The Foreign Self: Part XX note: pg 11 - Page 7

Hey Armana,

beautifully written part. loved the description of the changing seasons. glad that bani has friends like rano and raghav to understand and suppport when she needs it the most. hope jai realizes what he has lost, instead of being so pig-headed.

Kiran

Hey Armana,

I love your writing, beautiful descriptions of how every one is feeling. Loved the seasonal Delhi.

I am looking forward to your next update.

the wait is over. part xx is up and posted.
happy reading.

armana.

btw, this is a happy part. no more gloom and doom.

Absolutely fantastic. A very nice update . But just tell me where do you disappear sometimes. We keep on guessing what will Bani and Jai do next and after waiting and reopening the forums upteenth time and not finding any updates for days together when I finally decide to delete the much loved FF from my Book marks with a heavy heart your update pops up. So when will you update next.

You wrote? You wrote? You wrote?

I will read and get back with my comments!

Hope you have settled down by now!

Will catch up with you on PM!

Love,

MT

well, thank you Tushi. glad you liked the update.

where do i disappear?

well....somewhere over the far horizon....into Innsifree.....
where "peace comes dropping slow, & nbsp;
Dropping from the veils of the morning to where the cricket sings;
There midnight's all a glimmer, and noon a purple glow,
And evening full of the linnet's wings."

satisfied? I hope so.

Incidentally, writing like this takes time you know. hours all together. i mean this update is six plus pages on Word. and first i have to think it up, then type it up then wait till i am satisfied with it, sometimes a particular word, or sentence ar action just does not read right.... takes a while pal, doesn't just magically appear!
next update?
haven't the faintest clue.
why not just enjoy it as it comes?
more peaceful that way!
take care.
thanks for writing in. can't recall ever seeing your name before on any of my ff threads. if i'm wrong, my apologies. if i am right then, why have you been silent so far?
armana

Hi Armana,

As usual a perfect part, definately worth the wait.

So finally Jai and Bani are going to meet....can't wait.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

Just read the update Armana. its wonderful.
Don't know, how you write so believably.

Good to see Bani is thinking about her life beyond Jai but I guess their stars are entwined.

So Ranveer and Nachiket have cooked up a plot??? Interesting, let's see how this plan goes now.

Just read the update Armana. its wonderful.
Don't know, how you write so believably.

Good to see Bani is thinking about her life beyond Jai but I guess their stars are entwined.

So Ranveer and Nachiket have cooked up a plot??? Interesting, let's see how this plan goes now.

yeah, ms reeka, i wrote!

and as i've discovered this morning so have you been engaged in writing.
"neigbours." what a cute little gem of a piece.
remember an Aussie soap by the name, launched the careers of kylie Minogue and Jason Donovan if i remember right.

Jai talks to his plants? at night?
bani is the bold, brazen one?
i loves it!!!

and as usual, i adore you zany, nutty, lunatic sense of humour. how the devil do you do it? My JB are always serious, intense and often intensely boring:(
much prefer the witty repartee of your's!

and MT, you cheat, you tweaked with the "outsider" kiss and pasted it in "neighbours."
Outrageous!
come on, put on your romantic cap and come up with a new one.....or sigh, let me know and i will come up with one.

and Rano is Jai's wife and preggers?

darling if she dies in delivery and paves the way for JB, it's called cheating! strictly unfair, and yet i am now ALL for it!

ok, this is nuts, on my ff thread, i am responding to your ff!
but then you always knew that i was nuts, so i think you'll understand.
take care
armana