FF: Better Half chap35, p60, 16/06

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#81

aysha, great part dear, both duffers are tit for tat, let's see who wins in this game.

please continue soon

swati

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#82

Awesome part.
loved it.
bhagu yeh kya ho raha hai.....these two can play games all they want...will see where this games will lead them...hmmmm love maybe 😉 😆
plz cont. soon.

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wajihah

@angelrockz

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#83

👏 wooooooooow grt part. 👏 ................jai got bani lol.........cant wait for the next update.... 😃 .........i get excited every time when i read your FF 😆 ...........continue soon 😊

angelr ockz 😛

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#84

😆
kitna florting karte haiyeh dono
khel khel mein pyar hojayega 😆

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#85

Wah wah wah kya baat hai ji, tusi tah shaakke hi udhate 👏 BPatake ki toh bolti hi band kardi Jai ne aur baag bhi gahi waha se??!!! 😳 hey pinch me 😵 😵 really that happened?? The song in that situation was thinking, was Judoo hai nasha hai(referring to their eyelock) 😳

I hope Bani, humara Pataka, kuch masaledar khel khele 😉 😉, kiu Aysha?? And I think, ignore Jai, must be difficult😆

continue soon 😃 😃 😃

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#86

Haila...yeh kya hua?? PATAKA ka barah baj gaya??? 😉
Jai ka jaadoo aakhir Bani pe bhi chal gaya??? Bani Rani tho uskey aankhon mein ghum ho gayi 😳 😳 😳
JW has got his courage back now...He has got his touch back n now he is going to torture her for sure as he has seen her reaction to his touch!
PATAKA phuss ho gaya!!!

Nice update dear...pls continue soon..Also I want my PATAKA to keep up her dheeraj(which I think is a bit difficult after she has gone thro the tremendous torture of his touch 😉 😉 )

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#87

wonderful update... enjoyed it.. 👏 👏

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Aysha

@patooki

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#88

Thank you for all the lovely comments🤗 these worth alot to me😊

i would like to request to my silent readers also to comment. please do comment good or bad, if you think i am not doing good enough please do let me know but dont keep quiet. just post one word but please do comment. comments are the biggest strength for the writers.

now i have question for all my readers.

Do you all want me to keep jai and bani fighting like this?

dont afraid if you choose this option their wont be any romance or any lovey dovey scene or their story wont move, dont think like that because i do have plans for them if they still stay in the same relation😉

Do you all want me to improve their relationship, proceed to frienship?

Do reply back and any suggestions are welcome😊

Aysha xxx

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Momtaj

@momtajbegum1

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#89

Hey Aysha

i would like them to stop fighting and proceed into friendship and maybe something else later 😉
ur doing a great job so far 😆

Taj

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#90

Hey Ayesha,
I would like more PATAKAS 😆 😆 ..Basically I think its too early for them to become friends as they are still thinking about revenge only. Both are definitely attracted 2 each other..but some more spice to it will be more majedaar 😉 😉
So fights like this will be really interesting..

Anyway which ever option u choose, it will be definitely good as u r doing a real gr8 job!

Rama

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