Anokha Rishta -Chapter 18 & Epilog, pg42 - Page 27

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Posted: 17 years ago

Tinnie...once again fantastic update.....JB are developing their relation too well....and Roshni is trying to put them away.......Now Puskar......wondering what will happen next.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww... thier phone convo was sweet and jai didnt want bani to go... 😳 😆

roshni.. i think ive said think in nearly all my comments, she's regretting it big time..

Pushkar? 😕 ... hmm...not sure what'll happen next!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tin........................

lovely part...............

jai missing bani...............sweet.......

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
that is nice jb getting closer.. roshni and jai in goa 🤢
hope jai goes to bani..
pls continue soon

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
Chapter 15 weekend spl

Jai and Roshni walked into the hotel in arms, they were waiting for their turn to check in when Pushkar saw Jai….

Hello Mr Walia, welcome to Goa!!

Oh hello Pushkar, what are you doing here…

I have joined this place about a week back….

Oh have you, very good, meet my wife Roshni, Roshni this is Pushkar, Bani's friend…

Hearing Bani's name Roshni gave a second glance to Pushkar…

Pushkar, being the 'Guest Relation Manager' ensured that Jai & Roshni did not have to wait long at the reception…

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Pushkar watched Jai and Roshni sitting under the umbrella next to the pool and enjoying their lunch, so this is his first wife, why should someone marry the 2nd time inspite of having such a lovely wife, there seemed to be no discord too, when Bani announced that she had married Jai Walia at the same venue after her sister's wedding, Pushkar's fuse blew off, you married a married man, lekin kiyu….Bani was hesitating in giving the answer….of course, he is a rich man, enough money to fulfill all your dreams and aspirations, mera pass woh saab kaha jo unke pass hai….he had left the table in a huff, not bothering to wait to hear Bani out.

Pushkar suddenly felt sorry for Bani, does she know why he has married her, after they parted he read an article about their wedding, it seems he has married the 2nd time because he did not have children from his first marriage…….keya Bani ko yeh baath maloom hai, hona toh chahiye, saare duniya ko maloom aur usse nehi maloom hoga…but why you Bani, aisa kaunsa majboori thi Bani he said to himself, I was besotted to you inspite of so many girls falling on me, I never cheated you once we got serious, or is it money….Pushkar gave one last glance towards them and walked towards his desk at the reception.

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Roshni shifted her position, the a.c was getting too cold, she tried to pull the cover up but Jai was sleeping on it, she gave another tug….Bani a.c kaam karo yaar, itna thanda kiyu kar diya, he mumbled and shifted to the other side….inspite of the chill, Roshni started to sweat…

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The sun was yet to be rise properly, Jai waited for the waves to wet him, as it receded he bent to pickup the shells it left behind, he picked randomly, then selected a few, put them in his pocket and threw the rest back to the water…after sometime, he sat down and took out the lot, there were some beautiful pieces, yes he will give these to Bani, she will like them very much, then his eyes fell on a small and cute conch shaped shell, inspite of its size it, it was perfectly shaped with a pearly white texture and as the raise of morning sun fell on it, it emitted its seven colours…Jai smiled, yes it will make a perfect pendent, now he has to find a good jeweler…

Hello Mr Walia, aap itna subah subah…

Jai looked up at Pushkar, then stood up, his bermuda was already wet, kiyu Pushkar mujhe itna subah nehi utna chahiye…

Kiyu nehi, lekin aap shells utha rahe hai….

Ha Bani ke liye she loves them, she told me...

Pushkar tried to hide his shock, the man is on holiday with his first wife but picking up shells for his 2nd…

Toh aapne usse saath me kiyu nehi laye…

Agli baar layunga, it will be her and me then, anyway Bani apne maayke gayi hai…

Kiyo…

Rano ki shaadi hai, she has gone to be with her…so Pushkar how are you liking Goa…

Oh nice very nice, infact I always wanted to work near the sea…Pushkar replied in a dreamy voice…

I know, replied Jai softly, Bani told me, your plans about 'Blue Dolphin'…

Startled Pushkar looked at him…You know about our restaurant…

With twin blue dolphins monogrammed on the door and on the shirts, yes I know about them, Jai replied…

Bani told you about this, it was our dream you know Mr Walia and she shared with you…

Don't look like that at me Pushkar, I am her husband…I know there are some dreams which cannot be fulfilled but there is no harm in sharing them…isn't it…anyway Pushkar I think you should get in touch with Bani, it is painful to loose a good friend…

What is he getting at, wondered Pushkar…

Hi Jai, mujhe bulaya bhi nehi, subah subah uth kar chale aye…

Hi Baby…tum sow rahi thi…chalo chal kar breakfast karte mujhe bhuk lag gaya…he reached out for Roshni's hand, Pushkar remember what I told you, get in touch with Bani…..he left hand in hand with Roshni…

Pushkar stood watching them…they looked so much in love and made for each other but then when he spoke about Bani, he did so with a lot of feeling, ekhi admi do jan ko saath kaise khush rakh sakte hai….

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Jai and Roshni stepped into the Walia Mansion after a week, both brown and looking happy, the servants took away their luggage and as Jai sipped water offered by Tony….

Beta tu agaya…

Ha ma…tum abhi tak gao nehi gayi…

Kal subah jayungi...beta abhi abhi maine kiran se baath huwi, tere liye khush khabri hai beta...

Roshni was on her way up stopped on the stairs...beta tu baap baane wala hai...

Keya, kisne kaha aapse….

Kiran ne…

Unhe kaise maloom…

Beta woh Bani ki ma hai aur kuch din se Bani ki tabiyaat theek nehi thi, toh doctor ne test kiya, abhi abhi result mili hai….Dai Ma held his face with both the hands and pinched his cheeks, mai bahut khush hu beta, bahut khush, mandir ja rahi hu, puja dene....as she left, Jai looked up towards Roshni, scratched his head self consciously and went towards his study…

Roshni watched him, he still cannot believe it seems…the wait is over at last ….…Roshni climbed up…

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Posted: 17 years ago

😃

Pushkar being shocked/surprised over and over again 😆 Roshni must be thinking Goa ke trip ka asar is news se overshadow ho gaya...God, in real life when there are multiple wives (esp in old days with a king having many queens), the women must spend half the time plotting and scheming to win the heart of the guy 😆 must be quite an atmosphere.

Great parts, as usual Tiny..

👏👏👏

Edited by btkr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

😊

jai is so funny just scratched his head and went to study knowing the good news😆

he is different..

👏

pls continue soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Pushkar's thoughts are all wrong if he thinks Bani married JW for his money. Money was the last thing on her mind when she had to marry him 😕 But am glad with time, JW and Bani's relationship has become very strong. I hope Pushkar pays heed to JW's advice and does contact Bani. He was a good friend of hers.

Now that JW and Roshni have come to know that Bani is expecting, why does Roshni feel so relieved. Does she feel that after Bani delivers the child she'll be put in a corner or will she have to hand over her child and leave. Roshni's thoughts are wrong in both accounts.
Edited by pooks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hi tiny....have been waiting for your weekend special...😃


It was a superb part...loved every part of it.....Jai collecting shells for Bani was soo cute....and poor Puskar, didn't realize, how could he? After all, it's an Anokha Rishta, right?



And, I'll say in your words, finally the wait is over, now the story will become more complicated, but I know you'll do justice to it....so I'll be waiting impatiently for Monday now....😊




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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tin.............

lovely part...............

wat kind of man is jai man even pushkar got confused oiver him...hehehehe............

bani is pregnant congrats jai and bani............wat good news..............

so jai going with dai ma to the village to see bani........


update soon

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