Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 25

Sheena, u have outdone yourself this time. Fan-tastic.

Jigyasa's curiosity intensified and she went behind Maasi's wholesome girth to peer over her shoulder. 🤣 Sheena, how the heck do you make a big waist sound good? Now I know what to tell hubby if he teases me about extra pounds- I will say it is wholesome, like cereal, good for u...

Jigs thoughts & fears, Bani's & Reya's nervousness and Jai's silent caring encouragement, Adi's joy on picking up his grandson all beautifully portrayed.

And Sheena, we can see the effort u must be making in connecting all the updates so the story flows along smoothly - Jai looking menacingly at the pundit about the safety and sanctity of his marriage this time and then emptying his wallet in relief and gratitude...the little touches make your characters so human and your story line very complete - bra-vo!

Jai's and Ranveer's dialogs with Jigs were truly a masterpiece - very classy, maybve my fave of the story (most parts seem that way!!! another fave is the morning after the consummation scene in Hyderabad, with Bani's nervous shyness and J making her feel secure with his strength and tenderness )

I could go on and on - but will stop 😆

👏

Sheena Di,

I have no words to describe this,seriously that was just mindblowing.finally Bani and Rano got what they really deserved,the reunion was just beautiful.the pundit's words,hope they are true this time as well.what Jai did to u Jigs is very small pain compared to what all of them have suffered,simply superb.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

Sheena dear...that update was mindblowing from start to finish!!! 👏 👏 👏 My eyes were like glued to the screen...was really waiting for the moment Jai let it out on Jigyaasa.

Boy did she get a jhatka of a life to see Jai and Ranveer both with their wives and children. 😃 😃 Reya and Rohan seemed very nervy...i would be if i would be going into a mad house. 😆 Actually that part reminded me of my first trip to India...i was around 4ish...but remember clearly the moment we arrived at my dads home there...i was attacked!!! 😆 Aunties, uncles, toot pare mujhe par 🤢 🤢 ...pulling my cheeks!!! 😕 Eeeekkksss...horrible!!! 😆

I really felt like thumping Jigs for snubbing her grandchild like that 😡 😡 😡 ... poor Rohan 😭 ...made an effort and that cute face wasn't even enough to melt that women. Disgusting... aaja mera rohan...come to Tazooo...u don't wanna be around Jigs.

The scene between Jai and Jigs was mindblowing!!!! 👏 👏 👏 He really gave it to her...was calm but angry too!! But that scene between Ranveer and Jigs..well that was just too good..all the feelings and emotions captured beautifully. 👏 👏 👏 That finally broke Jigyasa it seems.

Can't wait for the next part now...how the kids adjust to their new house. 😊

Too good my sweet billi...lagi raho!!! 👏 👏 👏

Tazoo. 🤗
btw i updated my ff on Wed...seems many hadn't noticed!!! Haan haan jaldi kar diya tha!! 😆

Great part Sheena, sorry haven't been commenting for a while now, there was just so much going on that didn't make it to this side of our world too much, nevertehless... loved the last few parts, especially the last one atlast Jigs got what she deserved, a very touching part indeed the way Ranveer questioned her huggeded her telling her that he needs to be away from her for a long time very well penned down! Please continue soon! 👏 👏 👏

Aaai Sheenu.......did you have to make Jigyasa cry?

Man; I feel sorry for her!

The reasons for right; the methods - a big no-no!

Though I was expecting more of a punishment......I guess that's how Jai is - straight to the point....

Wonderfully written; loved the hasty marriage and the welcome!

😆 😆 Loved Rohan's 'I want a tikka like my dad' .. so cute! 😳

Jigyasa deserves it, the last bit was so sad Ranveer saying all those things to her! maybe she'll realise her mistake now...

Both the marriages were so cute.. 😳 Jai giving the pandit everything in his wallet?? kabhi hum pay bhi taras khaya karo Mr Walia.. 😆

waiting for the next one!

dekho ji, main aa gayi, haazri dene.......kya karoo, main aisi hi hoon 😆 as in chweet, cute, lovable, huggable, dependable etc etc etc 😆

this song is dedicated to ur update..........

Jiska mujhe tha intezaar
Jiske liye dil tha beqaraar
Voh update aa gayi, aa gayi
Aaj pyaar mein hadh se guzar jaana hai
Maar dena hai jiggu ko ya mar jaana hai

JB aur RR pe joh guzri tu kya jaane
Tu kya samjhe, oh kameeni 😆
Lete rahoongi badla tujhse
Aayi hoon dil ki aag bujhaane

Oh kaatil meri nazron se bachke kahan jaayegi
Diya hai jo mujhko, vahi tu mujhse paayegi
Voh ghadi aa gayi, aa gayi
Teer banke jigar mein utar jaana hai
Maar dena hai tujhko ya mar jaana hai

wah wah wah..........saby tera jawaab nahin. 😆 thankoo thankoo thankoo

ok enuf masti now, actually blame it on all the daroo i have been having since morning 😆 anyways, ekdum jhakas update tha, bole toh, too mucking fuch 😆

but ur pota is a bit upset..........he said gunda gunda jiggy, no hug rohan 😡 😡 and u let her off too easily.

but apart from that, the welcome the girls and the bachas received from masi, adi, anu and the rest of the walia household was very heart warming.

loved the way jai handled reya and bani, that's my man, the applying of sindoor was a nice touch and rohan, well he is just too cute and i love the relationship he and ranveer share. them getting married in the house temple and jai asking the pandit if this time its complete......very chweet.

and finally him taking the keys from that kameeni and ranveer showing her his back too..........all worth the wait. 👏 👏

acha toh hum chalte hain...........phir kab milenge, pata nahin am off to delhi first and then mumbai, udhar no computer 🤢 toh sayonara and see u in sept. take care and don't miss me too much.

k jigs is nt going to go like this..right??
she wil take revenge right?? she is like tht 😡

thanx for this part 😊