be the first one who would want to see their daughter.

The child is not that lucky Doc, she said taking the child in her arms. Her mom is in coma; after the baby was left she had sunk into coma.

Coma? He looked at Mitali, his eyes grew big in shock.

Dr Walia, are you all right?

Snapping out, yes, I am fine, he lined to her, Bani was in coma that is all he knew, his heart was paining to see her.

Come on Asha Jyoti, the Nurse Mitali said looking down at the beautiful baby girl, your grandparents are aunt are eager to see you.

Asha Jyoti, Jai repeated to himself, his daughter name was Asha Jyoti. As he watched baby leave with nurse Mitali.

Plese leave your comments whether its good or bad, suggestions and feedback is also welcomed. Please ignor my knowledge of the hospital, i dont have any clue. 😳

Happy Reading

Piku