Bas Ek Pal Note pg.61 [08/09]

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Mariam

@Dazzling Diva

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Posted: 18 years ago

#41

awesome story hun 👏 👏 ....have a feelin this one is gonna be GOOODDDD...update soonnn 😛

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Pooja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#42

Jai listen to your father!!!
By the way that was a fantastic update 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

#43

gr8 ff like always, maro lol
well i hope we get to see more jai and bani than jai and pia. very intresting concept tho.....
i think this one will be a good one!!
update soon luv 😉
m.c.😛

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#44

First of all, my sincere apology that I've not replied after the first part....😛

this is a complete different kind of story and penned with the excellence you presented in Vivah, very promising story line, I'd really love to read more of it...

Now the wait begins...update..update...update...

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#45

Hey Maro

once again wonderful update,very well written.the dilenma of JW was penned down very well,he seems to stuck at a crossroad.looking forward to the next part. 😊

preet 😳

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Divya Harji

@divya_123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#46

just read both parts .. and both were really damn guud 👏

so will jai marry bani and take the responsibility of his father's business? hmm i guess yes 😉

continue soon dear

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#47

jai marry Bani!
pia is useless anyways
plus finifh your father's dying wish
please continue soon

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 18 years ago

#48

Maro I read both the parts and completely enjoyed a unqiue storyline.

Am so glad that both father and son tried to clear up their differences. The best was when UW requested Jai to take care of Walia Industries and marry Bani. In giving this ultimatum, he made Jai call up his GFN girlfriend who opted to break off all ties with him 👏

I can see Jai taking responsibility of Walia Industries..I also want him to marry Bani and accept her