Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 49

"Uncle Vishesh told us, if people are not shy sucking faces outside, then we shouldn't be shy seeing them doing it" Rohan giggled and got an elbow in his stomach from his cousin drawing an "ouch" from him.

HAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHHA 🤣
hhahahahahah man ...see di...it was sooo funny i even clicked the "more..." for u!!! ahhaahahahahahahahah ....man..those buggers are how old exactly? FIVE..hahahahahahahahah...hilarious...simply superb!

what a way to end the mini-romance between those lovebirds.... haahahahahahahahahahahahahha i could've peed myself with laughter after anu informed JB about their sight seers!!!! ahahahahahahahaha

EXCELLENT update jaanu...oh and also..last update was hilarious as well!! i mean...AD wasnt feeling garmi in alllll that damn clothes?!!!! ahaahahhhahaa..what the hell..and poooor jai..such a green eyes monster! LOL hahaahhahaha i love those hyderbadi bhais!!! ahahahahahah

i totalllyy enjoyed these last few parts!! ahahahahha 😆

really rocking updates sheena di!!! honestly amazing...
now.....UPDATE SOON!!! ahahahahaha

Love,
Tiff

😆

those kids r soo cute..n uncle vikesh is doing a gr8 job 😆

i feel like no 1 wants to continue their FFs these days
😕

thanx for the update 😃

Originally posted by: Hkaurk22

OOOOOOOOOOOOH nice update!! Dont worry I never thought it was insipid! I know KS is at a down right now, but ur FF is so good that it doesnt matter!! Transports us into a whole new (and better!) world!!

Please post next part soon! Cant wait!

Thanks Harvs, you are very sweet!!

Di,

Excellent parts, This Rohan kid is really cute, Reya is all prim and proper verus he says anything! And the declaration of love finally came. Great job!

Sheena..tumne dil khush kar diya with this update. 🤗 I have always been very critical of Jai's behaviour and wanted Bani to teach him a lesson or two. When I saw Jai confessing his weaknesses and apologizing for his past behaviour and professing his love for her, I was elated. His simple and honest words to Bani like "I want to say that I am sorry for forcing you to marry me the first time and again now, for not realizing that I fell in love with you that first time I saw you as a young woman; I want to apologize for letting you go, letting you believe that I distrusted you, for not being there when our daughter was born, for missing out on her childhood, for making you suffer with my pigheadedness. I was always an egotistic man, born with a silver spoon, everything I wanted in my reach, but today you made me realize how poor I would have been, if I let you go; if I didn't tell you 'I love you' was simply mind blowing. 👏

As for Anu and Rohit..they are sweet kebab mein haddi's. But what really topped this part was what Rohan told his Mausaji "Uncle Vishesh told us, if people are not shy sucking faces outside, then we shouldn't be shy seeing them doing it" 🤣

LOL, Pooks!

(As for Anu and Rohit..they are sweet kebab mein haddi's. But what really topped this part was what Rohan told his Mausaji "Uncle Vishesh told us, if people are not shy sucking faces outside, then we shouldn't be shy seeing them doing it" )

Glad you enjoyed it, that was an inspiration from a recent play I saw (sucking faces is the word they use for kissing...so can't say it's all original) 🤣

sooo not fair
i couldn't be first because of MOTW 😕
and now ihave to read this kal 😕

Awesome work... 👏 Wow...They expressed their feelings very well especially Jai... 😃
OMG, as every one of your readers are saying...The Rohan part was absolutely hilarious....🤣🤣
Very well done... 😆 👏 Can't wait for tomorrow... 😉
😛

dear billi just read last 2 parts, really loved them and kya baat hai ur JW was in challenging mood 😉 really ur JW is great and bani too both are really reserved and preserved for each other and not like real KS 😉

ur AD also seems to be somewhat different and good he is not suffering from OCD 😆

ur JW and BW are really too much, starts anywhere even in garden and both kids are too cute and their dialouge was really something and i want JW to take class of vishy for sure 😆 😆 😆

please continue soon

swati

Sheena

Thank God the duffers finally said that they love each other and were destined to be each other. 😃

Like this new Bani, very smart and bold. 😉 She's definitely going to keep Jai busy (no puns intended). 😆 😆 😆

BTW, Uncle Vishy is too much. AM ROFL hearing his insane dialogue to kids. Imagine JnB's embarassment. 😳 😳 😳

Great part, hope you update soon. I would have had you update everyday, if it was in my power. 😆