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Posted: 18 years ago
thts strange..AD left jst like tht
r u sure he dnt have some other plans???
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena Di,

that was just fabalous as always,Bani's hyderbad bhai'
s are so funny and cute.loved how you brought them into the story so well. AD and Jai talk was too good,loved how Jai spoke for what was his.very well written.the kiss was just beautiful,i am lookin forward to the next part.cant wait. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi all:

Big Thank You to all for the lovely comments...

Jigs: I liked the Apaar Ahankari...I think Jai will only win the chawl brawl at the rate he is going, and that too with the help of Nattu, Adi, Ranveer, Moksh. May be Ranveer is going to put a koyla in AD's shirt... 😆 😆 😆

Ag06: Ananya, I don't have anything against AD, wish him well with Rano. She doesn't have a partner anymore, just a psychopath hurting his first wife.

Pooks: Thanks sweety, I tried to write this CITW in a mature fashion, I think JW needs to revisit his lost brain and figure out what's important in his life.

Sammy: Where the heck are you, loved the siggies, but get your butt here and finish your commento....LOLz

Shree: sorry, darling: you are right - my interest did drop. But that's no reason to give you bad updates, I will try to put more effort into the next one.

Swati: Thanks yaar. Jai just wants to stop playing this game and get back with Bani. He wants his Suhaag Raat... 😉

Janu_2006: Thanks

btkr (Bina): Thanks re, yep - JW got dissed by his own family. And next time bring the scientific calculator...
😆 😆

Divan: Vicky/vishy should have beatup JW. AD is not such a bad character, highly egotistic, but we will see how KS is going to butcher him.

Bugs_Bunny(Tanu): Glad you liked JJ (Jealous Jai) - and the 'A' adjectives. Costa Rica,yeah? I need to count the votes.

Seedless, sweet xxxxx: Thanks sweety for liking the quote, I am thinking that Ranveer doesn't deserve a suhaag raat... 😡 😡 😡 I am sure people want to loot all the expensive stuff AD is wearing... 😆

More thanks later...
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Posted: 18 years ago
ooopss!! I forgot to comment!! (maybe on the last two?!) Excellent part! Nice to see that even in Jai's absence she had some sort of protection from her two 'bhai's'.. Jalne ki buh kaha se aa rahi hai? Oh yah.. AD aur Jai se aa rahi hai..

Its ok though.. Jai and Bani are meant for one another.. their feelings are too strong.. and I could tell that by the way he claimed her behind the tree... 😳 😳 Nice part! Continue soon!

(I choose Italy!!!)
Edited by Hkaurk22 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena Di,

I want Italy too!! Costa Rica would be nice also....
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Posted: 18 years ago
THATwas nice jai being jelouse
AD BACK OFFF OK 😡 otherwise jai will punch u n it wont be nice 😆 😆 😛
pliz continue
luv
Rachna
xoxox
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hi all, I know every one is waiting for suhaag raat, and I will post the part 49B tomorrow...eventually my mood will get better. Right now, I am in a blah mood about KS. I guess my lack of enthusiasm is also showing in lack of comments from the readers, I don't blame you guys...If I gave you an insipid part, I don't deserve the comments either...

Part 49A

He wrenched his mouth from hers reluctantly and laid his chin on her head, tucking her face into his chest.

"Bani, we need to talk!" he whispered roughly, causing warm frissons to course through her body.

"I don't want to talk!" the honest admission that emitted from her made him smile triumphantly.

"Bani, I have got something important to say!" he placed a finger on her chin and lifted her face so that she could look him in the eye.

The lights were lit everywhere in the garden. The soft glow fell on her face giving luminosity to her dark eyes. Like six years ago, the flowers were in full bloom again, trumpet vines, sweat peas, rose vines, clematis, jasmine, night queen clung to the trellised arbors like long lost lovers. The fragrance from the white lilies, jasmines, roses and lavenders filled the warm air headily.

"If you keep looking at me like that, I will forget what I want to say!" Jai murmured tenderly.

"There are so many things I want to say today, Bani" he traced her cheek with a shaking finger.

She stared at him, her eyes locked with the limpid dark pools that were anything but placid right now.

The love that is clearly distinguishable in his eyes, made her heart stop. "Did you mean what you said inside, Jai?" She waited breathlessly for his answer.

"About being a one woman man? Me belonging to you? You belonging to me?" Jai verbalized her questions.

She nodded slowly.

"Yes! I meant them all. I told Aparajit Dev that I am ready to fight him, even duel him if necessary." He testified solemnly.

"Does it mean, what I think it means?" Bani waited impatiently for him to confirm.

"Yes, Bani…I am in love with you, I have fallen in love with you once again, heedlessly, irrevocably, inescapably, inexorably and permanently. If I can't have you, I would probably die a very lonely and unhappy man." His voice became hoarse with his declaration.

"And you trust me now?" Bani questioned his abrupt enunciation of his love.

"I don't think I ever distrusted you Bani, I was hasty and probably angry with you at first, but deep inside, I knew you wouldn't have done anything that would cause harm to our love" Jai caressed her wayward hair.

"What brought this on, Jai?" she was yet to be convinced of his admission.

"You have every right not to have any credence in what I say, but it doesn't matter, I will eventually persuade you to believe me, I will erode all the doubts, erase all your skepticism in the end." He looked endearingly vulnerable. "Even if it takes me a lifetime!"

"You didn't answer my question, Jai!" Bani was relentless in her prodding.

"When I saw you with Aparajit Dev, I was jealous as hell!" his cheeks burned with color eliciting a smile from Bani.

"But that's not new for you, is it?" Bani remembered his jealous nature from six years ago. He couldn't stand any one even dancing with her.

"No, it's not new!" he let out slowly. "But what's new is the realization that I have never been jealous when it came to my previous girl friends. When I went and talked to Aparajit, he was quite calm about letting you go, if I were in his shoes, I would have punched the daylights out of the guy who stood in my way." He looked confused at how easy it was for AD to let her go.

"Even if the guy was her husband and he was told that she loved her husband with all her heart and she never looked at anyone else in the same fashion?" Bani flushed becomingly.

The garden lights shed a melancholy effulgence in the softly lit garden.

The silence stretched endlessly.

"Jai?" she touched his face wearily.

"Did you just tell me that you love me? I am a dimwit and a numskull and I always needed to listen to difficult concepts numerous times before I comprehended them." A smile started a slow dance on his handsome face.

"You are a neanderthal man and you are overbearing, opinionated, egotistic and a dimwit, I have no reason to love you, but I do!" Bani conceded shyly.

He crushed her to him, raising her face to accept his kiss. The relief that spread in his being was plainly visible in the shadows that played hide and seek under the gul mohar tree.

He kissed her again and again, breaking each kiss with a declaration of his love.

"Bani, this is the happiest night of my life" he gently nuzzled her neck, pushing the veil back.

"It's a little early for the night, Jai!" She drawled dulcetly, leaning into him and tiptoeing to place an open kiss on his jaw line.

"You have plans for tonight?" He spoke haltingly between gasps as she explored his lips with her tongue.

"I have to tell my husband that I am working tonight!" Bani whispered as she looked at him with a mischievous smile.

"I have to write a passionate scene between this young, inexperienced writer with a handsome, rich and conniving businessman."

"The poor sop! Cuckolded by the writer's itch!" he laughed as he pulled her even closer to his steely body.

"Would you help me with the scene?" she held his hand as it tried to take liberties.

He nodded wordlessly. He looked bemused when she smiled at him.

"I want to say so many things to you; I want to say that I am sorry for forcing you to marry me the first time and again now, for not realizing that I fell in love with you that first time I saw you as a young woman; I want to apologize for letting you go, letting you believe that I distrusted you, for not being there when our daughter was born, for missing out on her childhood, for making you suffer with my pigheadedness" he rested his cheek against hers. "Bani, I was always an egotistic man, born with a silver spoon, everything I wanted in my reach, but today you made me realize how poor I would have been, if I let you go; if I didn't tell you 'I love you'; and if I did not see the reflection of love in your eyes;" She felt wetness on her cheek and looked up. A single, solitary tear fell from his cheek and dipped lower on to his neck. She followed its path and licked it delicately, making him shiver with yearning.

She lifted her fingers to stop him from talking. He satisfied himself in raining small kisses on them.

"Jai Walia, you are not a good listener, are you?" she whispered, nuzzling the brown column of his neck.

"I am doer, not much of a talker or listener" Jai let his fingers do the talking. "What are you talking about?"

"Did you hear what Pia said in her speech?" Bani questioned him with a smile.

He pushed her back to see her face. He looked quizzical. "She said something about fate and destiny! What did she mean?"

"About six years ago, she told Rano and I why I so readily accepted your proposal knowing that you were not my type." She sighed as her fingers slipped inside the collar of his kurta and touched his warm chest.

"I am not your type?" He looked affronted.

"Mmmm" She took pleasure in placing her lips and caressing the small expanse now uncovered by her fingers.

"Bani, why did you marry me?" he waited with bated breath for her answer.

"Because I loved you ever since you came back from US, since I was twelve. That's why" She replied carelessly, unwrapping the wayward scarf that was coming in between her and him. "I loved you for a very long time, in fact I hero worshipped you ever since I was eight." She threw the scarf on the ground.

"And now?" the vulnerability was back in his voice.

"Now I am all grown up and I no longer hero worship him, in fact – I think he needs someone to save from his own conniving, his massive ego and his high handed behavior!" she smiled against his chin.

"Are you applying for the job?" he pulled her back gently.

"It's a self nominated job, application is not required" she had that rare confidence that came with love.

He raised her face to him and rewarded her with a hard kiss. They broke apart reluctantly as long shadows came closer to where they were.

"Mama-ji, don't you think that you guys should look for a room?" Anu and Rohit were looking for some privacy as well.

"You are forgetting this is my house and my garden. I can make out with my wife whenever and wherever" he muttered without looking the younger couple.

"Sure mama-ji, but your daughter and your nephew have been staring at you for the last five minutes" Anu giggled.

"What?" Jai put Bani aside and peered into the dark. He saw them sitting on the swing and staring them goggle eyed.

"Reya, Rohan! It's not polite to watch people kissing…" he was guilty at being caught red handed.

"Uncle Vishesh told us, if people are not shy sucking faces outside, then we shouldn't be shy seeing them doing it" Rohan giggled and got an elbow in his stomach from his cousin drawing an "ouch" from him.

Jai raised his eyebrow. He shook his head in bewilderment about the influence 'Uncle Vishesh' wielded on the children.

"How long do you think we have to suffer this party before we go upstairs and find our room?" Jai sounded desperate to be alone with her.

Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Should I save also 😉

You know this would be a new record for me on CITW thread😆😆

Shoba thanks for such a lovely-dovely part with lots of sweetness😊. So finally that most awaited moment came and hero-heroine both confessed each other their love. And differences between them were over. Anu-Rohit really kabab mein haddi dear. Reya-Rohan were so adorable🤗. Rohan beta way to go like your mausaji😉. Now I can't wait for the part-B from you anymore. Please post it tomorrow na😃. Your FF means a lot for me to live.

👏

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks Divan, Rachna, Rani, Harvs, Sangita, Kiran, Nancy, Rooj, Ash, Preet, scifichick, amiee, taz234, Divan (for your encouragement about resting, I decide to trudge instead, with insipid updates, 😆 😆 😆 and finish the fiction soon) - appreciate all your feedback and encouragement. Also I thank my PMers, Bhavna, Doc, Ras, Kay and 'H'...

Looks like AD is a cameo, I don't really have much use for him in this fiction...I might bring him bck for some fun stuff if I feel like it later. AD is a cool guy...hopefully before they make him into a pia....

Lots of love guys...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena, awesome update! I've been loving the updates and look forward to the next one.

This is by far one of my favorite ffs and I'm so happy that they both have sorted out their differences and have declared their love for each other.

Rohan and Reya are so cute.

Rohan is so funny. Kya zamana a gaya hai lol!

Update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Anam

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