Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 34

Finally the family is showing signs of coming together as a unit. Loved the shy bonding between father-daughter. Also felt the pangs of the brother sister separation, but then Jigz needs to be ostracized for a while to understand and introspect on the total selfishness of her actions.
Somali

hey Takraal Billi 2, that was awesome.. 👏 👏 👏

Jigs is being herself..She still thinks that her going out of WM is because of Bani n Rano. She has not realized her mistakes one bit! This lady can never change!

Jai is really feeling helpless. He is so much hurt n is in pain. Bani feels very bad for him and it was really wise of her to ask forgiveness from him.

Hope they try to build the gap between them soon. Jai is being very sweet in giving her ample space. Thats very thoughtful.

Finally Reya called him "PAPA"...Wow.. can visualise his happy shocked face..The whole scene of father and daughter duo was just lovable..Reya is slowly getting comfortable with him..

Glad to have u back billi... 🤗 🤗

Rama

great update sheena........glad to see you back in the groove, chin up and raring to go.

felt really bad for jw, it's not easy to break bonds with your siblings, but jiggy, well, she totally deserved it. hopefully she will come around. liked the way he told bani not to feel guilty about what happened............that's my man.

jw/masi talk, very heart warming, and am sure masi and dadi will hatch some plan to ensure munna has his suhaag raat 😆

reya.......well papa ki beti hain na, aakhir main apni maa ki tarah, she too couldn't resist the hunk. papa keh hi diya 😛

ab aage......and hopefully soon.

Aww Sheena that was so sweet! She called him papa..Im glad to see that even after all those years he loves Bani that much.. and I feel like Bani is slowly melting her icy heart towards Jai- I think Reya will be a big help in that.. :) Continue soon!

Hi Shoba! 😊

Thanks for updating such a wonderful part. Enjoyed every bit of its but felt little bit sad for Jigs. I think it's nothing more than that. Glad to see that she left WM and hope she would learn in time what a family is and how to good take care of family relationships. Loved the part between Jai and Reya. What a wonderful father-daughter duo. The dialogue of the day is "Mamma, I chose Papa's clothes today, aren't they nice?"" and how Jai felt afterward beautifully portrayed. Hope Bani is going to melt again in front of Jai's love and charm soon. Waiting for more to feel. 😉 Please update soon. 😆

P.S.: Loved the poems. Both are beautiful 😊

I simply loved the Jai and Reya part. It's about time that Jai was showered with love. Daughter has come around, mother can't be too far behind.

Post the next part soooooooooooooooooon........

a wonderful part sheena loved it specially jai and reya part and then her calling him papa for the first time had brought the silent tear from my eyes could feel every emotion being displayed in that part
btw the poetry is on pg41 was wonderful i made a copy of it
pls cont soon...........

Sheena,

Loved the poems on Page 41 and Page 42...Very apt in both cases.
Another excellent update, Felt bad for both the brother and sister. Even though Jigs brought this entirely on herself.

She needs to do some reflection on how she affected the families.

WOndered where Adi was and why he didn't say anything to her.

Reya and Jai were cute papa and beti...Loved the emotions, Jai in the exercise room... 😳

Hi Sheena,

Great update. I loved Jai's inner battle regarding Jigyasa and our Bani as usual can never see anyone's pain, especially Jai's.

Also loved the way Reya so casually mentioned Jai as her papa......definately a day for a party.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

Okie first; your dabba's full auntieji - clear it out!😆

Update:

Aaii; good old Jigyasa.....she's leabing the house but still blames Bani and Rano for her fate!

Lol - will this lady ever change?😆

Loved the emotions protrayed by Jai!.....but of course; he can never feel to upset to tease Bani!😉

Reya-Jai bonding as well as the small Mausi-Jai scene was absaloutely sweet!

(I know my comments suck......but kya karu; there's pizza right beside me and I can either eat or type....typing loses!😆)