FF: Welcome To My Life Part 13 Page 20 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Twinkle20

It sounds great!!😛 Well done...Keep it up...👏 Can't wait to find out what's going on... 😉

Glad u liked it. Only way to find out what's going on is to read on 😉

Originally posted by: Dazzling Diva

wow.....very different i must say..i LIKE 😛 ....plz continur on....u have a great ritin stylee....GOOD JOBBB 👏 👏

Thank you for ur wonderful compliments. 😳 will cont. asap

Originally posted by: july12_1995

This fanfic is awsome! Please continue soon! 👏 Great job!! 😃

glad u liked it. thanks

Originally posted by: cheeze

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#9900ff size=4>Wow, another FF???????????? Nice start, very captivating 👏 👏 👏

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#9900ff size=4>What is happening yaar? Bani poor thing is lost...............

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#9900ff size=4>Can't wait to read what happens next, when does Jai get introduced and does he become her saviour............ her knight in shining armour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

<FONT face="Comic Sans MS" color=#9900ff size=4>Do continue soon please............. 😃

Yes, another FF. Don't worry, Bani is perfectly capable of handing the situation!! lol.

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

hey

that was fabalous start,it pulled me.very well written and great start.looking forward to the next part. 😛


preet 😳

Thanks. I just posted the next part, so there u go. lol

Originally posted by: pooks

This is superb!! A truely different concept. 👏👏

Poor Bani has been kidnapped and is for the time being made to work as a bar/club dancer 😡 I hope they don't force her into prostitution. Please send Jai as a knight in shining armour to help her..please.

Thanks. In order to find out if she'll be forced into prostitution or not, u have to read on. lol

Originally posted by: the_rain

Great starting and it sounds very different as well....will wait for updates....

thanks. wait no longer, cuz i have updated. lol

Originally posted by: ofcourse

Hey congrats on ur new FF!!!

Very unique and interesting plot!

Rama

Thanks

Originally posted by: angelrockz

wooooooow grt start ...............love your style of writing ................continue soon 😊

Thanks, will cont. soon

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great start...liked it....very different
plz cont. soon.

Thanks, will cont. soon

Originally posted by: damilola

great part 👏

wats goin on ?

no happy story ? its different innit

and i lub it

awww poor bani being kidnapped and forced to dance

thats sucks

i luved the first part and plz do ctn soon

dammy

nope, no happy story, they're so outdone!! lmao. yup, that sux for bani, i know!! will cont. soon, and thanks

Originally posted by: siumi

Hi Hinna!!!!

Congrats for new ff 👏
Strong storyline, the reality of such happenings is horrible, I Hate those men who insult n take advantage of women like this, it's really injustice.

Continue soon n thanks for pm me😊

Ur welcome for the pm, and thanks. The reality of it is horrible!!! I hope u continue to read

Originally posted by: nikita28

Hiya,

Great start, please continue soon.

Nikita

Thanks. will cont. soon

Originally posted by: banibanijai

first of all congrats for ur new ff.
enjoyed it
do continue it

Thanks, will cont. asap

Hinna, another excellent part... 👏 Bani's pain is very nicely described... 😊 Feeling really bad for her... 😭 But hey, what is this 'shock' she gets? 😛 Nothing to do with Jai is it? 😳 😉 Please continue soon... 😃 Eagerly waiting to find out... 😉

Hey Hina

wow that was just mindblowing.the pain and emotions were penned down so well.It was just so heart wrenching,very well written.looking forward to the mystery man.cant wait for the next part. 😊


preet 😳

Hey Hinna,
That was mind blowing. Its really very heart wrenching dear. Who is this mystery man?
All the emotions have been beautifully penned. Bani's pain can be felt.

Rama

Hi Hinna!!!!!!

Another awesome update 👏 very well explained Bani's situation n other gals too, her fear, her emotions....😭 😭 😭

I wonder whose this man now with Bani, I hope he's there for help her 😕

continue soon 😊 😊

Hey Hinna...that was wonderful part, short just as you told, but really great...felt so sorry for Bani...it's so sad but it's true....great story..keep going..😊

oh GOD

i feel sad for bani

it was a great part

so horrible for bani having to see pple being tortured and all that

i reli do hope nothing happens to bani

i hope whoever dats cuming in helps bani

awesome part and ctn soon

ps: tnx for the pm

dammy

I like the ff. Reminds of the movie Chandi Bar. The concept is good, girls are kidnapped or sold for flesh trade all around the world. Looking forward to finding out who walked into the room.

👏great part 👏.......was waiting for it .😊..........poor bani .....she must be really scared .........hmmmmmmmmm wonder who this guy is 😕..maybe jai .......hinna you have got me thinking lol 😆

angelrockz 😛

gret part, please continue soon!!