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Shree

@Shreerama

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#441

Di,

I think you are losing interest in this FF...please don't, would like you to revert to your old style of writing!! 😭

I still thought it was interesting, but somehow don't think you cared for JW and BW anymore, what happened to RR or PP? Nothing in the last 3 chapters...sorry, I am on your case!

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Shree

@Shreerama

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#442

Di, sorry! I forgot to say thanks for the dedication!

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#443

great part sheena and dear what about photoshoot at both places 😉 that way we will be able to have 2 entirely different experiences.
just loved the part and i am happy that even JW has realized bani's love for him and he said those lines about their love and now that shows his trust in bani, but i am confused that why he got that trust back only after meeting vish and AD 😡

hope AD won't trouble love birds anymore. please continue soon

swati

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#444

Hi Sheena, u updated!!! 😃 Italy for me!!!!
Liked Vicky/Vishy's special appearance...J being all jealous - poor guy, feeling let down by his own family ...
Will be back after adding AD's net worth on a calculator - too many 0s to do in my head... 😆 at least net worth of the physical trappings on him...
👏 👏 👏

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divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#445

Pity Vicky/Vishy didn't bop him one, would have knocked a little bit more sense into JW. Well she has three warriors now to protect her.

After watching yesterday's episode, he is "apar ahankar", as he said to Bani watch and see whose hands are full and whose are empty.

Definitely a better treatment of AD in your ff than on KS.
Got the clothes right too, AD is dressed smartly and JW's clothes look so ill fitting on him in KS.

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#446

Loved Jealous Jai! And his speech about fighting gor Bani was so cute.. he's not a quitter like in KS!!! and the whole 'A' thing he had going on!! too good!!😆😆

And AD was a walking talking expensive shop!! 😆 😆

Vicky/Vishy .. glad they cleared up the brother thing otherwise... 😕 😕 😆

Um.. Costa Rica for me! 😉

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#447

Hi Shoba!😊

Awesome part. Glad to see JW's jealousy avatar. Loved the Jai's meeting with his hyderabadi bhais who are now his BILs🤣🤣. Liked how they gave him left, right and centre. I don't want to say about his meeting with Adbhoot as I was unable to find his "A" words into my dictionary, wasn't it adbhoot? and unfortunately my calculators decided not to give me any support so I failed to calculate the total costs of his Italian stuffs as well😉. But I swear if he would go to any Third-World country dressing like this bhagwan bhi usse bacha nehi payega loot hone se😉.

Missed RanRan part. I am for Italy dear as I visited several European countries but Italy. Now I would like to see Italy (Gondola....) through your eyes😛😉. Please continue soon.

👏

P.S.: Loved Roosevelt's qoute😊

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scifichick

@scifichick

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#448

SR,

Love this ff. Jai is soo cute when he's jealous. Masi and Dadi were so naughty in the last part discussing the suhaag raat. Wow what a different look at the suhaag raat for them - made me think of my Nani and Aji - no romance 😭 .

Looking forward to the next update.

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#449

Hi all:

I am really sorry about not responding to the comments...life in the fast lane...almost got a speeding ticket... 😕 😕 😕

I will catch up soon...Thanks for your support.

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Rani

@raniv

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#450

Sheena,

Brilliant update, Thanks for dedicating this part to me! 😳 I loved this Jai Walia, no nonsense, upfront with AD - Loved the Apaar Ahankari bit...LOL! That was really funny!

That kiss in the end... 😳 😳 😳

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