FF-Unche Log part 2A and 2B on pg 3 - Page 2

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Meri Pyaari Sherni,

Kidhar tha, I don't see you much on the forum these days!!

You started an FF, doll...I missed them!! Awesome start, village setting, arre yaar, mein bhi village setting kiya, aur tu bhi. Bani is a teacher. I hate the Shakuni guy, just like Mahabharath. Dinanath seems to be better than old Nishikant...

Can't wait our Teacher amma to meet with our Jai buddha...

Fantastic darling....Agar tumhe bhook laga to bol dena, I will send some Biriyani package....

Hamare Forum ki pyaar Behna,

Great Start...Childhood FF are great reads!😃

Very interesting premise, curious to know how the story will progress!

Bani seems to make a great School Teacher for some reason! Wating to see how JW and Bani meet!

Please continue soon...

Cheers,

MT

PS: Oye tune bataya nahin what the PPC gave for your Birthday😉 Kahin Repto ko toh hi pack kar ke nahin de diya tha kya?😉😆

thanks janu_2006 for reading my ff and ur lovely comments.

kya sheena billi i was not on IF for only 3 days and that too because i was on my way and yaar now i am here for almost 7 long days and i am mostly killing my time on IF only 😉, will be starting office from tomorrow. yaar missing my piece of cake or i am thinking that instead of piece now i will grab whole sheena in one punch 😆 and that way i will be saved from cooking for one complete day, u know na how much food one sherni needs in a day 😆. dear i have lots of time so i have started writing this ff 😉 but it is a sad story and dinanath is not even remotely same as sharabi ND. dinnath is really a great person. sorry but bani will be a teacher but of some stupid subject that u will come to know soon, and in my story no lovey dovey scenes between JB for sure, i can assure one Ff full of violence, pain, and blood 😉 waiting for biryani thodi jyada bhejna, as i am feeling hungry after ages 😆

MT dear thanks for reading my stupid story yaar, but i think i am no where near a writers and i am sure u will be disappointed reading my ff 😉 dear in my ff bani won't be a normal school teacher, but she will be teaching something which people mostly hates 😉 dear JB will meet soon, but in my ff milte hai dil yaha mil ke bhichane ko😭
dear u r right PPC gave me repto as a gift and with liberty to do anything with her and in return i finished her in my dinner 😆 thanks dear.

swati

Hey Swati
Your title of the story reminded me of the movie Unche Log of Rajesh Khanna
Great story, i love childhood stories, the days of the innocence and masti
i liked the name pran, it reminds me of the actor Pran, i hope he will not be a villan
SHakuni, reminds me of one of the characters from the Mahabhrat and its very similar also
I have a feeling that Pyare Mama Shakuni will be a bad infulence over one of Uday's son Jai ya Pran
I knew Pran will be a villain
Omg i have feeling that Pran will want to separate Jai and Bani under the infulence of his mama and some how bani will end up marrying him
please write soon😛

mamta dear thanks for reading my ff. yaar u r right pran and shakuni are villain in my story (earlier i was thinking about naming him amrish puri 😆 ) but pran won't come between JB, yaar he is a bewada he don't do anything so how can he do something to break JB 😆

posting part 2

thanks dear

PART 2 A

This year Uday walia was taking part in assembly elections and he was really trying hard to win the elections and for this he was distributing free liquor to people to earn their votes with the help of shakuni and this has turned dinanath against him as he wanted him to run for elections in fair way, but this was the first time that UW has told dinanath that he is superior to him and has uncha position in society and he has better brain so dinanath should not waste his garbage mind about his affairs.

In past 4 years dinanath tried a lot to stop UW to going to meet barnali and to stop drinking but UW always politely refused to so, but now today when dinanath started telling UW to take care of his family and health UW got him thrown out of his haveli and instructed him not to enter his premises ever again and that was just the turning point of their friendship and from there the relations have further soured after shakuni told UW that dinanath daughter is after their wealth and that's why she is following JW everywhere and people are gossiping about JB and that further infuriate UW mind and he told shakuni to do to get rid of bani and to do something to keep JW away from bani and in this way JW was also sent to london for further education and he got separated from bani but not before promising her that he will be back soon after completing his studies and then they will marry and will be together for lifetime.

UW won the elections and this increased his confidence in shakuni and that was time when he got a rishta for his elder son pran from a very rich family and this was the way shubhangi came to their family as bahu. Shubhangi was a very well behaved girl from a very rich family and was the only girl in family and was loved a lot by his father and brothers and they were the one who can do anything for happiness of their daughter/sister and she bought a lot of money and wealth along with her and this increased UW position in society to a new heights and now he was not richest among villagers but also he was the biggest industrialist of his state and he opened a number of sugar and textile mills while his son pran got involved in new business of hotel chains and restaurants.

UW and Sudha have thought that after marriage pran will become responsible and will take care of family and business, but how was that possible when shakuni mama was his uncle. Shakuni told pran that biwi toh paav ki jooti hoti hai, jaab maan aye uska istemal karo aur jaab maan aye laat mar do and that thing entered Pran's mind and pran who has started falling for his wife started falling for alcohol and whores once again and his mama ensured that he never comes in his senses and he was always surrounded by girls and liquor. Time passed and fled. Meanwhile Sudha and shubhangi tried a lot to change habits of pran but he was reluctant and when UW asked him to take care of subhangi else his father and brother will turn potential enemies he answered his father back about his relationship with barnali and how he has always mistreated his mother and when he is also doing same why it is effecting him and that was the last time UW told his son to mend his way and life continues. Subhangi was from a very good family and never told her family about her situation in Walia family as she did not want to hurt sentiments of her parents and brothers and was sure that they will put walia's in grave if they will come to know about her situation. So she always covered for them whenever she went to her mayaka and posed to be happy in her married life with pran.

Time has once again fled like air and again general elections were there and on the same time JW was coming back after completing his studies to India. When JW came back he just could not believe his eyes so much has changed in last 5 years, her mother has turn 20 years more old in 5 years while he was dreaming of a happy bhabhi having fun with his brother he came to face a lady who was drown in pool of sorrow and his brother who used to be champion and topper in school at one time was indulged in all type of bad things and he has gone to the extent that he offered JW to come and drink with him. After meeting his family Jw just run towards fields to meet his love of life and only he was aware of fact that how he has spent these 5 years away from bani and how her letters used to make him happy and how her face used to be in his dreams every night.

In last 5 years UW was not at all bothered about bani as he thought that by the time Jw will be back from london he won't remember bani at all and his taste must have changed, but very little he knew was the fact that like his elder son was his replica, jw was exact replica of his wife Sudha and he has not forgotten his sanskars even in london and was still away from alcohol and girls and only thing he has done in london was studies and he was very serious student as he wanted to complete his studies as soon as possible so that he can go back to bani.(that was the depth of his love for bani how can UW understand his love for bani (Bandar kya jaane adrak ka swad)

Meanwhile bani has completed her graduation and was now doing her PG and she turned into the most beautiful girl in the town/village and a number of people from good families have asked for her hand for marriage and dinanath was just trying to finalise her marriage, but he has noted one thing that how good proposal was bani has always said no to proposal and he was worried about her behavior.

PART 2 B

Once JW returned UW was always busy with Barnali and his campaigning for elections and he never paid any attention to JW and the rumors about JB affair started going in village and everyone in their town was talking about them only and a number of people advised dinanath to get bani married before something bad happens, but he had full faith on bani and he said that JW and bani are only good friends, but when this news spread like fire and reached walia haveli UW turned mad and he called for JW and told him in no nonsense words to break all ties with bani else he will throw him out of his life and house, but JW was adamant and this was the first time even UW's wife Sudha stood by his son instead of husband and said that even she wanted to make bani her bahu and UW left house in anger and reached bani's house and told dinanath to get bani married as soon as possible else he shld be ready to face consequences and that's when dinanath came to know about whole situation and when he questioned bani she told him that she will do whatever his wish is and at that time dinanath left the house to fix up bani's marriage.

But JB affair turned out to be bone in UW neck as the news that he is a dowry seeker and greedy person and has turned down master dinanath daughter just because they are poor spread like fire in town and that was when shakuni came out with one more idea and that lead to Uw going to bani's house to ask for her hand and fix up JB marriage and sudna, shubhangi and JW were on moon when they come to know that UW is ready for this rishtey and then engagement was fixed up for the next week. (UW agreed for marriage else he might have lost in elections)

Shakuni has told UW that once election will be over they can stretch date for marriage and can change the situation as per their profit, but faith has something else in mind. Shubangi's family came to know about pain of their daughter from some one from near by village and they came to rampur and took their daughter away from there, she was not ready to go but they forced her to leave his sasural and that way shubhangi went back to her mayaka.

Sudha was alone and was preparing for marriage and on the other hand UW was getting furious that now even shubhangi family will oppose him and he may lose elections and bani a totally karki girl was gonna make bahu of walia family and he cannot expect any type of monetary or financial favor from dixit's. On the other hand he has fixed marriage of his only daughter with a very settled and well educated boy from lucknow who has returned from london after completing his education and marriage date has been fixed before election, so he was in lot of tension and he just wanted to get rid of bani's tension and that was when shakuni and UW made a plan to get rid of bani.

Bani and JW engagement and marriage of JW's only sister happened on the same day and even shubhangi came to attend the marriage anticipating that may be her absence may have changed views of pran, but she was shocked to see that pran did not pay any attention to her presence and when she tried to speak to him he only asked her when she is leaving and that broke her heart into pieces and she left for her mayaka immediately after marriage.(by the way JW's sister jigs got married to shubhangi's cousin.

In this story jigs is a typical indian girl who has values and believes in fact that pati parmeshwar hai (let's see until what time her views remain intact).


After engagement bani's and Jw meetings have further increased and they were on top and they keep on sitting in each other arms in their fav spot in garden and they used to spend hours over there. One day JW took bani for a movie and at that time bani introduced him to manager Kundan of that hall who happened to be brother of bani's friend disha (even kundan was interested in marrying bani but she has said no and this topic was never again raised and he has helped bani a lot with money in her bad days during last few years and still was very much attached to bani), but JW felt somewhat jealous when bani introduced kundan and when later she told him that even he was interested in marrying her he turned really angry and left bani alone and in garden. Bani was not able to understand reason for sudden change in mood of JW and she also went back. But again in morning JW missed bani a lot and came to her college and took her along with him to garden and then while resting in her lap he told her never to meet or mention anything about kundan and bani promised him that she won't talk to kundan again.

Time passed and in few months time UW again won the election and this time his eyes were on position of minister and he was trying hard to get a great position in ministry as that will lead to increase in his money and wealth and that was when Chief minister asked for hand of JW for his daughter pia and when UW told him about JW engagement, he told him that if he want chair of minister he will have to make pia his daughter in law and with that talk UW came back to rampur and told shakuni about the talk that he had with Chief minister.

After few days everyone in town was talking about only one news and were feeling sorry for master dinanath as his eldest daughter has eloped with Kundan manager of cinema hall in night. When JW get to know about the news he just could not believe his ears, but then his father told him not to worry as he won't let anyone sit ideally and will try to find bani asap as she is future daughter in law of walia family and he dialed a number of people and told them to look for bani and to find out bani asap. Master dinanath could not digest this news as he has faith in bani even more than the faith that he had in himself, but when Uw told him that he will help him find bani he just fall into his feet and told him he is great.

sorry for long boring parts, but i will finish this story in 7-10 parts😉 so won't be boring u much.

please do post ur comments

swati

hey swati.............

great part..................

bani eloped with kundan ..................

wats the twist................

update soon

Swati love your ff. I like reading about dinanauth and Uday and Sakuni(there is always one of those around).

Please make JW stand up to Papa and Sakuni and not marry Pia. In fact may be we can have a mini Mahabarat between Sakuni and JW.

Keep writing.