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sweetu144

@sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hellloooooooooo all you lovely people!!
Sweetu is back....with another ff😆😆. I just hope that you all will like this one, as the others. It is really short and probably will only be one part ( well might probably be two), but we will see. It all depends on what the readers say, as after all they do determine whether something is a hit of a flop ( e.g. Harry potter, everyone fell in love with it even the adults and grandmas!!!). This ff will not really have a story....its more...well it's not a story that's all i know...but i might make it one...we'll just have to see now!😆😆

Please do not hurt me with your belans...or mob me with complaints for my work...i know it is no art, yet alas...one can only try.

WARNING: Please read this ff at your own risk, it is strongly advised that if you do not like soft mushy, fluffy intense writings...then do not scroll down further...where you will find my semi not so innocent ff😆😆.

SCROLL DOWN AT YOUR OWN RISK😆
note: it has been edited, and if further is required please do pm me.
Lots of love
Mwah
sweetu
p.s. How are all my old ( and hopefully new) ff readers today??
btw i do hope people will read it😕

I would like all the ff readers to know, that besides romantic stories i also do write emotional ones ( also thrillers😆)- this is so that you don't assume something😆😳

Index:
Part one-pg 1
Part two-pg 4
Part three-pg 8
Part four-pg11
Parth five- pg 14
Part six- pg17
Part seven- pg 20

Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

WARNING: PLEASE READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. I WILL NOT ACCEPT ANY THRASHING OTHERWISE.

Today

The rays of sunlight hit her face creating a mask of sunshine, which illuminated her soft brown locks that now lay in a tumbled heap above her head. The young woman groaned loudly at the uninvited light and turned her na**d body to find a more comfortable position. Yet instead of Egyptian cotton it met cool warm flesh, and her body immediately shot up. The thin sheet that had covered her shoulders slipped down, revealing the most lustful sight. Her body involuntarily quivered as her eyes surveyed the room. It was a mess, rose petals scattered on the lush carpeted floor and candles lying in a sorted pathway, which led to the bed. As her eyes roved and finally landed on her red crumpled dress on the floor, did it then only hit her that she was not wearing anything. With a sudden jolt she, slowly moved her head to face the body lying next to her, yet as she turned, it was not a sleeping figure that she met. It was eyes. The most sensual she had ever seen, soft and chocolaty with a demand that seemed to make her tremble. His eyes were scanning hers, as if searching for something, and for a moment they seemed suddenly, almost, tense, till she saw them soften. The woman was so caught up in his gaze, that when he touched her, tingles of delight and hunger immediately engulfed her. His fingers slowly moved to stroke her neck, as his lips drew to her ear, whispering in a hoarse rumble.
"Baneee"
She found that even in the light of the morning, his voice was still an exciting torture to listen to, especially as his tongue coaxed her name in such a s**ual manner, almost daring her to do something that she would normally not.

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He mused at her flushed face, relishing in the fact that his touch caused her such discomfort and pleasure. Last night had been fun, torturing her and pushing her to the extreme, amidst the cocoon of darkness, as well as a new experience for him. He hadn't wanted to frighten her off, so had been sweet and gentle, something, he noted, she liked. Smirking silently now, he noted the expression on her face. Unmistakably a silent battle was probably raging on inside of her, as on what to do now - her body saying one thing while her mind another. Making a quick decision he decided that, no, he didn't want his lover to leave the bed now….well not yet. He had plans that involved both of them. So, in a single action, he pinned his shocked newly wed wife to the mattress, as his tongue flicked out and delved deep into her open mouth. It enticed a quivering groan from her, and a sharp sigh of his name, her nails digging into his back.
"Jai".

Today would be fun.

Dear readers,
I hope that you like the first part of this ff...i am concidering writing a second part. I do hope that this wasn't too extreme...and if so and you were offended i do apologise.
Best wishes and love
Sweetu

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hi Sweetu,

That was *ahem ahem* hot, hehe😳😳😳
JB are newly weds, good good 😃😃

continue

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hot that all I can say, outside and inside.

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

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Posted: 18 years ago

great starting.. have read your other FF's aswell.. make me blush! 😳 😳

one part nah uh.. u have to continue!! 😃

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

Fourth!😲

Aww man - this is sooooo not fair!.....Grr; bunny, div, siumi - haila; why so mean to this bechar bachi......I wanted to be first!😭

*****

Ahem....anyways........do I have to post my comments all over again?........you already know what I feel about your work!😉

And you better continue!.......I swear I'll land up at your front door waving my chappal if you don't!😡

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

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Posted: 18 years ago

Nice start--- steamy 😉 ! Continue soon~!

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Choti

@Anjaani Ajnabi

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Posted: 18 years ago

Welcome Back!! 😛
Gr8 Start!! I hope you continue soon..!!
Waiting for your next update!!!

-AA

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

woo hoo!!!!!
you started a newFF
i missed them
now continue soon 😃

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-Srishty-

@-Srishty-

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Posted: 18 years ago

#10

I think I have never read any of your FF's before but you are a very good writer 👏 👏
Loved this part, very hot made me blush a lot 😳
Great start (hope to read more parts like this one 😳 )
Looking forward the next part

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