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Posted: 18 years ago

Poo, here is the poem you gave me to do...

I wouldn't say it was a tough task but I haven't been able to make is as good as i would've liked!

Hope you like, this is from me to you...😳

Friendship isn't something that happens everyday,

It's not something planned, set on a fixed date.

We met so randomly, it surprises me now,

How we clicked and became good friends,

Is something I absolutely don't know how.

Description of yours is tough to give,

Light eyes and smile so inviting,

Makes you wonder how anyone can ever dislike it!

You're the person, who lifts my spirits when I am down,

A talk with you and I am all up and about.

Shy and reticent you are on one side,

A complete extrovert and cartoon on the other.

Friend like you I am lucky to have,

Special you are to me, but do I need to say that?

My day ain't complete, without a chat,

The fun and jokes that we together crack.

No one is worth your tears, you remember that,

But if the need is there, pick up the phone,

Dial my number, cry in my ears, do just that!

When you are feeling lonely, and feeling blue,

Take a minute out, think of me and you won't feel that anymore!

The way you affect me, is not an easy thing to do,

You touch my soul in a way, a very few can do.

Thank you is not enough, justice it won't do to all the thing's you've done.

But a promise I can make and keep it too,

I will always be by your side, whenever you need me with you.

Love ya
Shruti

Edited by babethatsme - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Koi hai aaj...
Sab ko pehle kuch dino mein excitement tha...

now other than me everyone is dead 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
apne pukara aurhum chale aaye 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry yaar shruts.. today's been one hell of a day.. salman, ram and then chores.. its a crazy mix 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Shruts thanks for being a great sport and answering all the questions. It was good to see you get grilled. Now it has come the time for our new murgi.
Take Care
Thanks for your cooperation
KS Dev Team😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Shobha here is the fanfic, hope it is what you wanted…😳

Jai Walia had enough ….he was tired of all the things that Durga was doing…he had been patient…thinking that one day she will understand his love…but enough was enough…now it was action time…

When Durga came back after taking over Walia industries…he was waiting…no one was in the hall…he held her hand and took her in his study….

Durga – Mr Walia…does it hurt a lot….do you know how I have hurt for last 5 yrs…

Jai – Stop this ranting Bani….5 yrs 5 yrs….have you ever given a thought to us…me n OUR children…

Durga – I have thought of nothing else…I only thought of how I will destroy you….

Jai was enraged – OH you and your sister together have destroyed me….long back….main ek namard ban ke reh gaya hoon….tumehe to sab pata hai…dubai main kya hua…phir bhi tum usko ghar le aayi…bahut pyar tha na tumehen…taras aa gaya tha na…

Durga – I know it was all your plan…

Jai wanted to strangle her – bahut acha lag raha hai Bani…kitni achi tarah tum janti ho mughe….hamare beech jo lamhe the kya wo sab jhooth the bani….bolo…kya hamara pyar jhooth tha…kya hamare bache us pyar ke gawah nahin hai…

Bani was shaken…confused – main wo sab nahin janti…main bas janti hoon ki aap sab ne milke mughe dhokha diya…mughe jail bheja….Mental asylum bheja….

Jai shook her – and did you not once stop to thin why all that happened…Jao bani apni us behan Pia se pucho…kya kiya usne panch saal pehle…tumhain jasoosi ka bahut shok hai na…ye sab usika natija hai….

Durga – Mr Walia what do you mean….

Jai – nahin Bani tumain mugh par bharosa nahin hai…jao jis par bharosa hai usi se ja ke pucho…aur mere liye tum mar chuki ho…haan meri bani mar chuki hai aur main kisi durga ko nahin janta….hamara koi rishta nahin hai….

With that he went out, banging the door…Bani/durga was left confused….all the moments that she had spent with Jai came flashing…the love they had shared…could it all be false….no they were still cherished moments for her….she still loved him….but she was hurt with what he had done…but now it all seemed like a puzzle…what he said meant he had done all that under some pressure….she had to find out…rano was the best person to go to…..she went to rano and Rano told her everything truthfully and in detail….Bani was crying…what a mistake she had made….

Bani – now how do I face Mr Walia…ye sab Pia ne kiya…aur main Mr Walia ko dard deti rahi…ab main kya karoon….

Rano – Di aap mr Walia se baat Karen…wo aap se bahut pyaar karte hai…wo aap ki baat zaroor sunegen….

Bani went to Jai Walia's room…she opened the door…it seemed he had been waiting for her…sitting on the sofa looking smug….

He gave a sacartic smile – Ah Ms Durga Dsgupta…what an honor to have you in my bedroom…or sud I say it is Mrs Durga Walia…come to meet her husband…kya boloon batao…

Bani –nahin MR walia durga ki maut ho gayi…. Mrs. Bani Jai Walia has come to ask forgiveness form her husband Mr. Jai Walia…

For a moment his features softened…but only for a moment…then back to sneering…

Jai – bani I am in no mood for one of your silly games…you can leave now…

Bani – mr Walia don't you think life has played enough games with us…Rano told me everything…I don't know how to ask your forgive ness…bas aap ek baar bol dijiye ki aapne mughe maaf kar diya phir main chali jaoongi…

Jai realized that this time it really was his Bani…he wanted to take her in his arms and *ahem Ahem* but no firt they needed to talk….and talk they did….for more than an hour they talked like two matured adults…telling each other what they did why they did it….hiding nothing from each other….finally

Bani – I hope Mr. Walia you can forgive me….

Jai smiled – Bani we both made mistakes and we both need to forgive each other and make up…and the best way to make up is….

He moved towards her…she moved towards him…and the door opened with Krishna and Atharav coming in shouting 'papa papa….mummy mummy…'

Jai and bani picked up the kids…laughing

Jai – Arre Atharva Krishna aap log soye nahin abhi tak….

Atharva – papa kal Sunday hai….hai na

Jai – yes beta

Krishna – hum log slook (school) nai hai…aaj tham (hum) aap ke paas soyga

Atharva – haan …mummy aap bhi humale thath thona theek hai….

Jai laughed – yes beta from now mummy is always going to sleep here…

Eye lock….

Atharva and Krishna – yyyyaaaayyyyyyyy

They lie down on the bed…Atharva n Krishna in between them…

Jai – Bani atharva and Krishna have always wanted a youger bro n sis…I think we should make them happy…what do you say…

Bani blushed….

AW n KW – yes mummy yes please please….

Bani – first tell your daddy to shave…then I will think about it….

AD n KD – yes papa aapki dhadi humain chubti hai….

Jai – ok beta I will shave tomorrow…abhi I have to punish some one….

The kids keep on a lively banter and finally sleep….

Jai moving the lock of hair from bani's fore head – Kal aap mere aur humare bachon ke saath picnic par chalengi…

Bani shyly – main aap ke saath kahin bhi challongi…hamesha…

Jai tried to get up…but athrva maoaned 'papa'…

Jai – bilkul apne mama pe gaya hai…wo bhi nahin chata tha hum saath ho kabhi…

Bani – mama kon…

Jai – AD aur kon…

They both laugh…and finally sleep looking at each other….in the morning when they get up…they are in each others arms…no sign of the kids…Jai got up and quickly closed the door….and joined Bani in bad….finaly *ahem ahem*

Downstairs the kids announce that they are finally going to get a little brother and sister…mummy papa had promised them….no one said anything but all had a cheeky grin and were ready with ammunition for Jai and Bani to tease….everyone had a happy look.

Note- Shobha you asked me to write *ahem ahem* i did twice you can check😉😆

Shruti

Edited by babethatsme - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Shina here is something on each of you'll. Hope you'll don't come with joota's behind me!

1. Navs

I met Navs on the fanfic thread Bani getting Bold as everyone knows. She at first came across as this quiet female who spoke only when spoken too. She didn't bother much about anything and she didn't loose her cool easily. She was this sweet person who made you feel at home. She is the sweetheart from all of us. When I think about her, I think about a person who can do no harm to anyone. Though she is older to me, I can never take her to be that. There is this kind of comfort I share with her and somehow the age has nothing to do with anything. Though me being the younger one there is the feeling of protectiveness towards her. She is one person I wouldn't want anything remotely bad happening to come what may. You have to speak to her to know the kind of person she is. She can always put a smile on your face no matter how down you may be, atleast she does put a smile on my face. She is always there for you and without you even asking her to be there. Navs is an intelligent girl who knows what's going on around her but she will most of the times seem oblivious to it. It is very hilarious and cute the way she says *FAINTS*. She is my confused partner cos in all probability it will the two of us who are lost!

She is a good writer and her honesty comes across in her writing. She is crazy after her SIR, which is Salman, Iqbal and Ram. I have irrarated her so much about this especially Ram and I am sure she has been wanting to kill me all those times.She makes awesome siggies and she makes them quick heehe… I doubt she has ever told anyone of us a no for anything we may have asked her. She loves to clean and cook (and now I am officially dead). We have this joke about how she first makes posts on KS forum and then brushes her teeth, so yea she is the one we rag the most! Love you navs, stay the same!!!

2. Sanam

Sanam or as we know her Sam. She is the closest to me from all 5 and knows stuff about me that at times no one else knows. As I have mentioned before, she is my can't live with, can't live without. We have had so many freaky incidents that we have lost count now. I can proudly say ours is a friendship that has no place for sorry's, thank you's or please. I wouldn't say she can read me and my moods, but she doesn't do a bad job at it either. I am sure all of us are grateful to her for giving us the fanfic Bani getting Bold, cos if not for that we wouldn't have met! She has this uncanny sense of humour, which is amusing at times cos you really wonder where that came from. She can piss me off real bad at times, but somehow I can't stay mad at her for long, which sucks btw cos she can take full advantage of that. Sam can be a really mature and sensible person if she wants to be but those days are really few. She is a crazy woman to say the least and sometimes she will say these things really seriously that crack you up instantly. She writes really well but under-estimates her self too much when it comes to that. She has, by far, one of the best and most entertaining fanfic's here but she won't ever take any good thing you say about it seriously. Her win in the June 19th competition has hopefully made her realize that she is genuinely good. She is obsessed with Ram and Amitabh but has her priorities right…hehee…The day she calls me Shruti I know something is wrong. With her I can be myself and I can tell her anything at all. I don't remember the last time I have thought and spoken to her. We have this weird sense of communication between us and what we talk only we understand. I am sure if someone read or heard our conversations they would be shocked…lmao. Her visit to India is something I will always cherish…the amount we used to talk and yet not get bored is amazing. She became a very close friend and a very special person during that trip of hers. She can hardly say no to me and I do take advantage of that sometimes and I know that we both value each other's opinion more than anyone else's. I could go on and talk about a lot of other stuff but then I think for the forum, I shall stop here! Love you Sam and thanks for being there!

3. Mamta

We call her evil piku and that's not cos she is evil, its just cos she doesn't bend any rules for anyone. Being such a good friend, I was the first person she warned after being the viewbie. That's the level of integrity and honesty she has. She is the most helpful and honest person I have come across. She is not afraid of calling a spade a spade and I for one have never seen her speaking ill about a person behind their back. It's like, this is there and this is the way it is. She cares a lot for her friends and her family. They mean the world to her. She feels strongly about woman oriented subjects and if it is in her hands, I can assure you that with her conviction she will accomplish something. She is a very hardworking person, a very few people are like that. I for one am not and I really wish I was. Piku on the looks of it doesn't seem like the kind of person who will have a sense of humor or who will be the fun and games type, but when you get to know her she is all that and a lot more. She can write really well and can write on various things together and she can write on demand. That is something I envy cos I can write only when I want to. Being here in India, I am not as close to her as the others are, but I guess we make up for it when we have our heart to heart talks once in a while. Mamta is someone who will tell you if she doesn't like something and she will do so more if you are her friend. Many people might misinterpret it but that's her way of showing she cares. She loves to cook and the kind of dishes she speaks about confuses a person who can't even make eggs! I always kid around about all their chores and she by far does the most! Ending this here, Thank you piku for being there and All the best dude for whatever you make ever take on. Rock the world cos you have it in you!

4. Jigna

She is the bacha and surely not the innocent one. She hates the fact that I have been calling her that but then again when have I listened. She is the only one younger to me! Starting with her as a person, hardworking and intelligent but she won't show it. Determined and honest but you wont know it. She is the closest to my age and maybe that's why I find most things in common with her in my day to day life. She is a person who doesn't go by norms. She has weird sleep habits and those are just like mine. She is the one person who is forever bored. She likes Salman Khan and Ram Kapoor and has this secret crush on Jimmy Shergill. She is a basketball fanatic and a person who loves doing chores. Only kidding. Jigna or as I call her jigs, is a complete sweetheart when she wants to be one. She is someone that can make you laugh in an instant. She is very mature for her age but knows how to have her fun too. She has a vast knowledge on a lot of subjects. What I like the most about her is she isn't the in your face kind of person. She will never tell you what she has done. You will know her credentials, if I may call them so, only gradually. She is someone who makes a lot of friends, but will let only a handful come close to her. Jigs knows how to take things in her stride and use them to her benefit which I admire. Jigs and me have similar opinions on a lot of things which, I guess, make us bond better. My first impression of hers isn't a strong one, the other's made a stronger first impression on me, but cos of that my friendship started with her on a complete clean slate. A few months ago she would have been the one I knew and had interacted the least with. But over the past few months we have chatted so much and about so many things, nonsensical and otherwise, it aint even funny! Jigs keep on making people laughing and thanx for being there dude love ya…and you are the bachcha!!! hehe

5. Shina

Shina. Man she is a complex character. If she is sweet one day, she is the meanest person the next. If she is laughing and joking around one minute, she is sulking over something the next. The time she is the happiest is probably when she is talking, looking, seeing, watching, hearing or anything else, about Salman Khan. She is the most obsessive fan I have come across but that's something I doubt anyone would want to change about her. If I have to puck one person and state with whom I have had the most problems, it will without a doubt be shina. Our friendship is the complete hindi film kinda script friendship. Many people are probably surprised at how good friends we still are. She is short tempered, stubborn, has attitude, conceited just like a scorpion but she is also helpful, kind hearted when she wants to be, a good listener on the other hand. There are things she wouldn't say about herself and there are things you wouldn't say about her. I owe her big time, because she is one of the biggest reasons I write poetry today. She gave me that belief in myself at a time when I needed it and when there was no one else. She is an excellent writer herself and its sad that she doesn't write for the forum anymore. She is brutally honest and is very good with her criticism. She will put across a point the way it should be put. She can be very weird at times and you wonder if it is the same person and then she will do something so Shina-like that all your doubts would be put to rest. Lol. She has some plans for her life and she has responsibilities but how much I know her, she will do both equally well. She is again a sort of person who is very intelligent but not very hardworking. She hates going to university for petty things and its hilarious the way she talks about it. Shina surprises me with how strong a person she is and how much confidence and conviction she has in herself. All I would want to tell her is to always keep those qualities with her cos they will take her where she wants to reach, to her destination. So whether I hate her or love her, she will always be a special person and someone even if I would want to forget I wouldn't be able to!

Shruti

Edited by babethatsme - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Shruts you have made me emotional, not just me but Jiggu and i am sure Sam, Navs and Shins will also be emotional when they read this.

At some point i was laughing and crying at the same time. 😭😭😭

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Thank I can, in a different ways,

I can do that all day, but it won't be going any big way.

Gifts I can give galore,

But what would they be worth, no one knows.

Sing and sway,

But that will just be the fun part of the day.

What these things meant, is of great magnitude,

To one person, and that is me for you.

Can't think of anything extra-ordinary,

No bright idea seems to cease.

I can't say things; they aren't just coming out,

Speechless I am without a doubt.

Made this week a special one,

Thank you for all you've done.

This will remain with me forever,

Irrespective of what's come and gone.

My heart is heavy, words in there,

The pleasure you've given me,

No one can comprehend.

Hoping just a heart felt thank you

Will crack the deal.

Cos that's all I can offer with great sincerity.

Thank you for making this week a very memorable one. I am sorry if i have missed some tasks or questions, shall go over the thread during the weekend and do things i may have left!

Love you'll

Shruti😳

Edited by babethatsme - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Just wanted to drop by and say congrats Shruti!

I've not been around much this week or else I definitely would have pasted my usual questions here...

I'll read through all 60 pages soon because I'm sure that you gave some great answers 😊

Congrats once again!

God bless.

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