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Posted: 18 years ago
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sowwieee i am late again but i just saw ur update hehehehehe and here i am

and it was a gr8888 prt, luved its begining 😳 😳 and bani's bathroom entry was just rocking 😆but she doesnt know yettt that it was jai walia who was the man in the bathroom, i cant wait till she finds out heheheheh and hailaaa jai is attracted to bani alreadyyyy cooollllllllllllll cant wait to read the nxt prtttt so cont. sooooooooooooooon

luv
mahima
Edited by minks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sweetu,

Welcome, I am reading your FFs for the first time. Nice going so far. So they are already married and flashback is going...

Please continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello once again,
I feel horrible telling you guys to wait another day...so I am going to try and update today, but if not then tomorrow morning. I promise.
Today has been so busy and then my telephone decided that it hated me and it's ringer turned off, I have just spent one hour trying to fix it and gone no where 😆 -what a waste of time. How I wish I had the ability to see into the future so i could have foreseen that my one hour would have gone to waste 😆 😆.

momtajbegum1-Heya! Yes, I agree with you! What a strange place to meet the love of your life 😆 😳 , magar kya karoon, the idea was too tempting to resist! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff, I really appreciate it! I will update really soon!

siumi- Heya! I am so glad that you agree with me, with it being funny 😆 😉 Yes yes....poor bani, especially with whats in store for her (oops did i say too much 😉 ). Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it!

bugs_bunny- Heya! Yes...poor bani indeed! 😆 Haan you guessed correct she is the new PA! But the games will begin really soon! Thank you sooo much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it! 😳

ag06- Heya!! AWW don't worry i haven't forgotten the "ahem ahem" 😆 . 😆 I got the idea from my brain-it decided that it really wanted to put Bani in a weird position! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it! 😳

divya_123- Heyaaaaaaa!! 😆 I can't get over the fact that i made Bani go through that without knowing who she was talking to...she is so innocent! Reaction toh zurror ayega 😆 😃 ! I am glad you liked this part! Thank you soooo much for taking the time to repy to my ff i really appreciate it! Mwah

milkey007- Heya! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it! I will continue soon...hopefully 😳

khushboo2006- Heya!!Awww you are so sweet! I am glad you liked their first meeting, in the mens bathroom! I just couldn't resist! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff, i really appreciate it! I will continue soon!

patooki- Heya! 😆 😆 haaan i know...the first day was well... 😳 but phir first meeting was in the bathroom...romantic place right? 😆 . Haan poor bani, she was too busy getting her things that she didn't recognise JW's voice 😆 😆 . Awww you are so sweet...thank you so much for yor comments, they are really appreciate it! 😳

janu_2006- Heya! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff, I really appreciate it! I will continue soon! 😳

jigna_07- Heyaa!! 😆 😆 Haan bathroom meh mile...aur woh bhi gents ka! 😆 . I will continue soon! Thank you for taking the time to reply to my ff! I really appreciate it! 😳

ziddi- Heyaa jaan!! I am soooo happy i could make you laugh 😆 😆 😳 . Haan Jai's image would have been ruined for sure 😆 😆 ... 😆 ! Crazy imagination...hmmm that gives me an idea 😆 😆 In the womens bathroom...that is funny 😆 ( now i am getting weird images in my head !) I will continue soon i promise! Thank you soo much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it! Mwah!

sonu4ever- Heya! Jai was right in front of her but instead of looking up, thedarling new PA decided to tune him out 😆 😆 . Abh dekhna...maza toh abh ayega! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff, i really appreciate it!

damilola- Heya! Awww you are so sweet...thank you so much for your sweet comment, i cannot even begin to tell you how much it means to me! I hope that you will like the other ff's too 😳 . Thank you so much for taking the time to replying to my ff i really aprreciate it! 😳
😆 Glad you liked their first meeting!

jnawaz- Heya! 😆 😆 She ran into her boss...
I am gald that you liked the second part 😆 😆 . I will continue soon...I promise! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really aprrecaite it!

chander992- Heya! Thank you so much for taking the time to reaply to my ff i really appreciate it!!! 😳 I will continue soon!

swatinarang- Heya! Awww you are too kind! Thank you so much...you are so sweet! Thank you for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it! Hmmm...Bani has turned into a spy...shhhhh she was following him 😆 😆 ( naah i am jk...but its nice to think like that 😆 😆 )

ofcourse- Heya!! 😃 I am glad you found it funny...i was unsure if people would 😳 😆 😆 Yes you guessed correct she is his new PA! 😆 😉 I will update soon i promise!! Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it! 😳

Nancy_89- Heya! Of course you can call me Sweetu ( it's my pen name 😳 😉 ). A cute update will come...but i couldn't resist adding a bit of humor! 😳 . Yes, i am a SV fan! The promo is driving me insane...his eyes, the intensity and the way his hands move over her back 😳 . magar i love JB jodi a lot!! 😳 😳 .Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it!

sabsj- Heyaaaaaaaaa "my author"!! Haan haan blame yourself, you are after all my tutor, so i picked it up from you 😆 😆 😉 ( nahi reh, i am joking don't blame yourself...i just love romantic writing myself!! But your writing is amazing, it's an inspiration!) Haan...and i will say, look whose talking! Your ff's are amazing...i just love yours yaar. You are amazing at romantic fiction writing 😳 😳 . Uffffff, i was hoping that you wouldn't find out about me not being a sweetu ( innocent 😳 😉 ).Sabyyyyyy you say you are proud of me, but i say that i am proud to have such a sweetheart friend like you! You really did deserve the sweetest sweetu😉...soo sweet like a candy 😆 😆 😉 . Thank you soooooo much for taking the time to reply to my ff, i really appreciate it yaar! ( now i am waiting for your update...kahan hai madam??) Mwah!

minks- Heya jaan!!! I was wondering where you went off too 😆 😆 😉 I hope your computer is ok now...after all the shouting you did to it on my behalf! awww you are so sweet...i am soo happy that you liked the second part!! When B finds out...poor thing yaar.. 😆 😆 ! Oh i am mean, making her go into the mens bathroom only to bump into her true love but not realize it's him! Thank you soo much for taking the time to reply to my ff i really appreciate it! Mwah

Sheena_Row- Heyaa!! I am so happy that you are reading my ff and like it so far, i just hope that you will continue to! Yes, the flashback has indeed started 😆 . Thank you so much for taking the time to read and reply to my ff i really appreciate it! I will continue soon...i hope! 😳😳



Lots of love and big hug to all of you!! All your comments are treasured and mean a lot to me!!! Without my readers i would be no where!
Sweetu
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Hey Sweetu dear take your time 😊 I'm sure you are in dreamland after BMTD's episode 😳 😍 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Sweetu,

Great start to an amazing fan fiction (i know it will be)....

Please continue soon.

Nikita
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok...i have part three! I am actually feeling very scared posting this up...i don't want to loose my readers. I hope this part wont be boring 😕 . It is very late here...but a promise is a promise.

Part 3a

Bani stood trembling in the men's bathroom, still unable to register what had just happened. Closing her eyes, she leaned against a bathroom sink and breathed deeply. Yet her peace was cut short when she heard the creaking of the bathroom door, her body immediately tensed but then relaxed on noting it was the cleaning woman- she was very strangely dressed, adorning heavy jewellery and thick make up.
"What YOU do here?" barked the cleaning lady, in a thick spanish accent, her english sounding wrong.
Bani stood rooted to her spot, a harsh blush growing on her cheeks, as she realized the reality of her current situation. She thought for an excuse but none came, so she blurted whatever was on the tip of her tongue.
"Umm…isn't this the womens bathroom?" she whispered, feigning innocence, while her brain once again chided her on her stupidity.
The cleaning woman narrowed her eyes, adjusting her apron over her heavily embroidered sari, but said nothing. Once again Bani thought of how strangely she was dressed.
"I…I guess I must have gotten it wrong" laughed Bani, hoping that it seemed real enough.
The cleaning woman still said nothing…
"Umm…I will just be going now. It was uh, nice meeting you?!"
She quickly dashed out of the bathroom, nearly bashing into another man, who looked utterly bewildered, and ran towards the lift, realizing that she was late.

***

Jai cursed his new PA and her tardiness. He had been waiting in his office for the last 10 minutes and was now going into a fit of rage. His secretary, Martha, stared at him quietly from her desk, out in the lobby, from the open door, wondering what had gotten the handsome man so worked up. Sighing, she turned away and carried on with her day dream, of her and him…on a beautiful boat …

Martha, was a beautiful Swedish woman, with golden locks and a body to die for. Her face was spotless and eyes glowing with lust.

A soft knock on the door broke her from her reverie and she cursed, getting up and opening it. A young woman stood at the door, looking thoroughly flustered. Her hair was a mess, her chest heaving at a rapid pace, and a file, that looked like it contained papers, was clutched in her hand. Martha narrowed her eyes at the woman, irritated that she had disturbed her dream.
"What" she said, in a harsh tone.
***
Bani stared at the woman in front of her with mock curiosity. She was getting a death glare and she had no idea why. It was then, a few moments later, that she heard her say something, her tone missing all courtesy.
"What"
"Uh…I have come to meet Mr.Jai Walia. I …am his new PA"
"Oh…no wonder the boss looks angry…he keeps muttering things, must be because of you. He hates people who are late."
Bani stood quiet, unable to come up with a good response to her words.
"This way" muttered Martha, her hips swaying in gentle ease, making her chiffon dress move with her.
Suddenly, Bani felt self conscious…she wasn't wearing anything as good as the people whom she had seen here in "Walia industries". She felt out of place.

"Mr.Walia" purred Martha, her voice honey coated in what she assumed to be a sexy voice. "Your PA has finally arrived."

***
Jai looked at Martha, bemused at her tone of voice. Sure he had slept with her but hell, that didn't mean he liked her- she had just been one nights good fun. He was a man who changed women as often as he changed his clothes, which was quite often. He had yet to stick with one person.
"Let her in"
***
Bani stood fidgeting at the door frame, unable to look at the man whom she had admired for the past five years. She knew that there was a good chance of him firing her, as the one thing he hated was tardiness.

***
Jai stared at the shy woman at his door, suddenly amused by the way her fingers fiddled with one another in anxiety. He leaned back lazily in his chair, watching her with half open eyes, examining her and waiting for her to talk. It was a few seconds before she spoke.
" Sir, I am sorry I am late. I bumped into….bathroom…sorry" she whispered, trailing her words off mid sentence, as if embarrassed.
He still said nothing, waiting for her to speak more, but when she said nothing for several minutes he finally broke it, a hint of amusement hidden in his voice.
"What is so interesting in the carpeted floor? I myself find it dull, but if you like it so much, I will give you the name of the people I bought it from"
He reached into his desk drawer and brought out a card, and held out his hand, muttering "Here", his voice filled with mockery.
***
His voice hit her ears like crash and Bani's head immediately shot up and her jaw dropped, his comment forgotten. She suddenly found it difficult to move, her cheeks flushed in a deep shade of red. It had been Jai Walia whom she had crashed into in the bathroom. She felt so stupid, at not having recognized his voice, but she had tuned him out and not concentrated much. Suddenly she could not control her tongue and blurted something out, without thinking.
"Aaph"
Jai looked up to stare at her, and she shivered. His eyes narrowed in annoyance but then lit up in recognition, a sly smile playing on his lips.
"Ahh…so it was you…bathroom girl, or should I say man? I didn't know you liked the mens bathroom so much!"
Her cheeks blushed deeper.
"I..I…I am so sorry, I wasn't looking where I was going, and I…I didn't mean to." Her voice squeaky and unusually high pitched.
She saw his eyes flash dangerously, before he spoke.
"I will have to warn the male staff about you now…taking a liking to mens bathrooms…what will they all think?"
Bani stood dumb stuck, unable to reply, her body tingling with embarrassment.
"S..sir…"
She heard him laugh a deep throaty laugh; its sheer rumble was enough to send her into sensuous bliss.
"Or perhaps you were following me….wanting my attention?"
***
She looked so cute when she was confused...he couldn't help tormenting her. Having her as his PA would be...fun.


Dear readers,
I hope that you will not hate me for this part. I am very scared, at this moment what your reaction will be. It is very late here...so please ignore the mistakes. I will correct them tomorrow.
Best wishes and love
Sweetu
p.s. you all must be wondering why I made JW such a....😉. There is a reason...and part of the raaz will be revealed, soon!
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
First 😃 sorry will be back tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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second!! woohooo...

why scared? it was an awesome update..love JW! and martha?🤢 haha..he has slept with her but it doesnt mean that he likes her!😆 she'll be pleased to know!😆

So they meet officially! Loved him giving her the number of the carpet guuys!😆 alot of clumsiness, mocking and flusering coming our way!

It definitely will be fun...Love it Sweetu! will be waiting eagerly for the nxt one!😛

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice...I like it! No fear no need to be scared! I loved how he began to tease her about the bathroom, the carpet, etc 😆 😆 😆 Continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
why are you scared???????

it was fabulous!!!!!!!!

please cont soon
thanks
sunju

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