Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 26

Hey Takral billi, that was a dhamakedar part!!! 👏 👏 👏

Loved the whole plot. The whole welcoming of bahus n the pota-poti was beautiful. The love n blessings showered on all was heart warming.
Jai handled the situation very well. The moral support given by him to bani n Reya was cute.
Rohan is really adorable. The relationship between Ranveer and Rohan is WOW!!..The Tom n Jerry explanation by Ranveer to Rohan was really sweet!! But really felt bad for him when Jigs turned her face off him..Thats really cruel!! 😡 😡
But she has still not learnt her lesson. She has been turned down by her son as well..Now she is ALL ALONE!!!

Beautiful part again... 👏 👏 👏

Rama

Sheena..you deserve a medal for bringing that Horrid Jigayasa down on her knees, literally. The Bitch did not have any regrets even after hearing her brother talk to her and list down the things she did. 😡 I mean Jai was still Gentlemanly enough to give her a separate house and a fixed income. She does not even deserve a single penny. 😡 😡 😡

And the worst was when her cute grandson came to hug her, she even rebuffed him...chi...yeh kaisi aurat hai.

I am sooo happy that she has been told to clear off finally and I hope her children also have the sense to not ask their Mamu in the long-run to get her back🤢

i felt sorry for jigyasa and i don't lyk dat!!!!!!! loved the way jai asked if this was the final union and gave all his money to the pandit!so now its time to see ranveer wooing his wife- reya and rohan are too good for words!

Sheena di,

I want to tell you how much I like your story...Honestly, you have a lot of class, the way you meted out the punishment, it wasn't cheezy, it was like any sophisticated and loving brother or son would do, they still love her, they are disappointed in her but they don't want to be around her.

Reminds me the "I am so disappointed in you, young lady, but we still love you" lecture from my parents... 😆

I look forward to JB and RR romance in the next part...

Love,
Vaish

Sheena...that was mind blowing...infact one of the best chapters of this story so far! 👏

Everything...from the welcoming...to the weddings...to Jigs gettin what she deserved....it was all spot on!

The emotions and situations that you created just felt so real....and the way you portrayed the kids in this chapter was fantastic!

By the way now that Jai and Bani got married again...does that mean we get to treated to another suhaag raat in the near future????? 😉

But seriously, im sure whatever you have planned for the next chapter is going to be awesome cos ur an aweswome writer! 😃

So well done for this chapter...and looking forward to the next!

Until next time...Take care...
Jesse x.

gr8 part 👏
JB n ranran got marrie wow...
cont soon

I see people have been calling you billi...why?? Do you have any cats as pets? 😕 😕 I hope you are not going to be like Thakral...sanki old cat woman!! OK, don't kill me!! 😆 😆 😆

The update was A+, isn't that what your English lit teacher used to say all the time?

Anyway, I am totally looking forward to the JB and RR romance and W('B')edding arrangements... 😉 😉 Better make it good!

Waiting for your Sunday update, if you don't, you know what will happen... 😡 😡 😡

Don't take long time to posts the next part

wonderful part sheena as much as i do not like what jigs did a part of me still feels for her maybe because whatever she did at that time it was due to mothers love for her child she had seen how hard it was for her when she had ranveer and then sahil and anu followed even her marriage to adi which was due to her becoming preg had also failed she did not want the same for her son and there is no harm in thinking best for one's child and as far as jai was concerned as much as she detest him she also loved him dearly she wanted best for her brother too she genienly thought that bani would not fit in to their society norms and jai and their walia family might have to face a lot of shame well its also the part of the way she was brought up her parents always liked jai above her and after they passed away masi also favoured jai when she tried looking for that love and understanding from adi he with his mother always ridiculed her and hence she tried to fit herself into the society and hence drifted of from all the other family i would also like to blame rano too why cant she personally contact ranveer instead go via via and i believe ranveer had asked her but instead of answering she ranaway without telling him the truth and as for jai and bani i would only say that they should have been more open in their communication when there is love there is no room for any doubts or misunderstandings but i guess their love was not strong enough at the time both had their egos and selfrespect to deal with and even now i see that there is still a lot of gap to be filled jai has already taken first step to close that gap but now its bani's turn lets see what happens there oh i said enough i dont even know what i m blaberring about must be the medication pls cont soon.....