FF: Ek haseena thi..Ek deewana tha-pg.12 - Page 2

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sangitadas thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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story's goign at a nice pace and seems interesting
so please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
great part.
liked it
wow bad teacher already....can't believe this.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you guys! 😊😊
here is part three:
it's lunch time, and they all go to leave. pia, bani, and rano are afraid of what's going to be of them during lunch. but, they don't have a choice, they must go. they enter the lunch room and sit on their class table and stare at the angry faces. they have no appetite. as soon as every one arrives; anu starts a food fight by hitting jai first. jai figures out what anu is trying to do, and yells FOOD FIGHT! and everybody starts hitting pia, rano, and bani. they try to take cover but there's no use. they get totally covered with food and then they all leave with a smirk on their faces. Bani, p, and r, remember what lara said about cleaning the cafeteria for a month and look around and are really sad and angry. 😡
they grab some tissues and dry them selves up and go to their next class. there, they have a normal class(thank god!). the day is over and p,b and r go to the cafeteria to get started on the mess. they try to do it as fast as they can, well at least pia and bani do, because they have two papers due tomorrow ! while their cleaning, jai and suhani, anu and pushkar,and rashi and ranveer walk in with smiles on their faces 😡
jai: you guys deserve this for cheating on our tests and giving us zeros.
every body agrees with him and they leave a sad bani, pia, and rano.
pia: di, i don't get it! why does lara hate us sooo much??? what did we ever do to her?
bani: i don't know pia, bu i sure would like to.
rano: i cant believe you two, your jut going to let her treat you like your slaves again? we have to do something!!!
bani: i know rano, but what?
thinking this, bani, pia, and rano stay there till 8:30 cleaning the lunch room and finally went home and typed up those papers, well p and b did. they also decided that tomorrow they will ask lara why she hates them. (yey!👏🥳)
they go to sleep at about 10:30, and bani cant stop thinking about jai, 😳😍, pia cant stop thinking about pushkar😳😍 and rano cant stop thinking about ranveer😳😍
Part four:
ringgg!ringgg! the alarm rings and bpr get up, take a shower, and go to collage for another miserable day. as they walk to their classes, they bump into anu, suhani, and rashi who were with jai, push, and ranv.
anu: oooo, look, it's the "three pigs!" hahahaha!
suhani: ya! btw, Halloween is coming, and you're going to need a costume right? oh, wait, you guys are already so hideous you don't need one!!!!! hahaha!
rashi: yeah! if you guys are sooo scary, i wonder what your parents look like.
that did it! pia could handle anything, but not her parents being insulted, she lost her temper and gave her a huge slap across her face!!😲 (you go pia!😉)
pia: you have no right to insult my parents! i can handle anything, but not some one insulting them!!!!!!!
and they walk away from there leaving a shocked rashi and an angry/shocked others. they go to their class and lara starts her demonizing! as in torturing!
lara: today, you are going to read out loud a summary of the report i told you to write about your life. first anu.
anu: hi! I'm a really really rich girl and I'm really pretty, and i love guys! shopping and fashion is my life, and my mommy an daddy love me! i live the perfect life! that's it! 🤪
lara had a shocked face, while the rest were laughing at her, especially push, jai, and ranv. 🤣
lara: umm, anu, where is your written paper?
anu: huh? i was supposed to write something? 🤪
lara: never mind!!😡
then finally came jai's turn and he spoke on behalf of him and his brothers.
jai: we are just really a simple family, and we lead a great rich life with our parents.
lara: thank you jai! that was wonderful! now it's bani, pia, and rano's turn!
bani gets up, but on her way to the room her dupato gets caught with jai's desk and she sees this and gets embarrassed 😳 she goes to untangle it and so does jai and their hands touch!!! so jai removes his hand and bani untangles her dupato while jai just looks into her eyes with this dreamy look😍. once she untangles it she looks up and sees jai and they have a starring session that is interrupted by lara, : what are you doing! do you want another zero, get over there!!!
bani: yes, well, me and my sisters are from a simple family in Mt.
abu, and our mother passed away when we were little and our father abandoned us, married another woman, died and we were put under the charge up our step mother who left us about three months.
lara; i see! and she snatches the papers from her hand, and puts a big fat zero on it and smirks evilly! after hearing this, jai, pushkar, and ranv. start feeling for them, and wonder why such sweet girls would cheat on their paper. pia noticed bani and jai, and wants to ask her sister what she is thinking, and she will tonight.
lara: all of you passed accept pia, bani, and rano, who get a zero!
class is dismissed, jai, push, and ranv. try to go talk to bani, pia, and rano, but are pulled away by anu, suhani, and rashi. pia, bani, and rano go up to talk to lara and pia asks: Ms. M, we would like to know....why...you hate us soo much? says pia with a scared voice.
lara: i hate you three soo much because....read the next part to find out why, trust me, you wont believe it, and neither will b, p, and r!
all comments/predictions/and suggestions are welcome!


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Posted: 18 years ago
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devi that was awesome
jsut read the last three parts
whats up with this lara
why is she soo mean
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great parts


part 2 : awww noo y does lara hate them ?


part 3: fantastic 👏

ctn soon

dammy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
thanks all parts r gr8.....cont soon
~devi~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you all guys! i am glad you like it!
part five:
lara: i hate you three...because...well i cant explain, read this note and you'll understand! i must leave now!
pia, bani, and rano go to lunch
they sit next to each other opposite jai,push,and ranv.
they read the note:
Dear daughters,
you are the light of my life, and i am sorry i left you. there is something i must tell you. tonight, September fifth, when bani is 24, pia is 23 years old, and rano is 21 years old. go to the attic at exactly 9:00, and there will be an amulet there and a book next to it, which will explain every thing, because i don't know a lot my self. i know the attic door never opened, but tonight at none it will,. i am sorry, i know this is too much for you three to handle, but it's your destiny.
~love, your father
after reading this bani,pia, and rano are left shocked and confused 😲.
jai, pushkar, and ranveer look at them confused. 😕
jai: what's wrong?
rano: nothing! why do you care???
jai: just asking
ranveer: jai bhaiya, why are you talking to these cheap lower class girls?
rano: who are you calling cheap!!!
push: ranveer, let it go!
then anu walks over with her squad.
anu: you three are in our seats!
rano: who says! is your name written on it???
pia: let it go rano, lets just move! there is no use talking to a wall
and then they go to move but jai stops them. 😃😃
jai: no wait, anu, don't talk to them like that! let them sit there, they did get here first! 😉 👏👏
bani: no it's ok, we don't mind,
jai: no it's not fair, come have a seat!
so they sit back down and eat silently until
jai: so, bani, um mm would you like to go out on a date with me???
bani got sooooo happy but didn't show it on her face, she just smiled.
bani: yes, sure! and she started blushing 😳😳☺️
jai: great! then ill pick you up at 7:30?
bani: that's fine! and she writes her address down for him
jai: great! see you tonight!
hearing that bani pia and rano leave
ranveer: jai bhaiya! how could you go out with the girl you cheated on your test???
jai: ranveer, i don't believe they did any thing! look at how innocent they are, and tonight I'm going to find out the truth,
ranveer: but..
push: ranveer, stop it, I'm with jai bhaiya, i think he is absolutely right, and bani, pia, and rano seem like great girls!!
ranveer: fine!
jai: thanks pushkar!
in the other corner:
rano: di! how could you go out with that guy!
bani: rano, i like him, and maybe tonight, i can tell him that lara said that because she hates us!
rano: but...
pia: rano, stop it, I'm with di! if she likes jai, then she should go out with him!, di just be sure to be back by nine, don't forget the letter!
bani: yes pia!
preview for next part:
~bani and jai kiss!!!, but then....
~they discover their destiny
~ they are attacked by.............
I hope you all like it! remember all comments/suggestions/and predictions are welcome!


jigna_07 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
oh man ab to date bh ban gaya
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wowo..itni jaldi date jaa rahen hai??
And what is this about the letter and destiny...Too confusing now..
Pls update soon
~devi~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you for replying guys! I don't really like part five my-self, so i am going to edit it. tell me what you think:
Revised part five:
lara: i hate you three so much because, even though you three are soo poor and are orphans, you are successful! when i was married to your father, he always put your needs in front of mine, and i hated that! then, one day, because i yelled at one of you, he slapped me!!! and then he kicked me out!!! that was when i lost it! , and so, after he died, i made your lives miserable by bringing you three up! and i will keep torturing you till i die! and nothing on this earth can change my mind!
with that she left b, p, and r totally shocked and sad
pia; di, i don't get it, isme hamare galti kya hain?
bani: i don't know pia, come on lets go to lunch
and they go to lunch and sit next to each other opposite jai, push, and ranv. but bani, pia, and rano forgot to pack their lunches, and were sitting there hungry.
jai: don't you three have our lunch?
bani quickly answers: no
jai: btw, Mrs. M (lara) explained to us that it was all a misunderstanding, and that you guys never really cheated off our tests, so were sorry for yesterday, and to show were sorry, how about we give you guys some lunch
bani: it's ok, we forgive you, but you don't have to get us lunch
rano: ya! it's totally cool!
pia: agreed!
jai: no, we want to, you guys wait here while we get you something to eat
and they leave
while they are gone, pia, bani, and rano think why would lara actually do something nice for them??? especially after what she just told them, and they thought this must be some sort of trap of hers, but what? before they could think of the answer, jai comes back with bani's lunch, push comes back with pia's and ranv comes back with rano's. together they share a wonderful lunch, until anu, rashi, and suhani come.
anu: jai, why are you eating your lunch with her?
rashi: ranveer, why are you eating lunch with her?
suhani: pushkar, why are you eating lunch with her?
jai, push, and ranv: because we want to! d'oh!
anu: but why???? why would you want to eat with such cheap girls??
jai: because their nice people who we want to share our lunch with, so if you don't mind..could you go!! 😉👏👏
then anu, suhani, and rashi leave
jai; sorry, i apologize on their behalf
bani: no need!
and they enjoy their lunch
villains planning corruption:
lara sees anu, rashi, and suhani walking with frowns and asks:
girls, why the angry face?
anu: Mrs. M, that bani, pia, and rano have ruined everything! they stole our boy friends! (even though they really never were! lol.)
lara: oh did they now! (and she smirks) well, you will certainly have to do something about that now wont you! why don't you girls try to riun them completeley, and make jai, pushkar,and ranveer not like them any more!
suhani: you are right Mrs. M! we will do exactly that! now it's revenge!😈
and they walk away
lara: hehehe! this was all apart of my plan! i let push, jai, and ranv. forgive bani pia and rano so that suhani, rashi, and anu would go after them. and if that doesn't work, i can always use jai, push,and ranv. as bait to blackmail bani, pia, and rano to hurt their feelings! muhuhahaha!!! leave comments😊
sorry if it's a little off or boring, i just found out some one close to me died.

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