FF - At 17, update Pt 27/pg 60 Nov 8 End - Page 27

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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks for wonderful comments, I hope you enjoy reading the hiking escapes as much as I enjoyed writing them.

AT Seventeen Pt 18

hum ladkiyan nahin hungama hain
lagti hain sidhi sadhi hum mein drama hain )- 2
ladko ke peetche, peetche peetche jaye
jadoo chalaye hum hain balaye - 2
ek chutki main kar doongi main tumko apna raja
bachke rehna re baba (bachke rehna re baba)


The girls waved and screamed as their jeep passed Jai and Bani's. Jai putting his arms around Bani and making himself comfortable and releasing a slow breathe, "Thank God, We'll get some peace and quiet for a while."
Bani giggling, "Come on Jai, they are cute and fun. Just think how much fun you are going to have…they are going to spoil you rotten."
Jai rolled his eyes, "But Bani I feel like…that woman….Maria in Sound of Music, going tramping over the hills with kids. I feel as if one them is going to burst into 'The hills are alound with the sound of music.'"
Bani pecking his cheek, Mujhe lagta hai yeh aapki diwanis woh angreezi gana nahi lekin yeh gana gayegi 'Saat Samundar Paar Mei Teri Pechee Pechee Aagaye.'"
"Bani whose side are you on, mine or theirs."
Fluttering her eyes, "Mr Walia, I am always on your side. And suneyi…I don't know about Maria but I must say you make a very handsome Captain Von Trapp."
Jai laughed and pulled her close, "Yeah…abhi mujhe naval commander bana diya…this ship is very rocky…seasick toh nahi hogi na."
The road was narrow and winding and the girls would now and then wave back at them.
XXXX
Swati saw Bunny and Preet talking in whispers and pulled Bunny's hat and said, "Wanna share your secrets with us? What are you two gussphussing aobut."
Bunny giggled while Preet's cheeks coloured, "Me and Preet were just wondering if Mr Walia was like Salman Khan under all those clothes he's wearing…haila those rippling biceps and those six-pack abs…mujhe kuch kuch hota hai."
MT sighed, "Yeah I want to see those legs…prison chaddi mei nehi dekha, lekin nike shorts mei toh jaroor dekhungi."
The girls all started talking at once drowning out each other, shouting ways to get Jai to strip down to his shorts.
The jeep stopped at Korad and everyone got out. The guide led them on a 45 minute hike to the Kune Falls. The 100 metre falls in the luscious Amby valley was breathtaking.
Preet tilted her head back and looked up and shouted over the thundering noise of the water, "Mr Walia this like mini Niagara Falls."





Jai shouted back, "Dekha na mera India meh subh kuch hai...waterfalls hai…forts hai…lakes hai aur mere jaise khubsoorat ladke bhi jayadaa hai. Bol de Taz jaise tujhe ko bhi fix kardu…"
Preet just turned beetroot red whilst the rest of the girls doubled over with laughter.
It was perfect Kodak moment…the cameras came out and the girls clicked away happily. The girls all posed with Jai while Bani clicked away on the camera. The sly look on Jai's face did not go unnoticed by Bani.

meri tasavir lekar kya karoge tum meri tasavir lekar - 2
meri tasavir lekar, dil-e-dil jeer lekar
luti jaagir lekar, jali taqadir lekar
kya karoge kya karoge tum meri tasavir lekar
meri tasavir lekar kya karoge tum meri tasavir lekar..(kaala samundar)


After an hour or so they hiked back to the jeep and drove off towards Rajmachi Fort. The jeep stopped at Ramachi village, where they stopped to have simple food at a small caf. The only food available was simple daal, chawl and sabzi and after initial hesitation the group enjoyed the tasty hot food. After few minutes of rest the group set off up the rocky hills to climb up to the fort.

Swati decided that they needed a song to push them up the steep slopes and burst out into:
(everything is made in China these days)
Mera joota hai Chinese
Yeh patloon Chinese
Sar pe nike topi roosi
Phir bhi dil hai hindustani
mera joota hai ..(adapted from Shree 420)


Poor Khusboo laughed so hard that she almost tumbled down and had it not been for Jai, who stopped her fall. MT who loved hiking and quiet at home here in the hills was way ahead, stopping now and then to wait for them and take photos of the scenery.
Two grueling hours later the group were standing atop the fort and gazing with wonder at the valley below.



MT who wasn't huffing and puffing as much as the others, "This place reminds me of Sai Kung back in Hong Kong. Actually it's even better so green and beautiful and I like the mists floating around."



Swati who makes frequent trip to Switzerland said, "mujhe bhi Gruyres ki yaad aati hai."




Bunny looked bewildered at MT, "Lekin yeh Gruyres toh cheese hai, I don't see anything that reminds me of cheese here."
Jai laughed hard and Bani poked him, "What's so funny?"
"Yeh Bunny bhi na…Gruyres is named after the region where the cheese is made."
Bani poked him again and feeling sorry for Bunny, "Bunny is not at fault, and if one hasn't been to Switzerland then they wouldn't know."

dekho ruthhaa naa karo, baat najaron kee suno
hum naa bolenge kabhee, tum sataayaa naa karo…(tere ghar ke samne)


The rest of the gawked as Jai pulled Bunny into a beary hug, "Ok I am sorry Bunny…" For the rest of the day Bunny felt as if she was floating on air. Her favourite teddy bear had given her a great big hug.
Another Kodak session followed as they explored the fort and the vicinity. Coming down was much faster as the various member of the group slipped and slithered down the trail.
After a brief stop for refreshments at the caf they got into the jeep and drove off to Bushi lake. It did not take long for some of the girls to fall asleep, tired from all that walking. Only MT and Swati were still talking when they reached the lake.



The lake surrounded by lush green gardens and mini waterfalls is popular place with the tourists. There was a lot of screaming and shouting going on as kids, adults and senior walked or stood under the streaming water.
The girls started taking their shoes and pants off as they all wanted to play under the water. Bani looked at them and said to Jai, "Yeh lakiyaan paagal hai kya. They are going to cause a riot if they step out of the jeeps in their shorts."
Jai pulling his track pants off, "Main hoon na…kuch nahi hoga…" Flexing his arms, "mere yeh muscles dekh kaar koi paas nahi ayeega." Bani trying to stop him, "You can't do this Jai…"
Picking her up and walking towards foaming whirlpool of water, "Sure I can…and you not going to stand at the side and watch."

Jigna ran under one of the fall and then started dancing and singing, her latest favourite filmi song.

naa re naa re, naa re naa re
naa re naa re, naa re naa re
barso re, megha megha barso re
megha megha barso re, megha barso
meetha hai kosaa hai, baarish ka bosa hai
kosaa hai, kosaa hai, barrishon ka bosa hai
jal jal jal jal jal jal jal thal jal thal
chal chal chal chal chal chal chal chal
chal chal behta chal
geeli geeli geeli ha, ha ha ha ha
geeli geeli maati, geeli maati ke
chal gharonge bimaayenge re
hari bhari ambi ambi ki daali
mil ke joole jhulaayenge re oh
dhan baiju gai ne, hal jote sabne
bailon ki ganti baji, aur taal lage bharne
re tair ki chali main toh paar chali
paar wale parle kinaar chali re megha
naa re naa re, naa re naa re
naa re naa re, naa re naa re (guru)


Bunny shouted to the rest, "Oye, dekho Miss Ash shuru hogayee phirse. Subha subha bathroom or abhi yahaan outdoor bathroom mei bhi."
MT and Swati ogled as they spied Jai's in his nike chaddi showing perfect legs and abs.
Catching sight of couple of hunks in ripped of jean shorts, looking at them interest, Swati pulled MT and said, "Chaal meri saath…yahaan kuch nahi kaar payegi jab tak biwi ko gale pe lapete baitha . Let's go and find our own tiger to play with."

Barsaat mein
Tak dhina dhin
Barsaat mein humse mile tum sajan, tumse mile hum
Barsaat mein
Tak dhina dhin…(barsaat)


Along time later, a bedraggled group of hikers tumbled into the hotel. Everyone except Jai and Bani, wanted to run under a hot shower and hit the bed. While the girls drifted off into their dreamland, Jai and Bani were too busy playing out their dreams within the four walls of their suite.

Back to Walia house, dadi will be visiting…..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Now I feel like visiting, I will come back and read in leisure and comment leisurely....
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Posted: 17 years ago
i'm trying not to laugh too much.. every1 is sleeping... 😆

loved update....will give a longer comment when i get bk tmorow.. me is off to bed now!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Dear Divan!!!
Could you please change the page number again on the subject line 😳 . Thanks in advance 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Dear Divan!!!
Could you please change the page number again on the subject line 😳 . Thanks in advance 😃



Thank you... forgetting again.😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part.
liked it.
Beautiful pix and the place....beautiful description.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Sher Hunting?🤣🤣🤣 Swati, get ready with your Bandook and all.....we are gonna break some laws and end up in Jail, aka Sallu Bhai😉😆

Haila...Sabko faint karadiya? Divan, get ready to be bludgered by the rest of the gang😆 That was priceless, I was totally cracking up!

Taz's bike is called Dhanno! That is so cute! So that makes Taz to be Basanti and Moksh to be Veeru?😆 Now the only thing we need is Moksh sitting on top of a Tanki with his drunken declaration of love!

One of the many lines that had me howling with laughter was, "MT sighed, "Yeah I want to see those legs…prison chaddi mei nehi dekha, lekin nike shorts mei toh jaroor dekhungi." 😆😆😆

So, JW is playing cupid for Preetu also?😉 Not bad! And he save Khush? Bani is going to get into trouble for having such a chivalrous hubby!

Thanks for saying that I didn't huff and puff while Hiking...only if you knew the reality of my Hiking Expeditions...😕😆 Sai Kung is a lovely place, btw! Great for Hiking and Trekking!

The whole Gruyers Cheese dialouge was so funny😆😆😆

Bunny got a hugsie from Jai? Not fair...our turn next!😉 After all, hum sab Munna ke barabar ke shareholders hain!

Swati and I sound really desperate, btw😆 (We are...rest assured😉) Leaving nothing to chance to stare at JW's lovely legs!

Fantastic update Divan! This is one of the most enjoyable FF ever...totally like a roller-coaster ride!

Please keep writing and post the next update soon!

Love,

MT

Edited by mistletoe - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
sowieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
it takes me so long to freakin comment these days


Part 17
😆 😆 😆
mein mere moksh bhaiya ki raksha kar rahi hoon
tazo bhabi ki driving jaanti hoon
its dangerous!
haila razo bhabi
no way am i taking lessons from you
haila
marwayegi
hehe Mr. Walia has to look good so time leh kar aate hai
bani itna bhi possessive nahi bante
its called sharing
dhano ko bachaoooooooo
tsk tsk seems like i hate my bhabi but nope got nothing but wub for her 😃 🤗
bechara bhai reckless driving witness kar raha hai
by personal experience 😆
haila chocolates again 😃

part 18
oh man those sights seem amazing
i wanna go hiking now!
mein bhi gaane lagi
😆 😆 😆
gaane dancing everything!
haila ms. rai kisne bola
no no not ms. rai just miss patel 😆 😆 😆
continue soon divan 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi Divan....mindblowing part dear. Loved all the places where the gang went on a hike. I would like to visit those places now 😛 . All the best for swati and MT.....happy Sher hunting 😳 😆 😆 . Haila!! Jai saved me from the fall 😳 😃 . Loved Jiggly's song. Please continue soon. Thanks.
👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago

sorry for late comments dear, i missed one part too.

loved the update yaar, tazo billi ridiing the bike and thanks for fulfilling my wish tazo calling bike dhaano.

tazo billi moksh par kya jadoo kiya hai ki woh biwi ka gulam ban gaya hai, i am sure u know black magic, hope jigna will agree with me on this 😉 aur basanti tazo how r u feeling 😆

dekha dekha i said na bani is teer that's why jw got hurt when she touched him 😆

nahin nahin mujhe jai jaisa koyi nahi chahiye and kabhi nahi chahiye, i am happy as single 😉

hai tazo toh jungle mei mangal kar rahi hai, control baby koyi dekh na le ya koyi sher aa ke tum ko kha na jaye 😆 kya pata sher may get attracted by ur sweet chocolates 😆 😆 😆

kya yaar JW ladkiyo ke tarah time lete hai tayar hone ke liye 😆 sajna hai aaz use sajni ke liye 😆 😆

wow yaar i am drooling on my dress and khusbhoo how dare u pull my ponytail, mei aa rahi ho start running, u don't know me dear i am fast as cheetah as i am sherni 😆 and i am really feeling hungry now 😉

oh god yeh bani bhi na kitni possessive hai, we don't need to give her our chocolates now 😆 raastey mei ladkiyo ko akele bhej rahi hai and khud JW ke saath maaze se ayegi 😡

divan dear just loved the update and now gonna read the next part

just loving everything that i am doing and love that song mera joota hai chinese (i agree aaj kal japanese nah chinese hi hota hai, how original)😆 dekha mera mind😉, hai saab thak gayi, only me and MT were talking and we got to see Jw like that faint faint. kaash pri, and archi bhi hote toh un ka bhi dream poora ho jata😆 good me and MT are gonna look for a sher or tiger now bye😉😆

divan dear great update and loved everything and reading this just made my day. please continue soon

swati

Edited by swatinarang - 17 years ago

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