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Posted: 17 years ago
Its not a long update, hope you like it. By the way the flowers and the gift is actually availabe on ftd.com website for North America, Tod Oldam or Vera Wang designs.

AT Seventeen Pt 17

nazarein milaau, nazarein churaau
baatein main dil ki unko bataau
mehfil mein chaaya hai mera nasha
pichha main inase khabhi na chhudaau
aafat ke maare ladka bechara- 2
tauba yeh kaisa naasha
tera tera tera - 2


sabse haseen, sabse juda, meri ada pe woh hai fida
thumake pe mere marate hai aashiq - 2
dekhe mujhe dekh ke woh aaya bhaagi (adaped from original song from Khallas)

Jigna: "Moksh bhaiya yeh kay, Tazobhabhi aage or tum piche?"
Moksh: "Toh kya sis, aajkaal ladki ka jamaana hai, kitne sadiyon ke baad hamne chutkara mila, toh kyun na enjoy kare hum."
Jigna: "Bhaiya log kya sochenge, ek maiyna ke samne ek shet billi hogaya."
Moksh: "Just chill sis and let your Tazobhabhi take care of me. After all I didn't marry her so she would walk behind me…I am all for female power."
Taz: "Oye nanandji, dekha tere bhaiyki tareef. Sheekle kuch mujhse, tujhe bhi kaam ayeega jab mera nandoi tere phichee padega."
Taz turns and winks at Moksh, "Ready baby!"
Taz turned the key on the bike, "Chaal Dhano, aage chalte hai, aaj mei teri basanti tazo teri sawari ke liye tyar hai." (Swati your wish fulfilled.)
The bike zoomed off and Jigna stomped her foot, "Yeh MokshBhaiya bhi na….jabse dekha Taz ko tabse paagal hogaya uspe..hunter challi thi Ranveer pe lekin shikaar bangayaa Mokshbhaiya."
Jai and Bani who had been listening to all this, burst out laughing and Swati who had joined the group halfway put her arm around Jigna, "Jigna yeh teri bhabhi gulab ka phool nahi heh, woh ek teer hai, jab dil pe ek baar chala bhir Khalla….."
Jai guffawed, Bani dug her elbow into Jai's side. "OW…Bani that hurts!"
Those pretty eyes were now blazing with fire, "Good! aur jaldi bolna jab appko bhi Taz ke teer lagge, mujhe uska ilaaj karna aata hai."
Jai giving her his sexiest smile, "Bani muje toh baas tere he teerne ghayaal kiya hai…woh bhi jab tu sirf satraa saal ki thina tabse. Yeh dil pe abhi No Entry maari hai doosre kiliye."
Bani melted at his words, put her arms around his neck, "Saache No Entry hai…"
Jai brushing his lips on hers beat a hasty retreat when Jigna called out, "Oye, you two yahan public ki toh ijaat karo."
Swati drooling at the pair, pats Jigna on the arm, "Jigna, they are so cute. Mujhe bhi Jai jaisa mil jayee toh…
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Taz pulled the bike over at the side, Moksh looked over at the side and almost keeled over. He squeezed his eyes tight and his arms gripped like vice around Taz.
Taz took her helmet off and shouted, "Moksh are you trying to break my ribs, kya hua, mujhe toh sirf yeh fantastic view dikna tha."
Moksh still not opening his eyes, relaxed his hands, "Sorry baby, but mujhe chaakar ate hai. Have you seen the drop on the sides, God kitne steep hai."
Taz just dropped her gaze and screamed, "Wow, what a drop. It's so beautiful down there. Come on open your eyes, I'll not let you fall."
Moksh refusing to look, "Sorry baby, you look your fill, I am looking straight ahead at."
After few minutes of enjoying the scenery, the bike zoomed off again and again Moksh's arms tightened around her.
It was past lunch time when Taz stopped at Kune Falls. The 100 metre high falls is majestic to look at, the water thundering and crashing in churing foam over the rocky base. Picking up her small pack from the back of the bike, Taz called out, "Picnic time, I am hungry after all this zooming around."
Moksh spread his jacket on the ground so they could sit. Taz opened her pack and pulled out a small box, opening it eyes glinted, "Look Moksh those sinfully wicked chocolates from last night. I wonder who put packed them"
Moksh smirked, "Who else, but Jai. I am telling you Taz, since marrying Bani Jai is like a love sick puppy."
Taz glared at him, "Oye, leave Jai alone…" Her eyes turned dreamy, "Bani is so lucky to have the one man that all the women wants."
Moksh jealous now, pulled Taz close to him and locks eyes with her, "Did I hear you right meri huntervalli? You better not be lusting after my boss."
Taz purred like a lazy Cheshire cat, ran her finger over his lips "Moksh darling, I only lust after you…you are the sher for this huntervalli. I am the only one that can tame you."
Moksh picked up one of the chocolate and holding between his teeth brought his mouth near her lips…the temptation was too much for Taz and she gave throaty purr and bit into the chocolate.
Long time later…Moksh stretched and shook a sleepy Taz slightly, "Taz next Valentine you'll get a box of these chocolates…they sure pack a aphrodisical."
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Bani knocked on the bathroom door, "Jai hurry up, we will be waiting for you downstairs"
"Uh…Ok"
Downstairs the girls were all rarin to go and were waiting impatiently. When they saw Bani come down by herself, Jigna piped, "Where is Mr Walia? Kitna intezaar karna aur…Uff men!"
Bani laughing at Jigna's petulant face, "Jigna he is coming. For a change he is making me wait."
Looking at the group, Bunny, Preet, MT, Swati, Ridhi, Khusboo, Bhavna and Sabina, all looking like models from a fitness magazine…nike shoes, nike pants and tees, "Wow, you are all ready for hiking."
Swati twirled around and showed off her neon pink t-shirt and low rise Swoosh Capri, her belly button peeking out, "The latest and bestest for moi."
Khusboo, pulling Swati's ponytail, "Oye Miss India, yahan koi ladka nahin hai impress karne ki liye."
Pulling her tongue out, Swati said, "Ladka nahin hai toh kya, raaste mei toh koi handsome milega na…"
Jai came down looked at the group and rolled his eyes, here goes my plan of having Bani all to myself. He walked up and faking a smile, "Where are you going girls?"
MT catching on to him, "Mr Walia you forgot! You promised last night to take us hiking."
Pretending to scratch his head, "Did I? Bani was I drunk last night…I must have been to get myself tangled up in taking a kindergarten kids for a walk."
Bhavna and Sabina giggled, "Mr Walia no backing out, we still have some of your favourite chocolate stashed away…the ones you told us specifically to keep for you."
"Ok…Ok…just kidding. Let's go. I have hired couple of jeep to drop us near the trail. Quick march girls."
Pulling Bani aside, "Spoiled my fun…I was thinking of going to Bushi lake. There are small waterfalls where its fun to play in."
Bani just gave him a push, "Jai you will have fun with the girls, you just watch."
When they reached the jeep, the girls were waiting patiently to see which jeep he sat in, they all wanted to sit with him.
Bani looked at them and diplomatically told them to get in one of them and she and Jai would take the second one.
Jigna couldn't help but blurb out, "Yeh Mrs Walia bhi na…kitni possessive hai."
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Posted: 17 years ago
Me, I am going to come back and comment, in the midst of something right now.... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Divan

fabalous update,the girls are too funny.there are takin Jai hikin.how cute.loved it.looking forward to the next part.
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preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

I love Hiking too....and you made me talk to Jai...Haila😆 Chalo, real life mein na sahi, FF mein hi sahi!

The party is a complete riot...the girls are just incredible!😆

The update only proved that the best things come in small packages!👏👏

Another sunny update from you, Divan! You are doing a fab job of the story...the humor, the lightness and the fun...everything in perfect doze!⭐️

And I loved the clothes you gave us😆

Now we want to see Jai in his Hiking gear...Shorts, T-shirts...sigh...😳😉 (It would be quite an accident if Bani is left behind, won't it?😉 Only the girls and Munna for a hike in the wild...)

Update soon!

Love,

MT

Edited by mistletoe - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Fab part.
liked it
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
🤣 heheh... Oh!! Loved TM scene... hunterwali ..🤣

👏 👏 👏

We're going hiking??😲 Sounds fuuun! 😉

Hopefully Mrs. Walia won't regret it! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
I am back! Sorry about last night, I was so pooped after my run, I just fell asleep!

Divan, I want to tell you how much I am enjoying your FF, it's making me howl with laughter.

The first part's dialogues between Jiggles, Taz and Moksh had me burst into laughter so many times, my husband was giving me the funny looks.
(Taz turned the key on the bike, "Chaal Dhano, aage chalte hai, aaj mei teri basanti tazo teri sawari ke liye tyar hai." (Swati your wish fulfilled.)

Dhanno aa gayi, aur Moksh is the basanthi....😆

(The bike zoomed off and Jigna stomped her foot, "Yeh MokshBhaiya bhi na….jabse dekha Taz ko tabse paagal hogaya uspe..hunter challi thi Ranveer pe lekin shikaar bangayaa Mokshbhaiya.")

🤣 Taz, kya kamaal kar diya!!

Jai getting into trouble with this dialogue, 😉

"Jigna yeh teri bhabhi gulab ka phool nahi heh, woh ek teer hai, jab dil pe ek baar chala bhir Khalla….."

Hai...where do you come up with these?

And man, is Bani jealous or what! That no entry dialogue was too good.

(Jai giving her his sexiest smile, "Bani muje toh baas tere he teerne ghayaal kiya hai…woh bhi jab tu sirf satraa saal ki thina tabse. Yeh dil pe abhi No Entry maari hai doosre kiliye." )

Awwww!! 😳

The next part with Taz and Moksh - was she deliberately driving fast on those unchee pahad, so he can embrace her even tighter? 😳

Yes, the chocolates can be an aphrodisiac!! I am sure you have some experience with it, right? 😉

Swati, You will get your turn, honey, for sure!!

Ooooh! The gang is going on a hike, Loved Swati's capris, and Khushi's Ms.India comment...Swati, bijli switch on karke rehna, I am sure you might find the Jungle ki Raja, Sherni ko tho ek sher chahiye, hai na??

Good thing that Bani is possessive, because these girls even have the chocolate weapon ready, watch out Mrs. Walia...

Rekha, Munna is wearing Safari shorts, prison ka chaddi nahin tho kya, at least he is wearing some chaddi... 👍🏼

I loved the update!! Divan - you are just treating us with these lovely updates, humorous and entertaining, every day!!

Awesome, sweety! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part Divan...soo hilarious just cracked me up 🤣 🤣 🤣 . Jigna and her whacko bhabi 😃 .Loved Moksh and Tazoo's talks......so sweet 😳 😳 .....Tazooo toh kaamal hi kardiya 😉 😃 😆 . So the gangs are going on a hike......woh bhi JW ke saath 😳 😳 .....wondering what is gonna happen in the jungle....yeh jungle mein koi mangle na ho jai.....we have sherni (swati) with us now sher ka intezaar hain 😛 . Please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Divan…ur back…hope u are feeling better now. 🤗 Sorry for coming a little late. What an update!! 👏Me on my bike with Moksh! 😍 😳 😆 Haila!! Some of ur lines were just too great dear 👏 had me laughing like anything 🤣

Jigna: "Bhaiya log kya sochenge, ek maiyna ke samne ek shet billi hogaya." Sharam kar ladki apni bhai ko billa keh rahi ho…he's still my sher!!!
Moksh: "Just chill sis and let your Tazobhabhi take care of me. After all I didn't marry her so she would walk behind me…I am all for female power." Mwahh!!!🤗 My Mokshy sweety…kitni achhi baatein karta hai 😳
Taz: "Oye nanandji, dekha tere bhaiyki tareef. Sheekle kuch mujhse, tujhe bhi kaam ayeega jab mera nandoi tere phichee padega." Yes my sweet nanand kuch seekho mujhse
Taz turns and winks at Moksh, "Ready baby!"
Taz turned the key on the bike, "Chaal Dhano, aage chalte hai, aaj mei teri basanti tazo teri sawari ke liye tyar hai." (Swati your wish fulfilled.) U added that line by Swati…cool!!!! 🤣 🤣 Vrooooooommmmmm vrooommmmm…I am off…Moskh darl…hold on tight…and I mean TIGHT 😉😳 😳
The bike zoomed off and Jigna stomped her foot, "Yeh MokshBhaiya bhi na….jabse dekha Taz ko tabse paagal hogaya uspe..hunter challi thi Ranveer pe lekin shikaar bangayaa Mokshbhaiya." Arre jiggy baby…ur not happy I married ur Moskh bhaiya…kitne cool bhabhi mili hai tujhe…😆
Jai and Bani who had been listening to all this, burst out laughing and Swati who had joined the group halfway put her arm around Jigna, "Jigna yeh teri bhabhi gulab ka phool nahi heh, woh ek teer hai, jab dil pe ek baar chala bhir Khalla….." Hai mein marjawan…Jai…meri teer se ghayal hona chahte ho? 😍 😍 Biwi ki maar paregi tujhe!! 😆

Taz pulled the bike over at the side, Moksh looked over at the side and almost keeled over. He squeezed his eyes tight and his arms gripped like vice around Taz.
Taz took her helmet off and shouted, "Moksh are you trying to break my ribs, kya hua, mujhe toh sirf yeh fantastic view dikna tha." Awwww…bechara is afraid of heights it seems…koi baat nahin pakad ke rakho! 😉 😉 Just don't break my naazuk se ribs! 🤣
Moksh still not opening his eyes, relaxed his hands, "Sorry baby, but mujhe chaakar ate hai. Have you seen the drop on the sides, God kitne steep hai."
Taz just dropped her gaze and screamed, "Wow, what a drop. It's so beautiful down there. Come on open your eyes, I'll not let you fall." Haan honey…ankhen kholo…not exactly gonna push you in there now am I? Itni buri nahin hoon! 😆
Moksh refusing to look, "Sorry baby, you look your fill, I am looking straight ahead at."
After few minutes of enjoying the scenery, the bike zoomed off again and again Moksh's arms tightened around her. Poor guy!!! 😆 But I am enjoying this!!!! 😃
It was past lunch time when Taz stopped at Kune Falls. The 100 metre high falls is majestic to look at, the water thundering and crashing in churing foam over the rocky base. Picking up her small pack from the back of the bike, Taz called out, "Picnic time, I am hungry after all this zooming around." Awww…we are having a picnic too…😳
Moksh spread his jacket on the ground so they could sit. Taz opened her pack and pulled out a small box, opening it eyes glinted, "Look Moksh those sinfully wicked chocolates from last night. I wonder who put packed them" Haila…woh sinful chocs yahaan bhi? 😲 😲 😳

Moksh jealous now, pulled Taz close to him and locks eyes with her, "Did I hear you right meri huntervalli? You better not be lusting after my boss." Ab boss itna handsome hai to mein kya karoon…ankhen idhar udhar ho jaati hai! 😉 😳
Taz purred like a lazy Cheshire cat, ran her finger over his lips "Moksh darling, I only lust after you…you are the sher for this huntervalli. I am the only one that can tame you." Baap re!!! 😲 Kya line hai!!!! 👏 I said that! 😳 😳 😳
Moksh picked up one of the chocolate and holding between his teeth brought his mouth near her lips…the temptation was too much for Taz and she gave throaty purr and bit into the chocolate. Yummmm!!!! 😳 😆
Long time later…Moksh stretched and shook a sleepy Taz slightly, "Taz next Valentine you'll get a box of these chocolates…they sure pack a aphrodisical." Besharam!!!! 😲 But chocolates…any day…sirf Valentine par kyun? 😆 😉


Bunny, Preet, MT, Swati, Ridhi, khushboo, bhavna and Sabrina all going hiking with Jai…lucky girls!!! 😉 Bani better be careful all those girls and only one hot guy! 😆 😉 Swati looked great in her neon t-shirt…khushboo pulling her pony tail!! 😆Loved to see what happens on their hiking trip. Sounds fun… Swati my sweet sherni jungle mein mangal khoob karegi for sure!! 🤣 Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!

Great update again divan 👏 👏 👏…u out do urself each time 👏 The comedy u bring about it too good. Has me laughing all day. Now I will be imagining myself on a bike all day!!! 😍😆
Cont soon…loving it! 😃 👍🏼

Tazoo 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey divan
gr8 part 👏
cont. sooon

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