FF-Unche Log part 2A and 2B on pg 3

hi friends i am starting a new story, i don't know whether it will be a short story or a long ff right now, but hope that i will be sure about this soon.

For the first time i am writing something entirely different from real KS and as i am not a good writer u will have to bear me. This story is one of story i read somewhere when i was 12 and that left a great impression on my mind and i just wanted to share this with all u lovely people. i really don't know what has touched me in this story but even after 15 years i remember this story and i think it won't have much lovey-dovey scenes.

this story will start in village and will then go to city settings and will cover a lot of social issues

PART 1:

Story starts in a village rampur, a place with the population of only 400 people and a place where every person knows each other very well.

it was only 4 in the morning and master dinnath was doing all household works which usually ladies do in home as his wife was not well and she was to be taken to doctor in city for her arthritis. he prepared breakfast and cleaned the house and then he started waking his 3 daughters and then got them ready for school.

eldest daughter bani who was just 10 got her younger sisters ready and then all three of them left for school with their father. on way to school they met the mukiya of village who was going back to his palacial house after his morning round of fields and then his 2 sons ages 12 and 10 (jai and pran) also joined dinnath and his daughters and left for school, but not before mukiya Uday told master to contact him if he needs anything for school or if he wants a car to take his wife to city for treatment and dinnanath just thanked his childhood friend uday for his big heart and asked him that he will contact him if he will miss the bus to village.

Master dinanath and UW were greatest buddy from school time and were said to be two bodies but one soul and people used to tell others to follow their example in friendship. They used to share everything with each other and every moment how bad or good that is since childhood and still that friendship was going on for years without any changes (but time never remains same, u people will come to know about this soon). UW was having property worth crores on his name and after death of his father he has took over all the things only 4 years back and now a days he was getting interested in politics and he has made some new friends. and as people says money does bring bad habits too, so UW has started drinking and using tobacco a lot and he has some differences with dinnanath over this issue as dinanath was quite against all this and that's why shakuni (brother-in-law) of UW has somewhat succeeded in turning UW against dinanath, but still shakuni has not succeeded completely and was working to do something to break this relationship.Shakuni was also from a well-do family but he has lost all his money in gambling, drinking and girls and now he was eyeing his sisters money and was getting UW involved in politics.

master dinanath was son of a teacher only and has only a small land and house to say of his own, but what he has earned was a name and respect in society and people used to worship him after god as he was the one whose communication with government has lead to opening of a dispensary in their area otherwise first medical help was at a distance of 30 KM from their village. after getting degree dinanath has settled in village only leaving a lot of charming job offers in city so that he can work for his village upliftment and people were really thankful to him a lot.

Master dinanath took his wife to city and was told by doctor that his wife shld take proper rest and that is the only remedy and she should not do much work as that will affect her joints leading to complete inability to stand or walk and both of them returned with a heavy heart and his wife lata told him not to worry about her and not to spend much money on his treatment as they need to collect money for marriages of their daughters.

on the other hand after school bani and jai were always together and they used to do a lot of fun all around village and used to spent hours together going to jungle, collecting different items, fooling other villagers by posting as ghosts or animals and they were full of life and they were just inseparable and people used to say like their father they are also good friends (but can a girl and boy can only be friend as per me they can be but not here in my ff)

leap of 4 years:

time has flown like air and now bani was 14 and jai was 15 and as they were talented both of them have passed their high school and now they were supposed to take admission in a college which was 15 Km from their village and so shakuni advised dinanath that now bani's education should be stopped and she should start doing household works and Uday also supported shakuni, but dinanath was adamant and he said that he will educate all her daughters and as bani is quite intelligent she will take his names to new heights and she is like a son to him and so Jai and bani started going to new college.

now a days uday was quite busy with his political career too so dinanath was working for him as munshi after school hours to earn extra and that is when he came across a big scam by shakuni and he scolded shakuni about his and that boiled shakuni's blood to no extent and he took oath to ruin dinanath and family. Shakuni asked for forgiveness in front of panchayat from dinanath and uday and everything came back to normal. but now he got involved uday with a nachawali girl barnali and uday walia got so involved with sur and sura that he forget about his wife sudha and children pran and Jai, and uday who used to be a family man was turned out to be an alcoholic and all his business was transferred to shakuni's hand and his first deed was that he sacked dinanath by telling him that he has turned old and now is incapable of handling their large accounts and that further broke dinanath as he was facing serious financial trouble at that time.

on the other hand our two love birds jai and bani were coming closer and closer and childhood friendship has now changed to a love affair where both were inseparable and were deeply in love with each other and their love was to extent that pain to one was felt by other too. On the other hand pran elder brother of jai has moved to university in city and has got involved in drugs and alcohol and was just spending a lot of money on alcohol and he has forgotten all the sanskar that he has got from his mother.

dear friends i will be waiting for ur comments and whether i shld continue it or not and as i am writing a serious story for first time please excuse my mistakes.

swati

Originally posted by: Taz234

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…..mera matlab Mioewwwwwwwwww 😆 Meri sherni is back with a ff ? Dherrrrrrrrrrrrrrr sari hugs for u 🤗

yes my dear sweet billi i am back with one more ff, but sorry this time not funny one but will be covering more serious subjects, but dear one idea of beating pia is coming in my mind😉

Loved the read…very different. 👏 Set in a village…I like that. Love the title to…different. Ucche Log…hmmmm….unche aur bade log are gonna be a problem in this ff i see 🤔

yes dear and in this ff bani will learn lesson of her life about unche log😭

UW and Dinanath friends since childhood….but money comes in their way. 😕 UW gets rich and involved in politics and the wrong company …man I hate this shakuni 😡…he is obviously gonna be a major concern. u r right dear the seeds which this skakuni has incorporated will change life of all my characters, even i hate shakuni and that is the reason i gave him name shakuni😆

JB are childhood buddies and have been together from childhood 😳…gone on to study together and are in love with each other toooo ❤️ 😳….cho chweet. Lekin yeh dushman zamana..paapi sansaar inhe jeene nahin dega …(Thoda filmi hogaya but kya karoon…I am right na! 😕 😆 ) dear u will find this ff also more of filmi and full of violence, blood and bad things happening in this world

Loved to see where the next part goes…I picture a JB separation though. 😔 😔 Especially with people already talking about how a girl and boy can't be friends like that…arre MPK mein bhi yaheen hua tha…but love prevailed… right sherni? dear i can say that lovers are bound to separate and rest depends upon their destiny and in this ff a lot of bad things will happen with bani that can happen to a girl

Cracking start my jungle ki rani 👏 👏 👏…lagi raho 👍🏼…u made this billi happy by starting a ff!! 😃 😃 😃 thanks dear but i am sure after 3 part u will just send buckets of tears and belans to me

Love u and continue soon…u don't want ur billi to starve now do u 😉…(swati tera dialogue! 😆) how can i allow my billi to starve when they r only source of my own food when i starves🤗

Tazoo 🤗

swati🤗

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

Wohooo my Swati Di has started a new FF, woh kya kehte hai aaj suraj aasman se gir para hai 😆 (something like that 😕 )

arre wah aaj jaroor sooraj paschim se nikla hoga jo my karate champion is back to forum, i know ur dulhan is doing pretty good now a days and even i have downloaded a few episodes and is loving dulhan a lot👏

Kya story hai, wah wah 👏 👏 👏 thanks dear it has been set up in village and will keep moving from village to city and then back to village😉
Completely loved this part, set in a village where values are more important than money (atleast for some people). i know but these people will have to pay heavy price for their values dear and i have come to one conclusion that the one who is good ends up suffering a lot as compared to evil people, luv and happiness comes in good people life but der se😭
It's impressive how money can ruin a relation, in this case Dinanath and UW's friendship.
Shakuni I'm already hating him, such old fashioned minded who says that girls can't complete they education? 😡 i hope u love the name shakuni for such character and don't worry his end will be such that his next 7 generations will think lakh times before doing such deeds😆

On the other side we have Dinanath seems like a great man 😊 ya he is great man but he will end up paying a great price for all this😭

JB are already in love but as usual there will be difference which I suppose it is going to be because of money JW is really great in my ff and he does not feel that bani is not wealthy or is poor, but differences will be due to dushman jamana and people like uw and shakuni

Really looking forward to the next part 😉 thanks dear
You better take this FF till the end ok? 😡 😆 oh god mujhko dhamki, but i need not worry as u won't be able to locate me easily as i have shifted my base😆 and my new base is surrounded by missiles and antimissile airguns😆
Love you 🤗 lots of hugs from my side too dear, i will update soon, but dear if u r looking for tears then only read the next parts😉