Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 35

Sheena, Wonderul update.... Good Jigs is out... she deserve that.. 👏 👏 👏

I just wanted to clarify that Maasi knows about the circumstances of Jai and Bani's marriage because Jai talks to her from Bangalore, it wasn't explicitly written in the story, but suffices to say, Maasi knows that bani is still in odds with Jai-boy....

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Thank You

Note: Feel free to untie the string, to break walls, to walk out of the molds, to burst out of the boxes when you feel something is wrong...Don't always take some one else's word.

Rules are made by society - but they are all context sensitive, there is a time and place for everything.. One rule for three year old can not be imposed on a kid of twenty three....

Hey Sheena dear...just managed to open ur thread...had problems earlier today😕...bit to catch up i see but i had to comment on this bit. Every bit u wrote on page 41 is absolutely right...i especially liked the lines above ...👏👏👏 and the poem by Graves was really good too!👏
Readers really respect u as a writer Sheenu...thats why we all came out for u...i couldn't see this forum lose a great writer like u now could I.
Keep up the good work dear.... 🤗

Will be back later with my comments for the update!😃
Tazoo!

An excellent update. 👏 👏 👏

The interaction between Jai and Mausi and then Jai and Reya was very touching. 😊

Maybe now Jigyasa will realise how much harm her actions had caused to everybody, including her near and dear ones. 😕

HII SHEENA!! omg that was really really good! thankyou! i thought that was sooo sweet how reya called jai papa and chose his clothes! 😳 that was adorable!

im glad u listened to the people and continued ur ff, even though we had some rude interruptions.. cough.. cough.. 😡

o well! let bygones be bygones! and lets read some more fantastic stories!

-minal 😊

Haaa!! i'm heeerree! lolz

Okay firstly... jigyasa...i dunno...she's sooooo....ufff.... i cant help but feel bad for her.. but she doesnt deserve the sympathies until she learns to accept people without any inhibitions! Uff... good.. some separation from her usual lifestyle will so her some good!! sheesh...i really dont understand women like her... and it's sooo sad that a lot of women out there ARE!! 😭 anyways..enough on jiggu--that's a waste of my typing skills!! ahhaahahah

Jaii---pooooorrr munnaaa!!! i know how he feels...i would've probably done& felt the same in his place! 😭 but at least he knows he did it all for the best, for his first priority- his wife and child.
so yay jai! he gets two thumbs up from me (now mind u sheena di...it takes writers a LOT to get me to like their Munna's...so ahhaha for him to get two thumbs up from me- know you did something right! 😆 )

and then...Reya...aww...that darling..ex-visit! hahahaah sounds like german-english! lolz hahaahah and i agree with Jai...soo much influences of Pia Mausi... bechari kiddo! hahahahaahhaah kidding... but...i was so happy when she called him Papa...like..naturally-- she's sooo sweet...again...i really felt for munna in this update... he has gone through a lot of emotional stuff today...and i'm glad it at least ended with his daughter calling him papa willfully! *yay*
noww...for Bunny...--(haha just remmebered massi's ramblings here! ahahahahhaha) welll hope she doesnt need forever! hmm...hahahahah then again knowing Bani..and Jai.. hahaha they wouldnt need that much time! hhahahaha

really emotional update Di...i enjoyed it a lot...like everything else...and really looking forward to the next update! 😆


take care,
Tiff

Hey Sheena Di,

that was just fabalous,superb update.totally loved it.you have described Jigyasa emotions so well,very well written.interaction between Jai and Mausi and Jai and Reya was just so touching.she called him Papa,its just brought tear in my eyes.beautiful update.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

update... 😃

she called her papa 😃
finally
massi was abt to give a detail explanation abt wht she did on her wedding night 😆

i feel sorry for jigs nw..... nt a single kid went with her
nw she is alone
cn u bring her bck when she become good???

Great part Sheena, very well written especially the last line where Jai finally gets to hear "papa" very touching 😳 please continue soon!