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Posted: 18 years ago
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***************CHAP8***************

Bani and her friends were stading almost in a circle, ALL friends were waiting for her to say something but she was quiet.

Bani lifted her head up, looked at all her friend who were looking back at her with hopefull eyes.

Bani let out a sigh and...

Bani: ok fine, i will go back in and appologise for my behaviour.

Happy now?

Everyone repied back... "Damn Happy"

Rahul: we know you would definately listen to us. (he hugged her and smiled)

Bani smiled back weakily.

Rakhi: Thank you Bani darling, you know you hardly listen to any one

Anjali: bani is a short tempered but not stupid. and she knows we want her best. (crossed her arm around bani's shoulder)

Sanju: (smiling) shall we go back in???

Bani shrugged her shoulders, gave everyone a weak smile and turned to go back in.

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Dadi, jigs, Krishna, Uday and Adi decided to leave the kids alone to enjoy on their own.

As they were about to get out of the restaurant Uday met his friend,

Dadi, Jigs and Krishna decided to go with the driver and uday and Adi can come back later in other car.

Jai, Pushkar, Tarun, Raj, Rahul, Pia, Rano, Raashi and Ranveer headed towards disco to have some fun.

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Bani headed towards the door of the restaurant with her friends following her. she saw Uday and Adi exiting from the door. (bani or he friends did not noticed Krishna, Jigs, Dadi leaving).

Bani: Excuse me Mr. Walia

Uday was discussing something with Adi, as he heard a soft and gentle voice calling him he looked towards the direction where the voice came from so as Adi (they dint know who has been called actually, both are walia lol), they noticed bani.

Uday flashed a smile on his face.

Uday: ohh Bani, you're still here i thought you guys must have left (looked at her friends who were standing right behind her)

Bani: how could i have left (she turned back and looked at her friends) actually i wanted to talk to you, if you have few minutes?

Adi: (smiled) offcourse bani we have plenty of time to hear you, i dont think we have anything special to do at this time, right Uday bhai?

Uday: right Adi, we were just leaving. you go ahead.

Bani: thnak you , (smiled) well acually i just wanted to apologise for whatever happend back inthe restaurant. (she lowered her eyes as she finished)

(looked up) i am really very sorry for creating a scene, i did not do thatintentially that just happened. (bani made a childish face and lowered her head)

Uday and Adi smiled, they were quite surprised by bani's words. they never expected bai would come and say sorry after seeing whatever happened back in there.

Uday: (he put his hand on bani's head) it's ok bani, we all understand you did not want to do that.

Bani looked up and uday gave her an assuring smile.

Adi: yes bani we are not angry at all.

Bani: thanks, i wanted to say sorry others aswell, are they still there?

Uday and Adi looked at eachother and shared a smile.

Adi: from others if you mean elders then i am sorry they have already left.

Bani: ohhh

Adi: and the youngsters they must have gone to disco, if you want to say sorry to them you can catch them there. (he winked at bani)

Bani: smiled, thanks.

Uday: dont worry about others i'll pass you sorry to them.

you guys should have fun now. seems like your frineds really bored you.

they all smiled. Uday and Adi left after reassuring bani that they have no hard feeling against her.

After they left bani with her friends headed towards Disco.

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Just before Rano could enter the disco, she felt someone hand on her wrist before she could turn back and see who was that, she was pulled back by that person who had held her wrist. within seconds she was leaning against one of the pillars and that person was none other than Ranveer, he was leaning on her, too cloe to her which made her breath hard.

Ranveer's one hand was on the pillar and the other on rano's waist. his touch made rano shiver. it was getting more hard every second for rano to breath, but it was more hard for her to speak. Ranveer was very much aware of her state. but it was pay bak, since she is back from her trip she has not called him and all this evening she has een ingoring him.

As Ranveer went close to her ear and started to caress her waist and her ear with his lips same time Rano was all lost in his touch but she also knew anyone could see them and she had to stop him.

Rano: Ranveer what areyou doing? (almost breathless) someone will come.

Ranveer: you know exactlt what am i doing, and let whoever wants to come (whispered in her ear and kissed her ear lobe)

Rano was all lost in his touch now, she missed him on trip, it was hard for her to live without him and now she was enjoying his touch.

Ranveer move back but did not removed his hands from her waist but now he was holding her with his both hands.

Ranveer: where is my gift?

Rano: (confused) what gift?

Ranveer: ohh so did not bring any gift for me from Goa? (now kind of sad)

Rano: (rested her arm around ranveer's neck) i am sorry i wanted to buy a gift for you but i could not find anything better for u (made a sad face)

Ranveer: he was amused to see her reaction, no problem sweetheart i'll get my gift myself.

Rano was confused what does he mean, before she could say anything her lips were sealed.

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Bani entered the disco with her friends, they looked around to see where jai and his crew was. after sometime Bani located Jai sitting at the bar side, Pia sitting next to him, almost very close to Jai, their legs were touching eachother, Pia held jai's arm. Pushkar was just teasing pia for something. Tarun was on the dance floor with Raashi, Raj and Rohan.

Bani headed towards jai and her gang followed her they wanted to make sure that she talks to him politely.

Tarun saw Bani going towards Jai, he old others and they decided to go and see another encounter. Jai did not notice anyone coming towards him.

Reaching very close to jai, when bani noticed that he is so deeply busy talking to pia and pia is so busy in touching him somehow, first she decided not to disturb them it would be good for her too she wont have to say sorry to this Jerk, but at the second she thought i must disturb them, how could he be so relaxed when im having a hard time just because of him.

she gave a briefe look to jai and pia and flashed an evil smile. before bani could do or say anything Tarun and others came.

Raashi: hey bani,

Hearing Bani's name jai startled and turned his stool to look if she was really there. yes she was there and too close just few feet away from him.

Bani: oh hi

Tarun: we thought you must have left.

Bani: ohh you guys were really thinking about me ( she turned her head back and looked at jai with one eyebrow up and gave a full smile to pia who was still holding jai's arm)

Pushkar: yeah bani offcourse we were thinking that what your friends must have done with you after all that (smirked)

Bani: (bani now fully turned to face jai, pia and pushkar) well in that case i think you musthave known the answer by now.

actually i am here to finish a unfinished job, she looked at pia who was giving her almost a killing look for disturbing her and bani was happy that one task is accomplished.

Raashi: what job bani?

Bani: (looked at raashi) abhi batati hun.

Jai thought now what is she about to do? i think i wont go home in single piece. wow what a killing smile (a smile appeared on his face autimatically and bani did notice tat, that's exactly what bani wantind to see) i am not gonna let her play around with me anymore, enough is enough, if she did anything now then she'll get payback aswell.

Bani looked at jai.

Bani: i need to talk to to jai (she said JAI in very lovingly voice)

Pushakr almost jumped off his stool.

Pushkar: you want to talk to jai?

Bani: (smiled more) yes pushkar you heard it right i want to talk to jai (she did not remove her gaze from jai)

Pia: what do you wana talk to him now? is here something left to damage?

Bani: (almost serious face) yes pia here is something left, now if you excuse me so i can tell what is left. she moved closer and signlaed pia to remvie her arm and give her some space to stand right in the middle of them.

Jai had no idea what was going on.

pia did not let go off his arm.

Bani: (looked at jai) may i???

Jai thought if she wants to play games then let her do what she wants, she must have heard TIT FOR TAT.

Jai: ohh sure (he took pia's hand and freed hs arm)

Bani moved ahead, leaned to bar table now she was standing comfortable between pia and jai. she put her hands back at the bar table and jumped slightly to sit on the table.

she put her one leg on jai's stool seat and moved closer to jai's face putting her elbow on her knee and looked deeply into jai's eyes.

Aysha xxx

Edited by patooki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

yh me first😛

y did u stop there anyways cant wait for the next part.

Edited by babey.gyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
Fab part.
liked it.
Bani listen to her friends....hmmmmm what is she up to now.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
gr8 part 👏
wonder wt is bani upto nw
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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My God Ayesha...is this a place to stop????

What is PATAKA upto?? Jaldi update kar yaar...

Rama
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hey my Pataka is apologizing????!!! Ok apologize to Uday n elders, good 👍🏼 😉 but B what are you going to do to Jai???????????? 😳 something good 😊 or evil 😈

Aysha why did you have to end there yaar, now I'll have to wait for next update 😭 😭 😭

You better update ASAP!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
brilliant part what is Bani upto cant wait for next part pls continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow gr8 ff..cont soon.....juss finished reading all the pages.....nice flow...(wondering wat PATAKA is upto now)...... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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***************CHAP 9***************

Bani moved ahead, leaned to bar table now she was standing comfortable between pia and jai. she put her hands back at the bar table and jumped slightly to sit on the table.

she put her one leg on jai's stool seat and moved closer to jai's face putting her elbow on her knee and looked deeply into jai's eyes.

Jai was not sure what is bani upto now but one thing was sure that another problem is coming in his way. oh yes she is a problem.

jai knew she is problem but still could not resist himself from looking into those deep brown eyes, those twinkling eyes. The time Jai decided to let bani talk, he had some plans for her in his mind but now it seems like these are making hard for him to think anything else but the innocense and purity in those eyes. from bani's eyes his gaze moved to her lips, i was about to kiss those lips but damn she is so fast, thinking this his lips curved into a smile.

The moment Bani looked into his eyes, that was it. she felt herself sinking deeply into those sexy eyes. Bani knew she was here to appologise him but she is not gonna do it so easily, she came to disturb jai but now she was disturbed, she was not able to think at all, she culd not figure out what she should do next, should she go with her plan or just keep looking into those eyes. now i know why no dares to mess with him. koi panga kaise le ankhon mein dekhte khalas. ahhh bani what are you thinking, go with your plan bani, dnt get in his trap.

The gang was confused on the sudden change of situaion, few minutes ago they were ready to kill eachother and now they are just behaving like a couple who is totally in love with eachother, totally oblivious to anyone else. they looked at eachother no one had answer to anyone's question.

Pia was more that irritated, she just wanted to break their eye contacts somehow but how??? this is what she was thinking.

Bani came back n the earth as Rahul's words entered her ears,

Rahul: ohh not another game, she would never change.

(bani's friends thought she is playing some kind of game but only if they knew Bani was trapped into those eyes unwillingly)

Bani was the first one to break the eye contact, she looked up to the people who were asking for an explanation or waiting for her to speak.

Bani: well i was here to say sorry for creating such a big scene back in restaurant.

(bani said all this scratchin her head, it was not easy for her but she had to do it and with the corner of eye she looked at jai to see his reaction)

Hearing the word sorry from Bani's mouth everyone mouth left open but jai was the one who was most shocked, hearing sorry he almost jumped off his stool which made bani loose her control aswell

(remember her foot was on jai's stool seat and her one arm resting on her knee) she put her other hand on jai's shoulder for support to stable herself and made jai sit back.

Bani: will you please sit calmly

(bani said this in soft voice)

Jai: how could i sit calmly, seems like i am imaging things.

(jai shook his head as if it was dream) did you really say sorry? (lift his eyebrow up)

Now bani was loosing her temper, she looked at Rahul, Rakhi and sanju, they all gave her a smile, bani could not believe what her friends wants her more to do. but she made a mental note to make them pay later. right now she needs to concentrate on jai.

Bani: moved her face close to jai's face, looked into his eyes but this time she managed not to lost in those eyes. she traced jai's jaw line with her index finger, so tell me that you forgave me for giving you extra dose.

Raashi: extra dose?

Bani: yeah extra dose, i stomped his both feet. i am not sorry for the left one he deserved that but i am sorry for the right foot i should not have done it 2nd time.

(bani looked at his friends who were giving her "can't believe this"looks but did not remove her hand from jai's shoulder)

Jai: well if you want me to forgive you i have one condition. bolo would you accept my condition?

jai held bani from her waist and stood up from his stool, looked staright into her eyes, Jai decided to go with her own game. she started this dangerous touchy game. this girl have no idea how best i am in this game. jai gave her a devilish smile.

from his smile bani could sense problem. well there are too many people around i dont think he would do anything dangerous to me. should i accept his condition whatever it would.

Jai as if reading her mind decided to not to give her so much time to think.

Jai: well miss bani kapoor, are you scared?

Raj: aray yaar jai, she said sorry i think its enough, ab tu conditions naa laga

Pia who did not know what she should do to stop this touchy game, how could jai do all this right infront of her eyes, she decided to speak now.

Pia: (put her hand on jai's shoulder) come on jai darling let go this matter now, she has accepted her mistake i think she wont dare to mess with you again.

Rahul, sanju, Rakhi also decided to speak, they also asked jai to let go now. Pushkar knew there is no point of talking because nothing can stop jai now.

Jai: no, she has to agree my condition.

Bani was very much irritated now, she decided to listen to him but would make him pay later. now its bani's majboori to listen to him just because of her stupid friend but obviusly she would settle account with them later on.

Bani: ok what is the condition?

Jai: (smiled) you have to dance with me.

Everyone let out a sigh of relief and smiled, it's just a dance.

Raakhi: ohh bani can do that happily. come on guys lets go and dance we have wasted enough time standing here.

Bani: ohh bad luck Mr jai walia, my foot is badly hurt and thanks to you for that, i wont be able to dance.

(Bani gave a victorious smile)

Tarun: now what jai? she cant dance

Jai: i am not gonna forgive her then.

Bani frustrated: nai tou naa sahi. (she moved her face to see around)

Everyone started to move towards dance floor , They knew both jai and bani are not going to stop this tom and jerry game, Ranveer and Rano were also standing there, they have witnessed the whole scene. all they could do is just shook their head. how childish they are.

Pushkar: bad luck jai, PATAKA is not ready for dance,

(saying this Pushkar just ran towards the dance floor, he did not want to answer about Pataka thing)

Bani: eyebrow up, PATAKA? looked at jai

Jai: started to grin, well after the airport fiasco Pushkar gave you this PATAKA name.

Bani decided to not to talk about this Pataka, she liked this name, but if jai would have given this then she would have argued about this.

Bani: now you can go on the dance floor and take your hands off my waist.

Bani tried to remove his arm from her waist but no use, jai is much stronger than her. Jai was amused seeing her strugling. this jungli bili is in his control now. when bani got tired of trying, Jai decided to let go, he could hear his friends calling him on the dance floor.

Jai put his hand under Bani's top. Bani stiffed by his touch on her bare waist. she looked direct into his eyes with horror at her face. she hel Bar table tightly. A shiver ran through her body, she was not able to think or move at all. she was totally frozen at the spot.

Jai could sense her situation and was happy from the results. He caressed her bare waist and started to turn tracing her waist with his hand from one end to the other, 😳Bani held her breath, her eyes popped out, she looked at where his hand was and then back to his face who was flashing a mischeviouse and victorious smile.

Jai winked at her and moved to the dance floor happily. He was happy that he managed to win this game.

Bani sat at the same position for next 10 minutes, she had a cold ice water to get her senses back to normal.

everyone enjoyed the rest of the night. Bani left early with anjali and her husband harsh. you know why she left early. her mind was not working properly.

Jai was over the moon because he won from Bani, was it a big deal? yes offocurse this girl has been giving him hard time and everyone said that he is loosing his charm and that girl think i am a looser so offocurse it was a big deal to prove himself and show her that Jai Walia never loose anything.

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Both jai and bani thought about each over the night. Bani was getting mad why is she thinking about that jerk? Jai was happy for his victory but he had admit that he enjoyed touching her, her soft skin. jai could not resist himself from touching her. jai thought if her statement is right, does she have an affect on me? Bani thought the same, this was the first time she ever felt shivers running through her body. It was not like if she's been touched first time by any boy. then what made her feel shivers and froze on the spot. why was she lost in his eyes. bani you have to ignore him. he thinks he can have any girl he wants but i am not gonna let this happen to me. i am not let him play all those nasty games with me.

Bani put his thoughts behind and decided to count sheep, Jai went to sleep thinking now he would make her pay back in double. he is not going to ingore her stupidity, if she wants to play around then i am happily ready for that afterall it's the question of Jai Walia's prestige.😎

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🤗 Enjoy 🤗

Aysha xxx

Edited by patooki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😉😆first

hey baghwan ye donon bhi na....

jai being naughty.. hope ye nauthinyness of both lead to their wedding..😉

pls continue soon.
davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago

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