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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatinarang




MT dear thanks for reading my stupid story yaar, but i think i am no where near a writers and i am sure u will be disappointed reading my ff 😉

Swats,

If you say that again, I will make sure you recieve Repto gift-wrapped in a two-piece animal-print Bikini for your next Birthday...or maybe for Diwali, cause its nearer!😡😆

Coming back to the second part, you are also part of Guli's Bullet Train Express it seems. Dhan Dhana Dhan Updates!👏

Not only your title, but also the rural setting reminds me of the Rajesh Khanna (He was an amazing actor and so good looking too!) movies! Loved it!

Tera Shakuni toh sach mein Shakuni nikla😡 Hope he meets the same end as his Mahabharat Counterpart!

And please, please, please do anything, but don't get Bani married to Pran... Bilkul aisa mat karna!

Jai reminds me of Rajendra Kumar who used to always go to London to get his 'Vilayat ki Degree'!😳

Bani ka kya hoga? I hope Kundan is only her favourite jewellery and nothing else!😔

Since Pia is the CM's daughter, we can hope that some or the other Terrorist will kidnap her and keep her in Kazakistan or someplace like that!🤢😆

UW is a full-too creep...typical politician!🤢

Am confused a bit on Jigs! Adi and she are married, right? Do clarify!

Lovely story, unfamiliar setting, spicy characters! Blockbuster ki perfect recipe!

Aise hi fast paced likhti raho, unless you want your Inbox inudated with threatening PM's to update soon!

Love,

MT

Edited by mistletoe - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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culgal thanks dear for u comments and i will try to update soon.

tazo, meri pyari billi i know kuch jaldi ho gaya, but kya karo i was free and after that i will be busy throughout week so i have updated yaar. dear i am in zurich for 4-6 months on official assignment and will be joining office from tomorrow morning so i was just enjoying my time on IF for last 2 days 😉
yes dear UW won the election and shakuni ke raang mei raang gaya hai and he is going to be main villain in my ff, but u don't know what will be his end like 😉 . Jw is really nice till now but i think he is also gonna change after bani's dhoka 😉 😆 and dear ur sneaky feeling is correct to some extent and yaar this twist change the entire story of my ff now and there won't be any JB love now onwards, just tears will be there 😭 dear till now i have not thought about the name of jigs husband but i think name aditya will be great and now u r right aditya is shubhangi's cousin married to jigs and he is also going to be a negative character 😉 (haila no positivity in my ff at all)
thanks for liking billi ji and yaar even i remember that movie unche log in bits but don't remember exactly so do tell me what was theme of that movie 😉 (actually yaar this story i read in one of hindi novel, the first novel i read in my life and got punishment for reading that 😆 and as far as i remember name of that novel was unche log 😉 ) dheere bol mummy ko maat kehna😉

i will try to update next saturday and part will be big and boring like this one only 😉



Divan dear thanks for ur lovely comments. i want to fulfill ur wish of no JP marriage , but i am extremely sorry in my story this has to happen for sure although what willhappen after marriage won't disappoint u 😉 (i am gonna make pia mental patient 😆 )
thanks once again for ur lovely comments.
Edited by swatinarang - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistletoe

Swats,

If you say that again, I will make sure you recieve Repto gift-wrapped in a two-piece animal-print Bikini for your next Birthday...or maybe for Diwali, cause its nearer!😡😆

MT dear i won't mind repto in that costume and i will grab her raw , log mujhe aise he bhooki sherni nahi kehte as i am always starving😆

Coming back to the second part, you are also part of Guli's Bullet Train Express it seems. Dhan Dhana Dhan Updates!👏

yaar i was free yesterday and i won't be free for entire week now so i have updated that super fast.i have shifted to zurich for my next project that may take 4-6 months and will be starting office tomorrow 😆 morning

Not only your title, but also the rural setting reminds me of the Rajesh Khanna (He was an amazing actor and so good looking too!) movies! Loved it!

dear actually i don't remember that movie that much can u help me with story of that movie, rajesh khanna was really great actor and i loved his work in anand and aradhana and one song mere sapno ki rani kab aoogi tum, one of my favorite song😉

Tera Shakuni toh sach mein Shakuni nikla😡 Hope he meets the same end as his Mahabharat Counterpart! be assured of that he will get worse ever possible end in my ff

And please, please, please do anything, but don't get Bani married to Pran... Bilkul aisa mat karna! yaar pran is already married to shubhangi then how can he marry bani, bani has eloped with kundan😉 pran won't have much role in JB life

Jai reminds me of Rajendra Kumar who used to always go to London to get his 'Vilayat ki Degree'!😳

i know even i remember rajender kumar going to vilayat and u know even i wanted to use word vilayat instead of london then i thought some people will ask the meaning of that😉

Bani ka kya hoga? I hope Kundan is only her favourite jewellery and nothing else!😔 yaar bani is not at all inclined towards kundan, but kundan is a negative character and something really bad is going to happen with bani

Since Pia is the CM's daughter, we can hope that some or the other Terrorist will kidnap her and keep her in Kazakistan or someplace like that!🤢😆yaar i am going to make her completely pagal although she won't have much role to play but she will be completely mad in my ff

UW is a full-too creep...typical politician!🤢 u r right he will be main villain in my ff

Am confused a bit on Jigs! Adi and she are married, right? Do clarify! ya aditya and jigs are married and ya jigs and aditya are married they got married on the day of JB engagement

Lovely story, unfamiliar setting, spicy characters! Blockbuster ki perfect recipe! yaar itna drama hai kya karo even i am getting confused with name of characters so named them pran, shakuni 😉

Aise hi fast paced likhti raho, unless you want your Inbox inudated with threatening PM's to update soon!

i will try to update soon dear.

thanks dear

swati

Love,

MT

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Swati,

amazing updates,very well written.loved the fast paced story.th way you describe everything is just beautiful. poor Jai and Bani stuck in this whole turmoil.will be eagerly waiting for the next part. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Swati,

Great part, I think poor Bani has been kidnapped. She would never leave Jai.

Please continue soon.

Nikita
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Swati, kya haal hai bohot free lage rahi ho aaj kal? 😛 Bohot waqt ho to thoda hume bhi dedo, nowdays I'm seeing days going very fast 😕

I'm not happy that UW won the election, now his ego just like his status has increased, bohot buraa hai 😕
I hate shakuni so much, he doesn't respect women at all 😡 they aren't only *** machine or baby machine! And Pran seems like going the same way...
Too bad Jai had to go abroad for his studis and that too because JB were getting very close 😕 ( is it just me or this story is going like Devdas and Parineeta?)...

Ok I'm back and wow how low can UW get more? He wanted Bani to disappear and now she is missing... Ussi ka haath hoga iske peeche
Great part
Love you 🤗
Edited by Nancy_89 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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swati...yaar abhi tak nahin padha...sorry...dekh kaan pakda hai maine..wo kya hai na mera kabootar ghar pe tha sarre din...n he's gonna be there till tues...but kal pukka i'll send him sumwhere 2morrow...2morrow like i said to Sang...am gonna devote my life to reading FF's (Kabootar ja ja ja 😆 ) pucca promise...bhaut back log hai...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great updates Swati
liked it.
UW 😡... 🤢 🤢 🤢 man.
I think he did something to Bani...so that he can marry JW to Pia 🤢
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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(kya sheena billi i was not on IF for only 3 days and that too because i was on my way and yaar now i am here for almost 7 long days and i am mostly killing my time on IF only , will be starting office from tomorrow. yaar missing my piece of cake or i am thinking that instead of piece now i will grab whole sheena in one punch and that way i will be saved from cooking for one complete day, u know na how much food one sherni needs in a day . dear i have lots of time so i have started writing this ff but it is a sad story and dinanath is not even remotely same as sharabi ND. dinnath is really a great person. sorry but bani will be a teacher but of some stupid subject that u will come to know soon, and in my story no lovey dovey scenes between JB for sure, i can assure one Ff full of violence, pain, and blood waiting for biryani thodi jyada bhejna, as i am feeling hungry after ages )


Swati dearest,

I am too small for your one day feed, in fact I think I will probably be not enough for your one meal...Biriyani, I sent in the mail....mmmm!! That smells awesome, doesn't it. Hope you get the package, if you don't, put it down to the bell boys who got the whiff and ate it all. I am sure they going to get indigestion.

How can I not expect violence, action, pain and blook, akhir, Sherni pyaar vyaar nahi likhti, sirf khoon aur aansoon...
😉

UW is a politician, Pia is the CM's daughter? JB are seeing each other?

And Jai is going Phoren for padhai...

Can't wait for more from you!

Your little prey...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😡
i am angry with u as u dint even say me that u have started a ff. 😭

isliye sirf pls cointinue soon.and u made bani run with kunda..
i think shakuni has kidnapped bani...

i am angry so wont talk to u.. 😡 😔

davia

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