Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 46

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sheena how are you wonderful part love this no nonsense jai walia very much as much as i like the romantic city italy i prefer a very colourful adventurous costa rica but the rest is your choice pls cont soon.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey my sweettt billi!!! 🤗 Hope u r doing well!!! Bada fantastic update tha dear 👏 👏 …hyderabadi heros aagye 😳 😳 😳 …V and V aur saath mein Adhoot bhi 😲….yaar isse aana zaroori tha 😕…kya description tha 👏…agar koi bekhaari usse loot le toh chandi hi chandi hai uski 😆

V & V really seemed to wind Jai up about AD and how he is a little obsessive…Jai going over and confronting him….oooh la la!! Loved that dialogue!


"Mr. Dev! I read somewhere that you like the pursuit more than the game. For me Bani is not a game. Bani is my wife. About six years ago, Bani asked me if I am going to fight for my princess, at that time I told her I was not sure. But now, I am ready to pick up that sword to fight for my love. "gala cheer ke rakh doonga!!!" 😆 If you want a duel, you got it! You may be getting into the arena for the laughs and for the mere fight. Don't get me wrong, I love that kind of thing once in while too! But this time, the stakes are too high! I am not going to lose this fight, I trust Bani, I made a mistake six years ago, I paid dearly for it. Now, I believe that she wouldn't have married me again, if she didn't feel something for me. Besides we have a family, she belongs with me and Reya now!" Jai's eyes clashed with Aparajit's challengingly.

Taaliyaaaaaaan!!! 👏 Ab zara aisa dialogue KS mein bhi maardo taaki hum sab zor se taaliyan bajaye! 😆 😆

Masi getting the two to pose for the press waale…aawwww…wants the whole world to know she has a bahu finalllyyy…but seemed JB were too busy eye locking…aye hai!!! 😳
Jai then had to take her outside to get well her all to himself 😉 😉

I think Jai doesn't have to worry about the suhaag raat not happening now😉…Bani seems all for it😆…bahut jaldi maaf kardiya Jai ko…for sharing all that stuff with Masi! 😆 Though I must say it must have been due to the jealousy both were feeling being around certain people…unse door bhaag kar garden mein romance karne chale gaye!

For the last part u asked Italy or costa rica hailaaaa Italy any day….Venice wenice hojaye 😉…been there and its Ohhhhh..😍 👍🏼

Fabulous part👏 …looking forward to the next! 😉

Tazoo!
Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234

yaar isse aana zaroori tha 😕…kya description tha 👏…agar koi bekhaari usse loot le toh chandi hi chandi hai uski 😆

Eggjactly I just wanted to say the same for this "A" of yours Shoba🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hello Jiggles babe, Ag06 (ananya), Pooks, The most beautiful winter blossom (You know who you are!! for commenting thrice 😆 ), Shree, Vaish, Taz (glad you liked the A words and Jai's declaration of love!!) , Sammy whammy, scifichick, btkr(Bina), divan, Shiya, sweet sherni swati, janu_2006, and Tanu:

Thank you all - appreciate your feedback and comments.

I apologize for writing less than wholesome updates lately - I am just mad at myself, I am having low creativity days, got to go and get some vaccines for it!! 😡 😡

THere are so many people who are always encouraging me to write, and writing always used to be a spontaneous and fun thing for me so I never had to think much or hesitate much before writing. Lately, it has become a chore (just last couple of weeks) and this is probably just a phase I am going through. My apologies to all of my readers.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hello Jiggles babe, Ag06 (ananya), Pooks, The most beautiful winter blossom (You know who you are!! for commenting thrice 😆 ), Shree, Vaish, Taz (glad you liked the A words and Jai's declaration of love!!) , Sammy whammy, scifichick, btkr(Bina), divan, Shiya, sweet sherni swati, janu_2006, and Tanu:

Thank you all - appreciate your feedback and comments.

I apologize for writing less than wholesome updates lately - I am just mad at myself, I am having low creativity days, got to go and get some vaccines for it!! 😡 😡

THere are so many people who are always encouraging me to write, and writing always used to be a spontaneous and fun thing for me so I never had to think much or hesitate much before writing. Lately, it has become a chore (just last couple of weeks) and this is probably just a phase I am going through. My apologies to all of my readers.



I think you need to pamper yourself. Forget about writing for couple of days and go and do something fun.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks Sheen for such a lovely part. Rather I should say the last two updates are so great.

Its a wonder how you have weaved the existing KS characters with new ones, and yet everything moves so flawlessly. Hats off to you 👏 👏 👏

Waiting for the next update, I m sure its definitely going to be something worth remembering and sweet at the same time. 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Shoba,

Enjoyed reading the part. Liked the adjectives used for AD 👏 👏 .
I am suprised that AD gave up so easily.
It would have been fun to see Jai and AD fight for Bani.
I guess we get to see fireworks in the next part.


Kiran




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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Shoba,

Enjoyed reading the part. Liked the adjectives used for AD 👏 👏 .
I am suprised that AD gave up so easily.
It would have been fun to see Jai and AD fight for Bani.
I guess we get to see fireworks in the next part.


Kiran




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Posted: 18 years ago
Amazing part Sheena Di... Loved the last 3 paragraphs, the kiss... Bani responded 😳 😳 😳
I so prefer Italy to Costa Rica 😳

(Sorry for such a poor comment, I'm in a hurry.)
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Part Sheena,
so i see you made AD a little better but his A vocabs are still in tact...lolz! love it how JW added a new word to his A theme. lolz!
as for Bani's and Jai's bro. im surprised there but i guess u had to show something there.
now for JW saying those things to Bani and AD...im not sure what exactly he meant by those. does it mean that the ghalat fehmis are parting between JB and Jai is beginning to trust Bani now? i hope so...
plz continue soon
rooj

PS: i hate you for stopping there 😆

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