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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
Hey I think I like this edited version more..though the precious version had suspense!!!
What the hell does Mrs.M think yaar..She is really makign the 3 girls life miserable..
Now what r these 3 witches going to do??

I am very sorry about the death of someone close to u. May his/her soul rest in peace.
Edited by ofcourse - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh man the edited version was awesome 😃
3 against three
aww i am sorry you find out about a death
may their sould rest in peace
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Thanks guys😳! suspense will come later, write now it's time for fun!!!!🥳btw, i am introducing a new character in this part
Part five: leap of three months! (jai, push, and ranv. become good friends with pia, bani, and rano😳), this part is a little unrealistic so forgive me😳
Another day..another class:
teacher: ok guys. toady we have a new student, her name is Aditi.
Aditi: 23 years old, a beautiful, simple, kind, calm, shy, really smart. ek bar vo bolte hogaye, and no body dares to go against her! girl, she's gonna help out bani, pia, and rano guys!
aditi enters the classroom and takes a seat next to bani, (the only seat available)
teach: Ok guys! we are going to plan a trip to turkey now! it's been three months, but this class has shown rapid improvement and so, you guys are going to Turkey with each other and coming back with each other for one month!😲 Each of you will keep a journal explaining what you witnessed each day!(like i said forgive me for the unrealisticness)
everybody: what! really!
teacher: ya! were going in three days, and letters have been sent to your parents, so start packing! so go home people!
(this was last period)
and everybody leaves, while they leave aditi accidentally bumps into anu.
anu: watch it! new kid!
aditi: excuse me!😉
anu: OK, your new, so ill let you go, but from now on remember, insult or go against me, and i will make your life a living nightmare!
aditi: Ok, and what exactly do you plan to do?⭐️
anu: i have my ways..
aditi: and i have mine!👏👏😳
and she leaves leaving a frown on anu's face! 😛
three days later:
every body is ready to go and they all go to the airport, (remember their going together, but with no teacher)
they do the boarding stuff and then on the plane:
anu tries to sit next to jai but he puts his bag there, then he takes it off when bani comes and she sits there.😉
suhani tries to sit next to push, but he puts his bag there, then takes it off when pia comes😆
rashi tries to sit next to ranv. but his bag is there, then he takes it off when rano comes😆
(ranv-jai-push plan🤣)
Aditi sits behind bani and jai next to Sahil (poor aditi😭)
while anu rashi and suhani sit next to a fat guy they don't know😆
and they all fly off...
In turkey:
they put everything away and meet each other in jai's room
THE FUN:
push: OK, guys why don't we play something!!!
bani: OK! but..what?
jai: how about pillow fun! rules: you sing a song and throw th e pillow to a person and the persons lap who the pillow lands on has to do something the person who threw it to you tells you to, but nothing harsh ok!
everybody: OK!
sahil: great, ill start, someone give me something!,
Jai; sing a song!
ye dil naa hotaa bechaaraa, kadam naa hote aawaaraa
jo khoobasurat koee apanaa, humasafar hotaa

sunaa jab se jamaane hain bahaar ke
hum bhee aaye hain raahee ban ke pyaar ke
koee naa koee bulaayegaa, khade hain hum bhee raahon me

are, maanaa us ko naheen main pahachaanataa
bandaa us kaa pataa bhee naheen jaanataa
milanaa likhaa hain to aayegaa, khade hain hum bhee raahon me

us kee dhoon mein padegaa dukh zelanaa
sikhaa hum ne bhee pattharon se khelanaa
soorat kabhee to dikhaayegaa, pade hain hum bhee raahon me
from Jewel thief

and then he passes the pillow to jai, and he has to.......read the next part to find out!
please leave comments/predictions!









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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Nice parts and the story is cute in its simplicity 😉
So do continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
Fab updates.
just read it...not believe I miss so much...glad that I caught up. 😃
Great...liked it
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
nice part continue soon
hehe like the introduction of hte new chahracter
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow these guys have landed up in Turkey!! Good so what is Jai going to do?
Liked this new character Aditi!! Go girl!! Give these 3 witches a hell of a time. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for replying guys! glad you like it! like i said, suspense will come, but right now, FUN!🥳
Part six:
sahil: jai bhaiya, you have to (whispers it into his ear) : make tea for bani! (hehehe😉)
jai: Sahil!
sahil: you have to!!!
jai: fine
and he enters the kitchen, while every body wonders what he is doing😕
fifteen minutes later Jai comes back with a tray with garam cha! (hot tea) and brings it bani😳
bani: jai...what is this....?
jai: sahil told me to make cha for you, but may i warn you, i can not cook so, be careful! 😆😆
bani: ok,
and she takes a sip and she looks at jai, it's horrible, but she doesn't want to hurt his feelings so:
bani: it's....great! she said in a stuttering voice
jai: really? cool!
bani puts the tea away and jai sits down and throws the pillow to pushkar, and jai tells him what to do in his ear: play your guitar to pia!
pushkar: oh no! fine!
and he plays a romantic song to pia
pia: that was really nice!😳
pushkar; thanks!
and he throws the pillow to Aditi!!! (hooray!)
and he tells her in her ear: sing a song!
aditi: (has a sensational voice, btw)

kaanto se khinch ke ye aanchal
tod ke bandhan baandhee paayal
koee naa roko dil kee udaan ko,
dil wo chalaa
aaj fir jeene kee tamannaa hain
aaj fir marane kaa iraadaa hain

apane hee bas mein naheen mai,
dil hain kahee to hoo kahee main
jaane kyaa paa ke meree jindagee ne,
has kar kahaa
aaj fir ...

mai hoo gubaar yaa toofaan hoo,
koee bataaye main kahaa hoo
dar hain safar mein kahee kho naa jaaoo mai,
rastaa nayaa
aaj fir ...

kal ke andheron se nikal ke,
dekhaa hain aankhe malate malate
fool hee fool jindagee bahaar hain,
tay kar liyaa, ajj fir...

anu: oh my god! you have such a bad voice! almost as bad as bani!
😡 now aditi is smart, remember!
Aditi throws the pillow to anu! (i love this girl!)
Aditi whispers into her ear : i want you to apologize to me, and bani!
like you mean it!
(go aditi!!!👏)
anu: ahhhh...fine! sorry aditi and bani!
aditi: for....😉
anu: for... insulting you. two minutes later she says: uhhh. ill get you!
Aditi: ya, we will see about that!
(you deserve it anu!, but don't worry aditi has got loads more for you
three!)
anu, suhani, and rashi frown while the rest look proudly at aditi👏
anu then throws it to suhani with out noticing.
anu: suhani, i want you to hug the guy you like! (she knows who it is)
suhani: ok, and she walks over to pushkar and hugs him while pia
looks sad.
then she walks away and gives the pillow to ranveer and tells him to
give rashi a hug!
ranveer: fine!! he says in an angry voice, and does it, while rano
gets angry!
then ranveer passes the pillow to bani, and he tells her to:
slow dance with jai!! and so she gets up, grabs jai's hand
(she's blushing like crazy☺️)
and the dance to this song (one of my favorite songs,
but i don't know the lyrics)
it's: bahoon ki darmiyaan....dho pyar milrahehain
and while they slow dance, they look dreamily into each others eyes!
and then after ten minutes they stop and bani throws the pillow to pia
telling her to: say a poem to pushkar, and she does this one:
btw. i wrote it when i was eleven:
life as we know it
is a cherishable moment
let us remember for this night
for it may not be the same in the next sight! 😳
push: Wow! nice poem!
pia: thanks, and she throws the pillow to the only person left: rano:
ummm...make up a poem with ranveer's name in it, and say it to
him!
so she says another poem i made up when i was 11, only instead
of ranveer it was prachi, my sis:
there are a lot of wonders about ranveer
if only i met a angel to tell me why
in dawns of night and fame
let me worship my moments with this pain!
ranveer; wow! hey, I'm not a pain!
rano: ya, well, that's what you think!
sahil: Wow! that was a lot of fun guys! hey guess what! i just found
out that there is a really great beach in turkey near by! let's all go
tomorrow!
jai: great! so we are all going to the beach tomorrow!
Hope you like it! leave comments/predictions!









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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice part..Aditi is very very smart...I am sure these three witches are going to have a hell of a time now.. 👏 👏
~devi~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you guys! in this part, they all go to the beach as they decided!

Part seven:
they all go to the turkey beach and everyone is wearing something, well, different, (will give the links later,)
pia, bani, rano, and aditi look really cute, while anu, rashi,and suh. are wearing something obnoxious.
Jai: wow! bani you look great!
bani: thanks! 😳
pushkar; wow! pia you look awesome!
pia: thanks!😳
ranveer; rano, you look super!
rano: thanks😳
anu, suhani, and rashi: what about us? 😆
jai, push, and ranveer: you all look obnoxious
anu, suhani, and rashi: don't know what it means so: thanks!🤣

sahil:OK guys, lets go in he water!
int the water they all have soo much fun with each other, and push, jai, and ranveer, finally realize that maybe they should take their relationship on the next level, and ask their best friends out for dinner
and they do so:

jai(Mr. cool😎..😆) : bani, you want to go out with me some time, like tonight?i know we've been friends for the past three months, but i was wondering, if you wanted to become more than that??

bani: 😳😳blushingly she said ....yes!

pushkar: ummmm.....pia....i know we've been friends for the past three months, but i really like yo, and i was wondering, if you want to go out with me tonight?

pia: 😳😳blushing like crazy she said....yes, i would love to!

ranveer: rano, you want to go out with me tonight, i mean cuzzz i have always liked you these three months....so???

rano: Great!!😛 (all excited)

next part: the big leap!leave comments!









Edited by ~devi~ - 18 years ago

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