FF: Ek haseena thi..Ek deewana tha-pg.12

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Aditi

@~devi~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Part eight:
the leap:
bani and jai had a fantastic time, along with pia and push and rano and ranveer. aditi was taking care of the three witches just fine. before they knew it the month was over and they went back to collage:
and before you knew it, collage bhi katam hogaya! last day of collage:
jai: (on his knees) bani, in this year a lot has happened, but the main thing that happened was that i fell in love with you! will.......you.....marry....me???😳👏
bani: Jai, i.....yes! i will marry you!!!👏👏👏
pia and push:
pushkar: pia, i really love you, and i want nothing more than.....you to marry me, will you????👏
pia: pushkar...i...yes, i will!👏👏
ran and ran:
ranveer: rano, i love you...will you marry me?
rano: yes!👏
and they all kiss!!!!!! 👏
At those moments, bani, pia, an rano totally forgot about the worlds they came from. but, they will not loose their love of their lives because of that,
jai, pushkar, and ranveer go home all happy. this is where jigyasa's entry happens!!!:
mom! dad! we have news
jigs sees the faces of jai, ranveer, and pushkar, and says:
jai beta, what happened? why are you three so happy?
jigs: well, who ever they are, anyways....come in quickly you three, larki wale aye hain! (the girls have come to see you three)
everybody is completely shocked as they go in and see anu, rashi, and suhani sitting there on the couch!😲😡😡
anu: oh! jai! i told you everything would work out between us!😡😈
jai was disgusted!😔🤢
jigs: girls, these are my sons, and guys these are the three girls i think suit you three! they are also extremely rich! ill leave you guys alone to chat for a while.
anu: OK listen up....i know you guys are going to say no, but we have a ...well...a deal! 😈 marry us and break all ties with bani pia,and rano, or we will make bani, pia, and rano's lives miserable! we have a tape, which our brilliant rashi, made, that shows your pyari bani, pia, and rano shoplifting! and if we show this tape to the police, they will go to jail for a period of time!😡😡😡
you don't want that now do you!
jai, push and ranveer think about it and finally say:
fine.fine, well do ti, but you have to promise to not bring any harm to them!!!!
anu:OK!
jigs comes and asks: well.......?
jai; mom, hume ye rista mansoor hain! (we agree)😭😭
jigs: GREAT!!!! (so happy) so how about we set the date for next week????
pushkar; OK😭
jigs: great!, thanks girls!
and they leave!
outside...later:
anu, rashi, and suhani are talking to someone saying:
app ka kam hogaya(your job is done)
who could it be??? most probably will post next week,have to go to a wedding for weekend!

Edited by ~devi~ - 18 years ago

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Yusra (or you can call me Hope as a nickname)

@LightingHope

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

very nice story,keep it up.it must be lara.well done 👏 👏

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Aditi

@~devi~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

thanks! the wedding went sooo well, it was beautiful😳
good news: don't worry, anu, rashi, and suhani will not marry jai, push, and ranv. 👏
bad news: they will have to fake it and be meanish to bani, pia, and rano😭
Part nine:
the three were talking to lara, and lara said: great! now listen to me, i made it so that pia, bani, and rano get no educated job and will be forced to work as maids in the WM!😡😡😡
rashi: awesome!!😡
then they go back in and meet jai, pushkar,and ranveer.
anu: jai, we have good news! your little bani, pia, and rano are going to work as amids in your house!😡
jai: what! and he's really angry, and so he slaps her!
anu: ho dare you!
jai: listen to me! you hurt them and i will not let go of you, you hear me!
anu: ya
and then the three witches leave.
later....:
jai, push, and ranveer go to meet bani, pia, and rano!!!
what will they do??? leave comments, will post later!

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Aditi

@~devi~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

thanks! 😊 here is part ten:
jai, push, and ranveer go to meet pia, bani, and rano, but anu, rashi, and suhani get there first!😡
bani, pia, and rano are very happy until:
anu: you three must be very happy! well, so are we, because, were getting married! and to our true loves, jai, pushkar, and ranveer! that's right! actually they were coming to tell you three, but they told us to go instead!😡😡
bani, pia, and rano were sooo shocked, then out of the blue, jai, pushkar, and ranveer arrive and bani, pia, and rano say:
jai, pushkar, ranveer, what are they saying, you proposed to us the other day!
jai, pushkar, and ranveer, knowing they had to do this said:
yes, sorry, but it's true!!! were.....were getting married they said with a frown on their faces!
bani; but, jai, how could you do this to us?😭
jai:sorry, but the truth is the truth!😡
bani:what! what truth, are you trying to say your love was a joke??? are you seriously....
pia: di, let it go, as for you guys, please get out of my house!
and they left with an extremely sad pia, bani, and rano! 😭😭😭
they hardly slept that night, they cried them-selves to sleep!
next week:
jai paid money to the pandit ji to say false things in their marriage ceremony, so that technically, they are not married. it's not like anyone is going to notice! and so the pandit ji does!
anu wears a green sari😕 and sits next to jai in the place😡.
suhani wears a orange sari 😕and sits next to pushkar int eh place😡
rashi wears a brown sari 😕 and sits next to ranveer 😡
and everybody thinks they got married, only jai, pushkar, and ranveer know they really didn't!
suhhaag raat:
there is not suhhaag raat, because the men refuse to sleep with those three witches😆😆😆 and they told jigs and aditya no honeymoon👏
a week later:
anu: mommy-ji, i would like to hire three servants, may i?
jigs: of course, go right ahead!
anu puts up a sighn saying servants needed, staying is given,
bani, pia, and rano do not have a job, and so they decide to take it thinking that WM service should be good. it was their only hope, and so they take it.
bani: she calls the number given: we accept your offer for being servants, but, um mm, what's our pay?
anu: don't worry, (knowing it was bani) you'll get 5 rupees per hour!
bani: ok, me and my two sisters are ready to accept your offer!
anu: great!😈
promo:
bani, pia, and rano enter the WM and are shocked to find out....
so they call......read the next part to find out! all comments are welcome🤗

Edited by ~devi~ - 18 years ago

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Nikita

@InTheZone123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

first !!!!

Poor Bani Rano and Pia, i cant believe that Jai pushkar and Ranveer are being blackmailed by Anu Suhani and raashi

continue soon!!!
Nikita

Edited by InTheZone123 - 18 years ago

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#36

oh wow the last few parts were awesome
oh man naukri karenge yeh logo 😲 at the WM!

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Aditi

@~devi~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

thanks guys! really appreciate the replies!😳 Dont worry help is on the way! you don't want to forget about Aditi now do you! 😉
Part eleven:
Bani, rano, and pia enter the WM and meet jigs!
jigs; you must be the new waitresses! come!!!
bani: yes!
jigs: it's simple, you will just have to cook and clean and serve us! but before you start, you must sign a contract and the only deal part is that you can not quit until six months, which shouldn't be a problem because you will not have a problem!
bani, pia, adn rano sign the contract and jigs leaves then they turn around and are shocked to find Jai, pushkar, and ranveer there! 😲
bani: tum? what are you three doing here?
jai: we live here, what are you doing here?
then anu, rashi, and suhani enter😡
anu: oh! you must be the three new waitresses!
jai, pushkar, and ranveer are shocked
jai: waitresses??
anu: yes! i talked to them on the phone, look they even signed the contract!
pia: wait...but we didn't know you three live here! otherwise we would have never taken this job!!!
anu: oh well! you cant quit until six months! now why are you waiting around! i am really hungry and dinner isn't prepared so start cooking! aren't i right jai?😡
jai: of course!😭 who's very sad
anu then hands bani pia and rano the clothes they have to wear😭, link:
http://www.manchestergalleries.org/our-other-venues/platt-ha ll-gallery-of-costume/the-collection/collection-themes/mcgwe b/objects/common/webmedia.php?irn=400018&size=268x350
and they go off to the kitchen miserable knowing they have to work as maids for the men they love very much,😭
they come out at 7 with all the dinner prepared.
anu; well, aren't you going to serve it??😡
so bani serves the food to everybody, but when she comes to jai, she can stop staring, but is interrupted by anu:
what happened, serve the food, and so bani does!😭
jigs stares supiciously as well as Aditya!
one hour later in the living room:
jigs: you know, now my sahil needs to get married! in fact I've even thought of a girl for him! ill invite her over tomorrow!
aditya: ok!
jai's, pushkars and ranveer's bedroom:
jai: ANU! how could you do this!
anu: lower your volume!!! and don't forget, i could give that tape to the police anytime!!😡 and you don't even know where i put it, and even if you find out, i have many copies!
jai: arr...ok!
outside bani accidentally drops some dishes and anu comes out side
suhani: ahhh! whats wrong with you! cant you carry some dishes! you three are sooo cheap! didn't your parents teach you anything!
now go and get your ugly face away from me!
she doesn't even notice bani's wound
she goes away from there and goes to the room they were given to stay at.
pia notices bani's wound: di! what happened! your bleeding
just then jai arrives with a band aid
jai: bani, your bleeding
and he lifts up her dress and puts the band aid on with his sift hands!
and suna suna plays in the back round! while jai and bani just stare at each other. just then suhani comes!!
suhani: omg! jai! what are you doing! and you! bani! do i need to throw you three out side in the outhouse!
bani: no.no I'm sorry! he was just leaving!
suhani: ok! i don't want to see this happening again! or else!!!
and she turns the lights off bringing jai with her.
rano: di! what was that!😕
bani: it's ok rano! just , lets go to sleep. ok?
rano and pia: ok di!
guess who the girl will be to marry sahil! leave comments!😊

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Nikita

@InTheZone123

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#38

first again !!!!!

I think the girl for Sahil will be Aditi, and i think she will help Bani Rano and Pia, and unmask the three witches Anu Suhani and Raashi

Continue soon!!!
Nikita

Edited by InTheZone123 - 18 years ago

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#39

that was awesome again!
please continue soon

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Aditi

@~devi~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

thanks!😃
part twelve:
the next day:
jigs: sahil! are you ready? she should be coming any minute!
sahil: im ready mom!
and at that moment Aditi comes in 😳(👏)
jigs; oh! come! have a seat!
and aditi takes a seat,
aditi is really rich, but she doesn't show it at all, money plays no importance in her life!
jigs: aditi, this is my son sahil! bani! get us some drinks!
aditi was shocked once she found out bani, pia, and rano are here as servants!😲
bani, pia, and rano see aditi, and get kind of happy, but cant show it, and aditi cant say anything either.
aditi looks and sahil and the house and her to-be mother-in-law and she's like i think ill just say no, just then jai, pushkar, and ranveer come down!
aditi is like, what! they live here too! omg, how can they live here with bani, pia, and rano servants and.....she's very confused😕
jai, push, and ranv. also sees aditi and their like hooray! now she will save bani, pia, and rano!
aditi can take it anymore and decides that if she will be able to find out anything, she will have to marry sahil and stay in the WM as a bahu.
jigs: so, what do you think?
aditi: um mm....i accept!
jigs; great!!! so when should we keep the wedding? um mm....how about this Saturday??
Sahil: I'm fine with it!
aditi: me too
Saturday the wedding takes place, aditi's dress(link):
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/52/175426115_238eb874f9 .jpg
and Aditi becomes the first official bahu of the WM!
after the wedding she secretly talks to bani, pia, and rano who were so tired after having to cook all the food for the wedding!
aditi: bani! pia! rano! why are you guys here as maids? i thought you three were in love with jai, push, and ranveer!
bani: we were, but they weren't, they instead married anu, suhani, and rashi! and we didn't know they lived here so we took the job and signed a contract that we couldn't live for six months!
aditi was terribly shocked! she decided that she must do something!
aditi: don't worry bani! i will do something!👏
bani: thanks aditi!
aditi leaves and goes to jai, pushkar, and ranveer's room;
aditi: jai! pushkar! ranveer! how could you three go so low? bani, pia,and rano really really love you guys, but you three broke their hearts! you should be ashamed of your selves!
jai: calm down aditi! this is not true! we were blackmailed by anu, suhani, and rashi. they made a tape showing bani, pia,and rano shoplifting! and if they gave the tape to the police, they would go to jail for a long time! and we couldn't see them in jail, so we have to pretend like we don't love them and we love anu, suhani, and rashi!
aditi: omg! I'm soo sorry! why don't you tell them that?
jai: because if we do anu will definetly do something! and we cant let that happen, aditi promise me you wont tell them!
aditi: don't worry guys! i will definetly do something!
sahil suddenly walks in and: aditi, where were you! mom is looking for you!
aditi: ok, lets go!
and she goes and outside and sees anu, rashi,and suhani
anu: omg! aditi! oh, so are you here as a servant too/ because my clothes need to get washed, and bani, pia, and rano are busy with my other work!😡
aditi: actually anu, i have come in this house as a bahu! and with me around, trust me you'll have a heck of a time! 👏👏👏
anu: ya! well see
and bani is walking up with a plate of food and anu trips her with her foot!😡
anu: oops!
aditi picks bani up and takes her to her room!
aditi: bani! are you ok! look your soo tired, why don't you go to sleep?
bani: no aditi, i have a lot of work!
aditi: don't worry bani! now I'm in the house! and i say rest! ill do the work, ill send your sisters up too!
and aditi walks out and gives anu a warning
aditi; anu! don't forget, now that im int his house, things will change, for the better!
she goes to the kitchen, and sends pia, and rano up. and she starts doing the dishes,
anu:awww! look mommy-ji because of bani, pia, and rano's carelessness! look, na, aditi cleaning the dishes while bani, pia,and rano are sleeping!😡
jigs; these girls! ill get them right now
and jigs goes up to their room
jigs; wake up you lazy bumbs! because
of you three witches, aditi is doing the work! it's a good thing anu told me!
bani, pia, rano, anu, jigs, rashi,and suhani go down and see aditi working with out any objection.
jigs: aditi! what are you doing! you just came to this house, you should be with sahil right now! this is the maids job, let it be! it's a good thing anu told me!
aditi: no, it's no problem, ill do ti
jigs; no! now bani, pia, and rano ask for forgiveness from everyone! wait, let me call jai, pushkar,and ranveer too, you need to ask therm too!
anu: no, i mean, why don't you make them go to their rooms?
jigs; ok, anu!
bani, pia, and rano say: I'm sorry!
suhani: not like that! get down on your knees!
and so, with thought they do, while aditi is really sad about this😭😭
jigs: that's it! that's right! now go and do the same to jai, pushkar, and ranveer!
anu: don't worry mommy-ji, we'll walk them up!
and they take them up!
anu takes bani top jai's room, suhani takes pia to pushkar's room, and rashi takes rano to ranveers room.
anu: here you go bani! and she silently walks away and she locks the door!!!
suhani: here you are pia! and she also locks the door!!!
rashi: the same!
in the next part:
~ what will happen between jai-bani, pia-push, and ran-ran over night???? leave comments!

Edited by ~devi~ - 18 years ago

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