FF: Ek haseena thi..Ek deewana tha-pg.12

Hello! here is the introduction and part one of my new and first FF: Ek haseena thi...Ek deewana
Characters and their Characteristics:
jai: 25 years old. The coolest guy in collage, every girl loves him, but he wants the girl that doesn't go "gaga" over him. he is extremely rich, but doesn't show off. Jigs's oldest son.
~Jigyasa Walia: 47 years old. Jai's mother. she is really mean to every one except to her children. she is extremely rude, especially to people in the lower classes. loves to show off!~
~Aditya: 48 years old. married to jigs, doesn't love her any more, loves his kids
~Sahil:21 years old. Jigyasa's youngest son. really lazy, and fails all his classes. he is also popular, girls fall for him.~
~Pushkar:23 years old. really sweet like his brother jai, likes getting attention by girls, but like Jai, he wants a sweet, yet different girl.
~Ranveer: 24 years old. evil like Jigs, but he will change. (All the brothers go to the same collage)
the dixits:
~Bani: 24 years old. really nice, loves her sisters, but doesn't really believe in love. shares a better relationship with pia then rano.
~Pia: 23 years old, she is really sweet and nice, loves her sisters and can do anything for them, believes in love, to her money is nothing compared to love. also a book worm! (nothing like her in Ks!)
~Rano: 21 years old, really sweet as well, but spoiled brat! loves her sisters, but is not responsible. she cant relate herself to her sisters.(nothing like her in Ks) btw, their middle-class
~Lara Dixit: 47 years old, b, p, and r's step mother, really mean and cruel. a tyrant! (all sisters go to the same collage as Jai)
others:
~Anu Shukla: really mean rich girl
~Suhani Kapoor:same as Anu, only more money-minded
~ Rashi Desai: kind of like pia's character in the show, well not that bad, but yes she is like her. (they also go to Jai's collage)
summary of bani, pia, and rano:
they lost their mom in an accident, and their father is alive but abandoned them when they were very young. he married they were taken care of their step-mother, who tortured them, and left about 3 months ago.
Part one:
It's the first day of collage after the big break and every body is excited. Anu, Rashi, and Suhani entered wearing their skimpy short skirts, and small purses. Jai, Pushkar, Sahil, and Ranveer,in a different corner with girls lining up to meet them. on the other side, Bani, pia, and rano coming in.bani: wow! look at the huge campus!pia: ya di! rano: could you two stop acting like that, or people will find out we are not as rich as them!pia: who cares! were here to study remember
rano: whatever! look at that line of girls there!
bani: i wonder why they are there
pia: she goes over to see, It's a line to meet boys! rano: really! wow! i am soo going
pia and bani: rano!!!rano; what! i am going, bye!pia and bani: bye!pia and bani walk across and notice the guys there. bani only looks at jai, thinking about how cut he is and blushes a little
jai looks across and notices bani, and his mouth drops. he thinks,WOW! who is that girl! pia looks at pushkar, and cant take her eyes away, as soon as she does that pushkar sees her, but is interrupted by suhani. and then pia snaps out of it and snaps bani out of it too,
pia: di! what were you thinking of?
bani: nothing pia, lets go to class.As soon as she says that, the bell rings and the "cool guys" go to class, as well as the girls. jai tries to follow bani, but fails to do so. ans they reach class, and bani and pia and rano are shocked to see.......read the next parts in order to find out.please leave your comments/suggestions/predictions! and sorry about the spelling/grammar errors!

great strory......oooooooooooooh jai likes bani...........so does she.......continue soon 😊

thanks for replying! will post part two tonight or tomorrow!yes bani and jai like each other, but will she be able to believe that she does? and will everyone else let her? remember, she does not really believe in love. will jai change this belief of hers?

Great ff 👏 Awesome start 👏
So bani and jai noticed ecah other , good 😳
Pia and Rano have changed their roles in ur ff 😆
Good start , please continue ASAP 😉
Humera.

nice part hun ...n welcome to IF!!...hope to read some JB romance soon!! 😉 😳

interesting characters...Wowo Rano n after boys!!! This si something to watch out for!!!

Awesome start.
different...liked it
plz cont. sooon

AWSOME start!
its really interesting how you changed the characters around!
fab!
can't wait to read it

hmmm about predictions:
well... i think.. or atleast i hope jb are like in the same classes hehehe *hint* *hint* 😉 😆

newayz back to the update
it was a great update!
continue soon

maddi

thanks guys! btw, all of the guys are in the same classes(bani, jai, pia, pushkar, rashi, ranveer, sahil, rano, anu, and suhani) coincidence! i think not!😉 here is part two:
bani, pia, and rano, walk into class and are shocked to see Lara there writing on the board. they couldn't believe that the woman who tortured them for soo many years is back into their lives. pia, bani, and rano all had dead expressions on their faces🤢
Anu: are you three just going to stand their like weirdos or are you going to sit down!
ok.ok. don't have a cow! said the enthusiastic rano
anu just gave them a smirk as they went to their places. bani and pia had a worried look on their faces, and rano was just angry. bani takes the place next to jai, pia next to push, and rano in between ranveer and sahil.
Lara turns around and sees p,b, and r and is shocked. 😲 and has her evil look on 😈.
lara: oooooh, so the three pigs are in this class eh. then she thinks in her mind: this is great! i will be able to torture them in class now! hehehe!
every body else in the class is confudled😕 who is she talking about? they all thought.
lara: well, you all will call me Ms. M, and may i tell you i am a very strict teacher! and so, i would like to test your knowledge by giving you a test today. any questions?
rano: but it's the first day and you didn't even teach us anything yet, (she says it with a lot of attitude)
lara: are you deaf? i said questions, not comments!!!!!! (she says it with a lot of anger)😡
sahil and ranveer see this and feel kind of bad for her.😳
rano had nothing more to say and lara started passing out the papers. as she passed buy bani's, pia's and rano's desks, she said get ready to suffer, and slams the papers on their desks. they take their tests and try to do their best,
bani: not sure about most of them, but put her best guess😭
rano: totally clueless and angry
pushkar: knew all the answers, took him some time though
jai: just like bani, they both were sure and unsure about the same ones. 😳
sahil: just sat their pretending to work, he could care less
ranveer: like rano clueless and thinking what nonsense is this!
anu, rashi, and suhani: just like sahil
pia: knew all the answers, the test was a breeze for her!
times up! she only gave them ten minutes! she hurriedly collected the papers and graded them!
lara: ok, i have graded the papers and three of you are in big trouble!!! they are bani, pia, and rano!!!!!!! how dare you three witches cheat on my test!
bani, pia, and rano: what! we didn't cheat!
lara: oh stop lying you shameless girls! stop this act! because of you three, the rest of the class gets a zero as well as you guys, and you will have to clean up the cafeteria messes for a month!
rano: what!!!!!! we didn't cheat! who do you think we cheated on? huh?
lara; well, bani and jai had the same answers, you and ranveer, and pia and pushkar. these boys couldn't have done it because their actually counted as human beings, unlike you three!
pia: this is absurd! we did not cheat, and technically, you have no proof against us! all you are basing this on is that grudge and hatred you have for us! (she said it just like a lawyer)
lara: oh well. get this, you are the student and I'm the teacher, and you have no right to question me. you do as i say!
with this she dismisses the class, jai, push, ranveer, and every body else are really mad at bani, pia, and rano!!!
Everybody: we will get you three during lunch!!!!!!! leaving pia, bani, with a sad face and rano with an angry one!😭😭and a 😡
questions you should think about:
~ why does lara hate bani, pia, and rano sooooo much?
~ what will everybody in their class do to them?
~what will pia, bani, and rano do about every thing?
~will jai, pushkar, and ranveer change their way of thinking after they find out their innocent?
please give your thoughts/answers/suggestions/and comments! and tell me if i should cont.

ooooooooooo ! omg!
oh no dat witch lara just didn't do tat!
OMG awww poor 3 gurlz!
i can't believe every1s out to get them 😆
LMAO!
b nd j hav the same iq! lolz!
and so does rano and ranveer
though its funny how Pushkar and Pia got all the answers ryt??? 😆
continue soon
YAY! THEY ALL IN THE SAME CLASS