FF - At 17, update Pt 27/pg 60 Nov 8 End - Page 28

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Posted: 17 years ago
Divan,

I feel so special after reading this,thank so much for including me the update.I think I will faint if JW comes before my eyes.it was just too funny and totally enjoyed reading it.the pictures were just beautiful.I want to visit mini nagira falls now.hehe.too cute.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Divan,

I am back, sorry yaar, thoda sick hoon, issi liye, I was not allowed near the keyboard because typing under the influence of cough medicine was not allowed.

😕 😕 😕

Wow, those sights were so beautiful, I have to plan a trip to Khandela now, inspite of having a cottage there, never stepped out (Other than the nice party you threw) 😆 😆 😆

Loved pretty preet being the next target for Jai's matchmaking. The convo about the swiss Gruyere had me laughing. Did you know that both Khushi and Jiggles are very much into singing, they could replace Prashanth and Amit in Indian Idol easily.

Swati and MT - you guys are hilarious! The nike shorts comment had me rolling in laughter.

Bhavna and Sabina - you guys are there too!! Lol - I love this FF.


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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok.. I'm back!

I LOVED the part... Jai seems to be enjoying himself..eh? 😉

He felt like he was in the sound of music... we were talking about that film at lunch!! 😆

Kuch Kuch hota hai..? I was comparing JW to SK? 😳 😆 😆

MT.. very fit!👍🏼

That is something i would say! My geography is apalling.. 😆

Awesome part.. had me laughing so much... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi Divan…ur back again with an update…so quick…😃 Another laugh-rioting update!! 🤣 Girls all out hiking with Jai and Bani. Jai saying he feels like Maria from the sound of music! 🤣 Itne sab bacchon ko saath joh le jaa rahe ho!!! 😆 😆
Bunny and Preet chatting about what Jai looked like without his shirt…hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 😍 Ooop..sorry got a little lost there…kamaal ka thought hey Preet and Bunny, 😳 😆
MT sighed, "Yeah I want to see those legs…prison chaddi mei nehi dekha, lekin nike shorts mei toh jaroor dekhungi." Guess we all wanna see those legs!! 😉 Loved this line!! 👏

Preet was impressed with the mini niagra falls and got a little embarrassed with Jai's comment
"Dekha na mera India meh subh kuch hai...waterfalls hai…forts hai…lakes hai aur mere jaise khubsoorat ladke bhi jayadaa hai. Bol de Taz jaise tujhe ko bhi fix kardu…" Aye hai…yeh Jai ne koi na business shuru kiya hai ladkiyon ko acche rishte dilane mein! 😳 😆 Good job maybe we should start looking for a Pritam for our Preeto! 😉

Swati's song from Shree 420!!! 🤣 🤣 Mera joota hai Chinese!!! 🤣 Loved that!!! 👏 Aaj kal sab maal udhar se hi aata haina.


Bunny's comment about Gruyerese and cheese!!! 😆 😆 Jai corrected her and gave her a hug….life ban gayi iss ladki ki! 😉 😉 Say Cheeseeeeeeeee that is a kodak moment afterall! 😉 😆


All the girls having fun by the lake. Jai took Bani…cuz he wasn't gonna allow her to stand and watch. 😉MT's wish came true Jai took his pants off! 😲 😳 😆
Aur meri nanand Jigna…Aishwarya Rai ban gayi!!! 😛Bathroom singer se ab khule aam gaa rahi hai…its surely gonna start raining 🤣 🤣 Cotton wool anyone? 😆

Swati's line
"Chaal meri saath…yahaan kuch nahi kaar payegi jab tak biwi ko gale pe lapete baitha . Let's go and find our own tiger to play with." What did I say about my sherni jungle mein mangal ka plan tha hi na😉…looking for her tiger now are we? 😉 😉Loved the update…the songs…the pics 👏 👏Done a super job once again

Tazoo
Edited by Taz234 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I was re-reading this.. and i realised i somehow missed the part about JW hugging me..😲

I love you Divaaan!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
whacko bhabi cotton wool se kapde ban teh hai
hehe
i am sure manufacturers would be happy😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey divan
gr8 part 👏
cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Divan,

The last two parts were so hilarious. 😆 😆 😆 😆

Really enjoyed reading them. I wonder what's in store next. Pls do keep them coming.

Kiran

Edited by kiranc - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Guys the comments are as funny as my updates, keep them coming…read Taz's latest escapade and MT and Swati's little trick to get Jai's arms around them…..


At Seventeen Pt 19


O ho ho ho, khoya khoya chaand, khula aasmaan
Aankhon mein saari raat jaayegi
Tumko bhi kaise neend aayegi
Oh oh, khoya khoya chaand, khula aasmaan
Aankhon mein saari raat jaayegi
Tumko bhi kaise neend aayegi
Oh oh, khoya khoya chaand (kaala bazaar)


When Taz and Moksh started back towards the hotel it was quite dark and after half an hour the rain started to. Couple of time the bike skidded even though Taz had reduced the speed. But the dirt tracks were turning muddy. In a distance Moksh could make out a large structure with a faint light source nearby. Tapping Taz on the shoulder, he said, "Over there is light lets stop hun and see if we can stay the night there, in this rain its going to take a long time to get to the resort."
Nodding her head Taz steered the bike towards the light. The light was coming from a lantern hung outside a small wood shack. Few feet away the other structure looked dark and gloomy. Moksh knocked on the door and a few seconds later and elderly man opened the door. Holding another lantern up the man greeted Moksh. Moksh asked if there was a place where they could stay the night. The man pointed towards the dark structure saying they were the Bedsa caves and they could rest in there as inside the caves were warm and dry. He told Moksh to wait and came back with blanket and some fruits, saying this were all he had. Also handing him the lantern he bade them goodnight.
Pushing the bike just inside the entrance, Moksh held up the lantern to see huge smooth carved pillars topped with figures of lions and humans. The floor of the cave was solid rock. Stopping near the first pillar Moksh put the blanket down and said, "I think we should stay near the entrance." Taz was too awed and kept on gazing at the pillars and vast dome of the cave.




"Wow, kitna bada hai yeh cave. This one cave is as big as Dudley Castle." (what say you Taz, better than Dudley castle)
Moksh confused, "yeh Dudley, Wudley kaun hai?"
"Hunny tum galat soch rahe ho, mei Dudley Moore ki baat nahi kar rahi…yeh Dudley toh killa hai,…back home…you know mere mayaaka in UK."
"Theek hai toh mujhe bhi wahaan jaana hai…mujhe bhi London jaana…woh red double decker bus mein baithna hai. You and me baby on open top deck."
Taz rolling her eyes, "Moksh look at this, tere India mein kitne aachi jagaaz hai phirne, gumne ke liye aur tujhe London jaana."
Taz putting her arms around her hubby and fluttering those long lashes(uses curling thingy to curl them every morning) "Hum Tum, phele saree India mein goomungi meri Dhano pei (she buying her own Harley as soon as she gets back to Mumbai and that too in shocking pink), phir mei tujhe London lejaaungi."
Bechara Moksh…one look into those teershi aanke and he forgot about his red double decker bus. Baad mei raat kaise guzaar gaye woh toh sirf Taz or Moskh he jaine.

mera chain bain sab ujda ,jaalim nazar hata le - 2
barbaad ho rahe hai ji - 2
tere apne shaher wale
mera chain bain sab ujda ,jaalim nazar hata le
meri angdai na toote tu aaja - 2
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina - 2
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina - 2
ho mere naina mere naina mere naina judwa mere naina
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina (Bunty or Bubli)


XXXXX
Jai paced about in the room while Bani was getting ready.
"Yeh Moksh bhi na. Pata nahi kahan khogaya…Taz ki saath. They didn't come back last night to the resort. Better not have wrecked my toy or else he will pay."
Bani tutting, "Jai calm down, BP high kyun karte hoh. Maybe they stayed over night in Lonvala. I am sure they will be here soon."
Throwing her glare he sat down on the chair and turned on TV and started flicking through the channel. "Yeh TV peh aajkaal kuch nahi decent shows…all the time Saas Bhahu dramas..bilkul bakwaas. Business bhi mei ghar mei baitha baitha karte hai … and they all wear those fancy clothes and party all the time."
Bani comes over and takes the remote and turns off the TV, "Life ho to Aisi…let's go and have breakfast and we can say bye to the girls too."
Still shimmering underneath he followed her downstairs to the restaurant.
They had almost finished their breakfast when MT and Swati came in. MT was holding a large colourful kite. They stopped in front of Jai and looked at Bani and MT in her sweetest voice said, "Mrs Walia do you mind if we borrow Mr Walias for ten minutes? I bought this kite and if Mr Walia could teach us how to fly it."
Bani thinking this would be a good opportunity to Jai's mind away from his bike said, "Go on Jai, and teach MT and Swati to fly the kite." Looking outside at the clear sunny sky, "Afterwards we can go and buy the famous chikki to take back home. Adi has specially asked for it."
"Ok girls lets go. Looks like I want be going anywhere else anyway until the bike comes."

chali-chali re patang meri chali re -2
chali baadalon ke paar ho ke dor pe savaar
saari duniya ye dekh-dekh jali re
chali-chali re patang ...

yoon mast hava mein laharaaye jaise udan khatola uda jaaye -2
le ke man mein lagan jaise koi dulhan -2
chali jaaye saanvariya ki gali re
chali-chali re patang ...

rang meri patang ka dhaani hai ye neel gagan ki raani -2
baanki baanki hai udaan hai umar bhi javaan
laage patali kamar badi bhali re
chali-chali re patang ...

chhoona mat dekh akeli hai saath mein dor saheli -2
hai ye bijali ki dhaar badi tez hai kataar
degi kaat ke rakh dilajali re
chali-chali re patang ... (bhabhi)


They walked far out into open gardens and Jai asking Swati to hold the kite while he let go of the string from the spool and when she was few yards away asked her to release it. Once it was up he told MT to hold the string and thenputting his arms around her showed her how to tug at the string to keep the kite up. (Upaar kite ki string pull ho rahi hai aur nachi MT ki heart string pull ho rahi thi)
Swat not to be left out ran up and asked if she could have a go. When Jai touched her hand, Swati almost let go of the strings…haila yeh haath abhi kabhi nahi dhoungi, mere Jai na chuna hai…

Pal pal pal pal har pal har pal
Kaise katega pal har pal har pal
Pal pal pal pal har pal har pal
Kaise katega pal har pal har pal
Dil dil dil dil mein machi hain machi
Machi he hulchul hulchul hulchul
Kaise katega pal har pal har pal (2) (lage raho munnabhai)


Soon all the other girls followed one by one. They had spied from their windows, MT and Swati flying kite with Jai Walia and they were not going to be left out…who cares if they learnt to fly the kite or not as long as Mr Walia held them while giving a lesson.

An hour later when Bani came out to find Jai surrounded by the girls, all bickering among themselves who could have the next turn. Taking pity on Jai she walked up and asked the girls if they wanted to come shopping as she and Jai were going into Lonvala to buy some chikki. Flying kite was forgotten at mention of the word shopping…


happy reading...hoping Taz comes back with the bike
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Posted: 17 years ago
heheh.. Taz going to buy a bike.. shcoking pink?😲 would love to see that.. 😛

OO.. MT and swati..tsk...tsk.. 😆

Great update..JW in hot demand.. chikki?? mum LOVES that! 😆

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